Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 27

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Posted: 8 years ago
ShraMan moments...
so beautifully penned...
finally Shravan confessed ...
... egarly waiting how sumo will react...
"Kamal jiii aur bahadur kaka".😆
Thank you so much for the wonderful updates.
thanx for PM...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
😃 Beautiful wednesday, Guess why, i got an update here ...😳
What ??? come again ?? kamalji and bahadur kaka ?? you, crazy...piya ? this reply is ... Oh my God !!! 😆😆 how did u manage to think this way...can this be more perfect to extend their lukachupi game for some more time ? Hatsoff !!
Ok now, nirmala also in the game, she got to know shravan's feelings as well. Superb...I liked her choice of Gift !! bahuuu 😳

Shravan is so lost in sumo and his blushings that he didn't realise sumo didn't buy anything for her. I felt bad for her. she couldn't get out of that hatred words shravan spilled on her😭 what will she do when she gets to know the gift shravan bought her from London !😉

I love Overprotective shravan👍🏼 at the train, at the party...shravan being all naughty.🤪

Shravan's mentor !! so to him he was talking about suman at the meeting...he stole shravan's chance to dance with sumo...ha ha ha 😆

Finally Adi is here. am feeling little okay because you told he is not dangerous. So i relaxed and enjoyed jealous shravan😉 (what is that adi telling sumo to think about, just curious like shravan)

Here and there shravan was indicating his changed attidute , he called her family, he is being sweet with her, but still this stupid girl didn't understand ( not her mistake though)...finally he CONFESSED😲🥳


Wow ... all the dialogues !! kal thak whatever she thought he did...kal thak whatever he thought he didn't realize...I just LOVE LOVE LOVE them all.👏
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Again, cliff hanger, friend...what would be her reply...I know something exciting just like "bahadur kaka"😛...

Now that she knew his feelings, how would she handle any shravan and adi tashn ...yayay ... Eagerly waiting for the beach romance,...
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome... m at office ryt nw but cant wait till evening so just read the updated part ... finally sharavan confess his love... now hope suman will accept it and they got married without any huddles ... just love sharman ... after arnav and khushi I like this couple sooo much ... hope they will come back with dhamakaydar story
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Posted: 8 years ago
So indirect confession tho ho gaya👏a very nice chapter!!! wonderfully penned one!!!
And thanks for the PM!!! Waiting for the next update!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing "qki kal tk Mai tumse pyaar Ni kerta tha stupid" soo cute This chapter is really awesome.. Waiting for Sumo's confession
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res
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Unres

Part 8 & 9

Hiii Piyaa..🤗
firstly m damn damn damn sorry...srsly sorry yar for the delay i was hell busy n still hav hell lot to read n unres
i wud hav unressed it yesterday but my family was like nhi tum haray sath monoply kahlogi n say noo to ur phone..i cudnt deny thm...n i got free bt 2:45am...yaa n by tht time i was all 🥱
shoo shorryy...

Finally coming to upii...
haahh...Piyaaa OMG!!!
u hav some kind of a magic in ur hands..itni bindass update..oohh tht was totally Shramanliciously delicious...😳

Sumo was completly drown in his thoughts..but is she mad..why doz she always says tht shez not apt for him..mana shez an orphan but is ka mtlb ya tu nhi kay usski khud ki koi pahchaan nhi..shez a succcessful woman aur ussy apnay app ko Shravan sy kam bulkul nhi samajhna chahiyay..she is perfectly apt for him..!!!
She is so concered bout him..ussy doodh pilaa kar hi mani😆

best thing raat mein akele asmaan ko dekhna...aur phr God say batein kar..na na shikayatein karna...wakai iss trip nay tu iski zindagi ki kaya hi palat dii😆
wht she slep outside...aur sonay pay suhaga Shravan nay door hi lock kar dea..wah gi wah..
he was damn scared for her..awwh..thy hugged eachother
she was scared to death...n shravan was consoling her...lovely..❤️..he kissed her also...usakay arman bahar nikal rahay hain...tht whole part was ❤️ the way he consoled her n stayed with her..n sumo asked him to stay with her pleading eyes..thy slept together..WOWww
imagining tht scene was sheer pleasure..it made a huge huge huge grin appear on my face😃
he asked her...did she really wanted him to go...n she replied by holding his arm more tightly...yar tht was soo heartwarming...thy both are meant for eachother..

i had my mouth wide open when i read Ramanth witnessed all of tht...OH GOD!!!
woh tu shram say pani pani ho gaya ho ga..😆
Woowww..yar tht part was allawww...mindblowing..both of thm sleeping cuddling eachother..Shravan almost over her☺️
in kay itnay intamite seen ki Ramnath nay watt laga di...🤣
thy both must be hell embaraced...poor Shraman...ek traff he was praising bout her beauty aur doosri tarf she was continously pleading him to leave her...bas Bade papa ka naam hi lea kay sahab zaday chukana ho gaay🤣
"Dharti maa plzz mujhe panah de do"🤣

Part 9

Shravan n Ramnath's convo was👍🏼
Aditiya kahan say aa gaya..????phirse kabab mein hadiii
Shravan ko ab hosh mein anay ki zarrorat hai aur chukana rahnay ki bhi..
Shravan n almost indirectly shaadi kay lea haan kar hi dii hai...dhula tu raazi hai bas dulhan ko manana baki hai..phir tu shaadi hai bhai shaadi hai...magar larki itni aisani say na manay wali hai...
wah wah wah wah...mein tu shaera ban gae😆
Sumo ki bhi dhaak dhaak shuru...bas woh bhi jald smjh jaay
Sumo ki lip bitting habit ab shravan hii door kar sakta hai...par kabb???

Shraman going to the beach together...mtlb aur tafree..
finalyy he has started flusterring her...teasy Shravan is soo much fun...
tht kitchen encounter was❤️
their convo...fantastic.
"aur kon tum say pyaar karta hai??"..is ka jawab wo khud dhood rahi hai..
OMG!!! he was about to kiss her...par humein phir baba gi ka thulu mila...😕
arey bhai kab kiss karay ga..uss say zaida tu mjhy jaldi hai😆
"Main tumhe mujhse door kahin nahin jaane doonga samjhi tum..?"awwhh
"I want you to find that name who loves you .. May be sabse zyada "..
is kay baad tu i was on cloud nine..uratay urtay puhanch gae..😳
he wanted to see her in blue..blue is my fav too..m soo obsessed with blue.

beach ka whole scene was phenomenal...romantic..lovely loved it..
he helped her out finding a dress..woah..thn made her feel comfy..kya banda hai..mjhy bhi chahiyay aisa hi..😳
he wnated to knw the answer...ab dekho kya jawab milta hai..
Piya All in all the update was stupendous loved it to core..
shraman's romance..❤️
the whole upiii made my day..ihav a 200watt bright smile on my face😃
thanks for tht😉
love yaa dear🤗
was a wonderful update!!

PS: part 10 unres on page 39😳
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
What yaar cliffhanger...
I was sitting on edge of the couch & reading ... & written to be continued... I was waiting for his confession uff ... I Have to wait for next chap... 😳

I liked their beach romance... Hugging each other... Sumo playing with waves... Shravan ka naughty nazar kahan kahan ja raha tha... Uff this man... 😉

Sumo still didn't forget what Shravan's words that she is outsider... Munda maafi manga fir bhi Sumo couldn't forget poor baby... 😭

Aditya's entry bang bang... 🥳

Sharmana khatam huwa to chalein... Ufff jealousy just spoke... 😡

I liked Nirmala ho sake to mere liye bahu leke aana... 😉

Shravan's confession... Kyounki kal tak mein tum se pyaar nehin kar tha tha... 🤪 pyaar to tha hamesha se lekin ehsaas kal huwa kutub minar ko...


Will Sumo accept his proposal... I hope Shravan will make her realise that she also love him... ❤️

Update next part soon
Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing!!
Love confession from shravan side wow!!!!
"Mujhse door nahin jana kahan tha na maine...superb shravan or tum use door jane bhi nhi doge ...right
Or ho sake to mere liye bahu leke aana ohhh aj pehli bar muje nirmala achi lag rhi h
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And the moment of the day the love confession of shravan Kyun ki kal tak main tumse pyaar nahi karta tha u stupid
Thank God shravan ne to apna piyar confess kr dia show ki tarah to nhi
Ab bas sumo ko bhi ehsaas ho jae
Plz try to update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
😭 last me to rule hi diya bilkul...
That kal tak thing killed me😭
Kaha se sikha itna acha likhana???
This was way tooo too gud ..
You leave me speechless after every part..
And half confession??😆😆 ha ha something new to hear..but liked it..hope you complete it in the next part..
Good going girl...
Hope you update soon bcoz har part k baad intezaar kab tak ham karenge bhala vali feeling ati h🤣
So update soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

thank u dear for loving it ... actulay even i was not sure what will be suman"s ans...
by the way i loved yor wriiting.. u can say a big fan of yours..


O God srsly?? My fan?? Ha ha thanks a lot 🥳 party today!!

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