Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 25

Originally posted by: trayee

u dnt knw yaar...how talenyd u r...sprv story...sprv romantic ...
its one of my bestest shraman story...still in the stry dreamland...shravan & suman...wow finally...
take a bow dear...
update soon...cant wait fr suman 's ans...

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

So there has to be a witness...

Pushkar ... Ramnath Malhotra... n now the entire beach...😳

Whenever he corners suman...it's like SRK saying,,aur paas...aur pass! ☺️

Urs is a beautiful . ..prefect blend of emotions n good pace!!

Update soonish !

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Matlab tumhe aur abhilasha ko koi problem hai kya hamesha pahadh pe lejakar chodh dete ho.😉😭.

Lekin anyways dono chapters were bohot amazing the. Kaash aisa ho jata ki ram shravan ko serial main bhi Yehi kehta😕. "Go and woo her". Waah! "Malhotra house main tumse koi aur bhi pyaar karta hai". Subhan Allah!

Great update. Chalo maine yahan unress kar diya, jao mera Epilougue bhi read karo.

Originally posted by: Sunain

Ressi res

sorry Piya wont be able to unres any time soon...buzy like a bee thez days...so sorry😳

but will surely try to read n unres as soon as possible😉

Originally posted by: dhanyata

You can't imagine the happiness I felt when received the pm for this update, and after seeing its 2 part then poocho mat😳

I already mentioned am impressed with shravan's possesive dialogue at the end of part 7. Almost he confessed he can't see anyone else opposite sumo. But I wondered how could sumo take this now. Because she can't believe so easily, it will only confuse her. But u gave another agreeable reason in sumo's monologue. She is thinking shravan told that "becoz he knew that she is their responsibility..." convincing answer.👏

Its total romantic update. made me crazy🤪. Shravan sumo in the sofa...eghhh!!! There is a great development now. Ramnath told shravan about his wish, shravan agreed that he wanted sumo. Wowww !! So now janab got complete permission from his family to get his girl for himself. What can be more adorable ?!🥳Kitchen part, beach, at the shop all are so so so so so lovable. I liked when shravan jumped when he heard about aditya and sumo... he he he... also he asked a question to sumo, about another member loving her, wat would she answer now I hope though she might develop liking towards him, she won't express. Because she still believes shravan is of different level, also she may not want to trouble malhotra's with her love interest. Have to wait and see.

Another favourite dialogue of mine, '"Main tumhe mujhse door kahin nahin jaane doonga samjhi tum..?"'😛

When i was reading the buying sarong part, I thought
If it was sumo of the show, she might have shouted, yelled, scolded shravan for trying to pay her bill for the sarong, make him cry and then go and get some costly gifts from Aditya, and say to herself " Shravan ki sumo" he he he hah ha ha. (*levels of frustration, u know*). Another reason to love your writing.

Lastly, good that you are introducing new twists. (may be to avoid diabetics with the sweetness😉, though we are happy to be diabetic) but after EDKV name aditya itself gives me awkward feelings 😭 . Anyways you said this is coming with new twists, so never mind.

☺️❤️

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Originally posted by: sumi017

Oh God..like your name you are crazy...why did you stop like this...am waiting for ur next update...

Jokes apart an amazing piece of work. The way you write,I am ble to visualize shraman which is testing my patience. How I wish EDKV S2 come based on this

Originally posted by: vimikrao

No words... Amazing...

Slept together on the couch cuddling each other... Oh gosh I thought Ramanath will get heart attack after seeing them together... But he is strong ...

Shravan & Sumo on the beach... Enjoying.!...

Cliff hanger again... I wanted to hear what Sumo will says to his questions... Ok will wait till next chap...

Update soon...

Can't wait to know Sumo's answer...

Originally posted by: amlavs

Amazing yar..

U r an amazing writer..kudos to u..

Loved update..

Shravan almost confessed...

So now Mr.Hotty Malhothra wants Ms.Sexy Tiwari nice..

Cliff hanger...omg wants to know wat ll sumo tells him..

Oh plz can't handle so bad things..aft hearing Adityas name.

Plz update soon.thx for pm...

LavSriya..

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

piya my dear to be honest ab to words km pdre tarif krne ko tmhari...my darling u are just amazing...I'm at verge of loss of words u know...I read both parts two times...I was smiling like a maniac u know...u just give me a different vibe of shraman...I just love u for this a lot...wish I could give u a tight hug for this :) now about chapter...kya kahu from the beginning to end, it was so beautiful... how sumo was thinking about him, trying to find out wats exactly cooking in his mind n then his girlfriends n the dialog pta ni kiske sath kya kya kia hoga ...lol...hilarious one... then to his room...how she said she'll keep milk on table n he didn't say a word...n then sumo engrossed in beautiful thoughts n then the door banging thing...shravu k to color hi ud gye the face k..n sumo God she was panting like hell...felt very bad at that part :( then his rapid fire of questions n then sumo threw herself in his arms...wow n he consoled her...loved that part...it was so beautiful... n then how she innocently said upr jaoge n his reply tmhe aisi halat m chodkr loved it...n then the way they slept...wow ...like it was safest place for her n for him, he wont ever leave her as if she's his life which is true I know ;) n then ramu ki entry n reaction .. rofl koi v aise hi shocked hoga ...n then sumo woke up from noise n she was hell shocked n ramu was smirking...lol n how hard sumo was trying to release herself from his grip but hell, he was only tightening it ..lol.. n then pleading sumo n shravu ka reply ur so beautiful...God as it she's his wife...hilarious it was according to situation... n then shocked shravu ...acha hua ramu called him for a talk...n ramu kaise socha nirmu ko btyga to hyper ho jygi ...lol... n shravu ka reaction Maine kchni kia ...Mai use hate ni krta like ..wah ji good going. ..n then how ramu brought up about sumo k parents n his promise to them n then manpreet k bete adi (piya pls keep this ass out of shraman's life..this Guy was badly on my nerves n still is...hate him a lot...pls dear its a request as u gave warning he's going to be the kabab ka haddi so pls just throw him out as fast as u can or better keep his chapter closed...m just bloody done with this Guy...I want shraman moments mostly or only u can say...pls piya its a humble request dear..) n how ramu said ki ass adi likes her maybe (well who bloody cares about this ass) ...tm chaho to mai suman ki shadi adi se n ispe shravu ka reaction whoa thanks God he blurred it out...loved his surprised reaction ...lol...looks so cute in such situations...n happy ramu jio ...n shravu k I love u p ramu ka reply don't waste it on me...lol...ache jare ramu kaka .. n it was hilarious for me jb shravu said Mai janta hu papa ..n ramu was like kisne tmhe btaya n suman to janti v ni is bare m ...n shravu ka reply Mai v ek lawyer hu ...I was like whoa...really ...tb why didn't you understand the relation between pushman (sumo n pushkie) ...how he said pushkie n varun bhaia to ni to bacha Mai n man he was blushing... n then sumo ka thought dharti maa mujhe panah de do...rofl... n shravu to kch zyada hi fast nikla papa k lie tea n mere lie breakfast ...n one thing I forgot to mention in last part too. , how he was saying stop biting that...stop doing that...lol...as if he'll kiss her deeply...(waiting for this vaise badly ;) ) ...n kitchen m shravu k words mujhpe v dhyan de do...m hungry n sumo ka reply yeah n she lied that she had breakfast...n then in kitchen 3 things...I'm habituated to do my works...ur family not worker...n everyone loves u...maybe someone more than everyone ...m how sumo took name of everyone except him n how he cornered her n asked for an answer n on stairs too, how he cornered her... n how frequently he said that I too wanted to visit beach as I'll be free in half n hour n sumo ka expression lol...worth watching...n then his request wear blue n in conference hall I wish she'd have said gf n would be wife but alas friend :( n he was pointing towards her but lied...badmash.. n how he was staring her from corner of his eyes...n then how he said will be back n she too left n I knew it he'll search for her n will be hell angry on her...bina kaand kchni ho skta ...n how he didn't let her complete her sentence n said khud glti kro n ro n Mai tmhe ni chodke jaunga...n held her hand n at beach sumo's words stop looking at them like that n his reply wat ...hilarious it was n how he said u too wear bikini n she said m not like ur gf's n his reply I didnt have any...she must be dancing in joy...n then in water, how he was mesmerized by her beauty...held her from falling n second time kitna badmash hai how he let her fall...n then awkwardness of sumo how very well he understood...n shravu look at me n don't scream I knew it he would carry her in bridal style n yay he did...n how sumo said sb dkhre n his reply its not India...no one cares ...seriously sumo no one cares so enjoy...n then he took her to bikini shop lol...n his reaction after seeing her...so sexy...badmash ho gya hai ladka ;) n then how he felt her awkwardness n opened her hairs...wow good going Mr malhotra...n then again sb dkhre...n his reply ni koini dkhra n before she could answer you ended...this is not fair piya :( at least reply to likh deti :-p waiting for next part badly...pls update soon...I just love long updates ...n thanks for pm...waiting for next pm...loved it...it was so so beautiful...n sorry for such a long comment I guess kch zyada hi long ho gya maybe more than ur update ;( update soon sweety...waiting for more shraman moments...m glad finally they're opening up to each other ..:)

Originally posted by: bmegha

hi piya

u know u r a really a good writer. you have a written very good love story i can't explain you how much i waited for your update. u know whenever i read a update of your story i continuously repeat 3 to 4 times of a update. i have no words or lack of words to explain how good you are as writer i think you have fabulously written your story and u known whenever i read your chapter regarding sumo and shravan chemistry that moment i felt butterflies in my stomach. so please update soon the story and thank you for giving such beautiful story.

and have a niece day😃😊