Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 28

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hiii Piya...again sorrry..my bad!!šŸ˜•
haaah...Piya u are fab srsly..reading ur upii was Bliss!!
tht beach scene OMG..lovely...
magar Suman??is she insane..like really kamal n bahadur ji...???
thy were having such a cutoo dutoo lovely moment together n she just ruined it all...pagal hai..Shravan was so rite iss kay pass dimagh nhi..šŸ˜†
Shraman moments wereā¤ļø
Nanimumma..awwwhhā¤ļø..Nirmala n Shravanz convo wasšŸ‘šŸ¼
ussy tu bas apni bahu chahiyay..😃
Shravan ka overprotective over caring..over over subkuch...wala version is fantastic..he can never see her in trouble or tears...yar yaa banda mjhy pagal karday ga..🤪
koi kissi ssay wakai itni mohabbat kar sakta hai???

tht song..Kaun mera...thts my fav too...thoz lyrics soo deep n heart touching..

awwhh she didnt got sumthing for her..aur Shravan nay bhi ya baat note nhi ki..how bad..i hope he recovers his mistake n gift her sumthing really nice soon..hana piya..ho ga na aisa??

She still cudnt get over his harsh words..šŸ˜’..i hope Shravan soon amends everything with her..aur usska dil jeet lay..specially us duffer Adi say pahlay..kabab mein hadi kahein ka😔
yar issy jaldi say bhagao...

He just introduced her as his family...chalo kuch akal aee..banda line par aa hi gaya..dekho agay kya karta hai..bs kuch karbar na karay..

"those tips are not gonna be usefull for u ...as u are not bold enough to follow their steps..
OMG!! after reading tht i was 🤣..literally..
such a tease..šŸ˜†..was a nice onešŸ˜‰

bas now this Adi is getting on my nerves...yar bhakao issy...
Shravan ki jealousy ki koi haddh nhi hogi tht time..jalkukra..šŸ˜†

Piyaa...šŸ¤—šŸ¤—..tons for u dear..
ending was ā¤ļø..i have no words to praise it...speechless..
thoz romantic moments..Shravan confession..oolalaa..meray tu room ka temp hi bar gaya..
the way he described her n his emotions attached with her...fabalous...
ek dum pure feelings..
thoz dialogues marvalous..u nailed it to core n i loved it to core..

Piya Piya Piya...thnks alot for such a lovely upii..u r gemā¤ļø
my love..my cutie pie..love u yar..
n sowwii once again..nxt time i'll try my best to be on time..šŸ˜‰
abhi bacha smjh kar maaf kar do *puppy eyes*

BTW did u see the live chat session...i missed it😭😭
i was damn busy..n it slipped out of my mind..mjhy raat kay 12 bajay yaad aya aur pura ghar sar par utha lea..😭
so were u there..??if were thndo tell me kya kya hoa..😃

love ušŸ¤—
aur phir say cliff hanger..


Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mind blowing update like always finally shrvn told sumo that he love her now let's see what will sumo reaction and trip with adi majja to ab or bhi jada ayega
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Posted: 8 years ago
awessme update...cant wait to see sumo's reaction
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Posted: 8 years ago

I know I'm the last.Sorry for being late .just came from school.
Coming to the update it's just awesome.you slayed it. Lovely shraman moments. loved jal kukda shravan. Waiting for more cute scenes.
Btw thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow
shravan confessed
superb
cannot wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww ...lovely update...pls post soon...n thanx for the pm😊
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piya kya kru mai tera? ? tu hi bta...speechless kr dia h mujhe...u know wat had read it yesterday but u know until or unless I wont analyse each n everything I wont feel satisfied ...so read it again now ;) amazing tha yar. .n thanks sweety for liking my analysis... the way u started with from shravu ka pov was so amazing u know...how he was feeling n the dialog kya pyar krogi mujhse wow lovely... n then she felt awkward ...asked him to leave her...her cheeks blushing like red tomato...the effect of him on her ...wooowww... n then bahadur kaka n kamal ji ...hilarious it was ..rofl n then bhook lagi ...God this girl... n shopping time... whoa how he felt her nervousness that time when she was holding her dress on road n how he said change krlo gown must have dried...hayo rabba Mai to Mar jawan :-p n shopping time when nirmu called amazing convo between mother n future dil n mother n son n how nirmu said bahu chahiye...lol... n blushing shravu...haye blush v krte h Jr malhotra ji ;) n while showing dresses to ramu it was hilarious red shirt ...hehe...n then she didn't buy anything for herself...the realization did hit him very badly n the convo after that was too touchy...she still was feeling bad about his behaviour ... n then party time ...God mesmerized by her beauty n in metro ...aww protective shravu...those kids were lucky that he didnt hit them...;) how happy she got... n then at the entry gate...lawyers party sb ladenge n case fight krnge...lol...she's family...whoa she was shocked...n then his smirk you wont ever be able to do that after following her gaze at the couple who were making out...rofl...n at party mentor of shravu...sir a big hug for u...adha kam to u did...he's lucky ...well he's...;) n shocked sumo...n during dance time ...jio sir k naam p chance mar le ;) n adi ...arrhghh ate k sth started flirting...God this Guy...hate him to core... n shravu ka expression lol.. again angry young man n then formality towards chipku hihi n scared sumo... n then we've to go...I've to make a call...n then she can stay with me ...nooo ..whoaa..great man. .n sumo psycho h kya cal krna tha kr v ni ra ;) lol...n in room ...whoa it was something...God how he said pyar ni krta tha pehle ..loved it but piya half m y u stopped ...nooo u should've completed that sweety...pls update next part soon...waiting anxiously sweety.. thanks for the pm my dear...a big tight hug for u :) muuaahh...n ha pls "joining hands" adi ko keep away as much as u can...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update..
Waiting for next part..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

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Lovely Update Thank You
I hate this Aditya
Waiting for more romance
once again thank you


thank u dear
hey no need to hate aditya ... he is a nice guy.. actually sumo hai hii itni pyaari ke sabko usse pyaar ho jata hai
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

amazing..šŸ‘...phirse cliff hanger..😭aur padhna tha mereko...😭the chappy was just awesome...šŸ¤—'kal tak...'lines were just too good.😃...aab jaldi se dhamakedaar romance wala next part daalo...ab raha nahi ja raha...n thanks for the pm


hahah cliff hanger ka maza hii kuchh aur hai..
ab isse bhi long chapp kaise likhhhu...??


awww thanks for liking me my kal tak idea

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