Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
pushkar varun & suman...suprv bond...jst loved it..ur cncpt was jst sooo much unique...
shravan's shockd xpresion...wow...
bt nt more rona dhona...now pls give sm romance...jst luk part 4...mistakenly romance...bliss...
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Posted: 9 years ago
So everything is revealed...!! šŸ‘
Pushman's relation...!! šŸ‘šŸ¼
Phone call between Anuj & Sumo...!! šŸ¤—
Her parents death phobia... Which is haunting her all the time she got remembered again everything courtesy Shravan...😭

Shravan's feeling for Sumo which he is hiding behind his ego... & now came infront of Pushkar... Which he had doubt on them always.. & he is so happy for his bhai & Sumo...!!! 🄳

So CD khand was done by Pushkar... That truth also should revealed infont of Shravan otherwise this tedha Shravan again somewhat find reason to insult her... My poor baby can't go through this trauma again.. She will be shattered... šŸ˜•

Thank God shravan bach gaya. Nehin to Sumo Shravan ko bhi bhai bana deti... Such mein behosh ho jata... LOL 🤣

Now everything is clear tedha Shravan came to know everything & he is very guilty for his behaviour... 🤪

But what is this Sumo is shifting to Tiwari killa... Uff ab Shravan kya hoga he can't stay away from her... 😭

As of now everything is clear between Shraman no going back now... Now only love love love between our love birds...!! ā¤ļø

Want to read only romance & passionate love ... Uff can't come out from this hangover... ā¤ļø

Waiting for next chap!šŸ‘

Thank you for PM dear !!

Update soon



Edited by Vinayarao - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
fantabulous in short šŸ‘.since there is so much to praise...eagerly waiting for the romance
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is a nice story. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
absolutely brilliant
totally loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Piyaaa... šŸ¤—
As usaual...chappy was phenomenal šŸ‘
Shravan ko kis bewakof nay lawyer ki degree di
Really loved the study room scene...Ramanth n Sumo relation is ā¤ļø
Poor Ramnath...sumo nat bhi sahi daba kar rakha hai šŸ˜†
Shravan ki tu hum kya kahein...mjhy tu lagta hai uss ki lawyer ki degree fake hai.. 😔 kuch zyaada hi dimagh chalata hai..woh bhi fazoliat mein..wht he did was 🄺
Sumo ko itna suna dea...gussa my foot..yaa kya baat hoe bhala..I soo wished to slap him...tightly as he deserves lots n lots 😔 bewakoof insaan.!!
Sumo's past..aww 😭 😭 😭...poor baby suffered hell alot..her agony made me 😭
Shravan got hell worried for her...n Pushkar ki lawyer bazz nazrein wakai kamal ki hain.. 😃
Finally he confessed half of his feelings...waiting for his complte romantic wala confession..i hope its not faraway.. 😳
Moreover Finally his MU got cleared...stupid.!!
He must be at cloud nine to knw tht "his sumo" n pushkar r just besties..
N sumo wants to leave...so cuz of him..
Now i can wait for Sumo ko manao n apology mission...its goona be funn hell lot of fun [:D/]
Tedra shravan..bye bye...Romance guru..Hi Hi.. 😃
Shraman romance cuming han...Wowww... 🄳
Plz piya sumo ko manao mission easy nhi hona chahiaay..sumo shudnt forgive him soon..thora nakhray bhi honay chahiyay aur gussa bhi...Sumo style han šŸ˜‰
cant wait for nxt part...plzz updte soon
Love yaaā¤ļø
really loved it ws brilliantly written.!!! šŸ‘
N thnks for the PM dear 😃
Edited by Sunain - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
piya thanks for the pm sweetie...rula dia tmne...it was too emotional you know...tears started rolling down my eyes... from beginning...vandana se vandy ...lol...it was funny...n how pushkie n sumo were teasing him n whoa sumo is amazing...how she arranged a second meaning...amazing ...n ramu k office m sumo ki entry God really only she could enter like this n only has got right to scold him...n sumo couldn't complete her sentence coz of shravu n ramu couldn't complete coz of sumo...kya bat h...papa is afraid of sumo n sump is afraid of beta...lol... n sumo is lovely...she asked varun to keep the family always together...itne k baad v the dumb ass shravu ko smjhni aya ... eavesdropping krra tha sumo ki...just entered n thud ...apna nonsense lecture start...it was limitless...it was height...how could he say something like this...pushkie ko cheat tk to at least okay tha but parents...wat the bloody need was to drag them n kaise bola you might be happy that ur parents die...Chi...how could he stoop that low...never expected n sumo ko kch bolne v ni dia ... hated him a lot here... n thanks God sumo ko kchni hua. God after reading about her condition tears just brimmed up ... she's suffering from dark phobia... thanks God at least he felt guilty that he shouldn't have said that...n that too that he's jealous of pushkie when he thinks of them together... n flashback oho pushkie ur a darling yar ... n bhaidooj...I knew it ...just knew it sumo considers pushkie as bhai n she was talking to anuj on phone... kara lia shravu beta ne apna beda garg ...gadha kahin ka ...obviously he had to feel dizzy after getting shock... now he's aware of reality ...ab kya karega ...guilt m doob n sorry I love you bol ... I think ab sumo is not afraid of shravu anymore...she hates him now... that's y she said ki tiwari killa chali jygi ... n its gonna be interesting how they'd come up knowing that they're in love... yar piya sach me ab romance...bht hate ki this side of shravu ...I love him but hated this side ...ab romance ayga tb maza ayga. . n truth revealtion finally ho gya...so ab or maza...waiting for next pm dear. . :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Fari21

Woah Dude! this is awesome! i loved how shravan realized his feeling... and that part where he came to knw that the person whom she was talking with was Anuj! N pushkar n varun are her brothers! Shravan bach gaya teeke se! LOL!!! I want her to stay in MM! please dont let her go! By the way M Faryal! Piya... update it soon! Pleaseee


Hi faryal
Thank you dear
Its my pleasure tht you liked it... Sending u a buddy req if possible accept it
Piyali
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: amlavs

Omg... superb update..

Loved it..
Shravan shravan wat u did??? His jealousy took made him to do wat he shouldn't do...
Loved Hosp scene..
So it was pushkar who unknowingly changed the wrong CD??
When shravan came to know this truth too wat he ll do ???
Now sumo wants to move to tiwari house..
It's interesting..
Plz continue soon..
Expecting ur pm soon..
Thx.,.
LavSriya..


ThAnk u shriya
Lets see what will the khadoos do now.. M not gonna stretch the mu like original show... Thought of something else.. Planning to start write it .. Hope to post it soon
Luv
Piya
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shaggy8

Amazing... especially bhai dooj part... and thanks for the pm


Hahaha
Shravan ko jhatka dena jo tha.. Working on the nxt part lets see what can i give u
Piya

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