Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144

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Crazypiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: LubSha
Hi Piya,
Great update. Emotional to the core. But you handled it really well. Nothing as I expected, but no complaints. You kept it real, because in real life it would be really hard for a girl to rescue herself from such cruel people. Hats off, you for taking the story forward in such a way. 👏
Now Shravan's true love will help Sumo recover from the most dreadful nightmare.

Lubna.

In the show itself sumo was much more bold and bindas but she was unable to fought with aditya..
So how can sumo in humtum save herself from goons
Exactly thats the reality

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Crazypiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
Emotional update. .but was it really necessary to make Suman suffer physical abuse. ..don't get me wrong. But it was a sweet story to begin with. ...so just found this too dark to digest
I know you wanted to keep it real. ..

I know but just think from the pov of reality.. Is this possible that she could have escape without this?
I mean in tge real show sumo was much more bold but was unable to fight with adtitya

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Crazypiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: srividyasubbu1
Piya. You really wound the story well keeping the essance of Sumans character intact. That is she is a fighter. She is indeed one. Yes as you have said, we need to wait how Shravan and the entire family will hold up together and give strength to Suman in this difficult situation. Waiting for Sunday now.
And not the least HAPPY NEW YEAR n hope you enjoyed your vacation
- Sri

Thank u dear
Sumo is a real fighter .. Not only by her actions
But she has presence of mind

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Posted: 8 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806
ress!! finally an update

UNRESS

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piya di rula diya aapne toh😭

when suman was being abused, the way you defined the details, it made me shiver in terror

and when doctor informed them that she remembers only shravan due to the trauma

and how only after shravan told her she stretched her arm forward for the shot

the way she engulfed him and the scenes when shravan broke down

i pity them

the man and wife they had just transformed into,

the sacred bond of marriage they entered in,

they didnt receive a bed of roses instead were greeted by big sharp thorns

not only suman has traumatized physically but also emotionally and however cliche it sounds but shravan has to pull her out of the darkness currently adorning her.

and i cordially trust him to do so.

so all hopes to shravan, and he'll be the needed hope for humaari sumo😭

do update soon

love

arpita

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Crazypiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta
Hello di and happy new year to you hope u enjoy ur vacation and sachi m IF open krne se pehle aapke ff k bare m ho soch rhi thi and I got ur pm in my inbox
And now about ff it's really too good every scene u described very well and I'm sure Koi Marne wala nhi tha and sumo ko only shrvn p trust h ye to Pata tha esa hona hi tha and ha di plz next update thodi jaldi... Plz bcz I want to know how sumo teach how shrvn comfort her and how sumo try to comfort herself in front of family members

Thenk uu harshita
And happy new year to u too.. I thnk i will update on saunday or on monday

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Reeba shukla

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Posted: 8 years ago

#856

It was damn emotional you make me cry this time... Cant imagine her condition... Very nicely described the situation baby.. I m speechless..

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Reeba shukla

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Posted: 8 years ago

#857

Happy new year dear..i forgot to wish you..have a rocking year ahead.

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#858

Happy New Year Piya... I have gotten so connected to your story that I getting intuitions.. my phone indicator was beeping at 4 am and I felt it must be an update for hum tum and it was so sleep can take a back seat today!!

Amazing update god Sumo can fight. Wrestler status justified today!

But the entire chapter was very emotional.. it would be i teresting to see how Shravan handles all the aspects of her recovery.. physical, emotional, mental...

Kudos to the writer who makes us all wait so so eagerly for every update.

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Zoya Zenin

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Posted: 8 years ago

#859

Hi di.
Awesoma and very emotional update. Poor suman had to suffer a lot😭😭😭. can't wait for next update. It's eager to see now how does shravan handle his SUMO, and helps her come out of trauma.. Plz update soon. Can't wait til sunday. PLZ😊😊😊

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deepoceaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#860

Hello priyaji

Firstly wish u happy new year dear

After reading update really feel like cry...sumo suffer from so much pain, physically and emotionally .. she doesn't recongnized others. She only trust on shravan. She is very much attached to shravan even in het subconscious mind. He has only capable to pull out her from big trauma...

Such mai Aap ne to saal ke suriwat mai hi rula diya... just hope next update mai thoda happy moment mile.

Update soon