Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 63

Originally posted by: evaviego

Finally I read it..

Marvellous Update Zoya...🤗 As Always...😉

Loved it to the core.❤️❤️❤️

I'm so glad you did🥳

God... You wrote such a long one that it could not be posted in one piece.. woooaahhh 😆😆😆

Ya bro! New record 🤣

Each and every dialogue was PERFECT. You are an amazing writer yaar..

Why thank you😛

I loved everything in the update..

The way Shravan and Sumo descended the stairs as a couple hand in hand.. awww .

Ekdam feel aa gayi na!

The way he confronted everyone and forgave his parents.. this guy is something .. and then he gave the credit to sumo.. man.. so humble he is..😊

Humbleness is his middle name, not that's hot, third name is humble😆

i liked how he understood that his mom may not feel comfortable to stay with his father.. totally logical.. cvs ne toh kachra kar dia tha iska..

CVs toh kamal pe kamal kar rahe the!

Pushkar's tooth paste wali smile always gives me a reason to smile.😊😊😊

The way he held sumo and felt guilty for his doings and then sumo stopping him in order to save his izzat and announcing that he wanted to marry her again...and of course this line "as far as my wife is awaiting me at the mandap, I can get married in a pair of tracks at a Mandir" ... yaaar its just ❤️❤️❤️

Haina!!!

when nanaji said he was taking sumo along... bechara shravan... itna toh nahi socha tha usne..😆😆😆

Itne aage ki woh kabhi sochta hi nahi tha😆 In his head two adults, married, who could have the nerve to propose such a thing.. He underestimated our very own Slayster Nanaji😆

them callng each other chasmish motu lambu .. I love it...

Those endearments would have been such a treat na to watch!

Pout becoming Poutier ...😆 yeh big shot lawyer sumo ke sath kuch aur he ban jaata hai.. and I really like it..😳

He's back to being a kid again! And there is something insanely loving about a 6'4" hot shot lawyer being a kid

Oh God.. Shravan is so damn desperate to get married...😆😆😆

Usse control nahi hota🤣

PDA @ TK was khatarnaak...🥳 He said Maine kaat liya to maamiji...🤣

🤣

Shravan Rocks Mamiji Shocks🤣

Faking back pain to spend some time with her...😊😊😊

But sumo being Sumo... everything must be spelt out to her.. kuch nahi samajhti jhalli ...😉

Pakka ek din heart attack kara kar hi chodegi...😆

Pakke se!

"Arey chup kar meri maa! Yeh pagal mere hi hisse likhi thi!" ... yeah... made exclusively for you ...😛

Custom made😉

Besharam Nalayak Jhoote Aadmi!... I found this very cute..

Yey!!

So shravan realized what he said to adi was wrong whatsoever were the circumstances and decided to ask for forgiveness... and sumo also asking for forgiveness for taking him for granted and realizing his value and that he is gem of a person... Superbly written... and much need realisation 😊

Clean slate is a necessity na...

Finally Shravan aur Memory Box ka milan toh hua... 😎

Muh dikhayi ho hi gayi!😆

Shravan : Man-child.. hahahaa... yeah he is such a baby when it comes to her...

The way they sleep in each others arms , cuddling and kissing... goals yaar.❤️

Ekdam big time golas! ❤️

You made them dance on Kaho na pyaar hai... wow... they had to... bachpan ki itni yaadein jo judi hai is gaane se...

Ji haan

their full on filmy chat before the wedding was so LIT..

I always loved the ease of their camaraderie😳

Yo... Finally dono ki shadi ho gayi... poore taur tareeke se.. saare riwaazo ke sath.. dil khush ho gaya Zoya...😆

Mera bhi!!

Aap ki nazrooon ne samjha so perfectly goes here...👍🏼

Thank you!

Desperately waiting for the next one bro..

Me too... having a minor writer's block atm.. Let's hope I can get over it soon!

I don't usually make such long comments.. but this SS did something to me...

Hahaha...

Thank you for writing this alternate ending..👏👏👏 , and fulfilling our chote mote dreams which the show failed to fulfil..

You're always welcome hon!

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Absolutely loved it...❤️

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

WHOA! That was a long update.

Was wasn't it😛

So Shravan decided to give them another chance. Sweet!

Yeh, dil ki jagah bande ke pass duniya hai😆 Too big!

Aww! Poor guy had to stay away from his "newlywed" wife.😆Loved his antics. But he kinda made up for it, and how!😆

That ShraMan-Mami encounter had me in splits!! Poor lady! I can imagine where she dropped her jaw.🤣Jawaan ladka hai, pyaar karta hai☺️That line was so cheesy!☺️

That's cause Mamiji would always marao cheesy AF lines😆 But it's true! Hai jawan, hai khoon garam aur karta hai pyaar☺️

Loved the shirt-swelling scenario. It was too hilarious!!😆

I always imagined them to be goofing around even when turned on🤣

Yay!! The memory box is here. It was such an emotional conversation. Heartwarming indeed!😳

Glad!!!

"Kal aaonga Sumo, tumhe hamesha ke liye apne saath le jaane..."This line was classic!👏Loved the way Sumo kept sending him pictures of her jewelry and not herself, that kept him waiting and wanting more!

Haina! Line was cheesy again, but it was love! Imagine Namik saying it with conviction 🤪

So finally they are married! YAY!!🥳Super excited!!

Me too!!

Highly entertaining update! Updates, I mean.😆

Shukriya!

Thanks for the PM.

You're welcome!

Cheers!

Nuts

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Zoyi.. 🤗

Ranju my love🤗
What an update.. 👏
Damn long but superb..

Shukriya!
U r awesome Zoyi...❤️

So are you hon❤️
Family scene lovely...
Shravan and and his pouts and his talks..aww..so cute..

Maza aa jata pouty Namik
Am not important or needy so u r not taking me with u aww. So good Zoyi.. 😳

Yey
Pushkar teasing 😆
Then comes marriage fix date poor maami heart attack nhi aaya great..katta and then maami comments and shra I bite her..omg .besharam shra but awesome scene..just amazing 😳

Mami ki lag gayi vaat dil mera 🥳 haan!
Haye shra ko back pain and uska baad ka ShraMan scene..stupid sumo shra heart attack aaya hai tumhe..lol..Zoyi jaan legi kya...itna mast scene.. ❤️

Nahi ya, jaan bohot important hai teri! 🤗
Then memory box so sweet and beautiful scene al those memories and letlers and cards..beautiful 👏

Glad!
Marriage functions..haldi mehndi superb... 👏

Thank you!
Fabulous update Zoyi...everything was perfect...
Thank you so very much hon!
Waiting for epilogue..
Hope I won't keep you waiting for long..
Continue soon..

Thnx for pm dear... 🤗

You're welcome!!

Originally posted by: Joyness

Zoya...tooo good...hope you keep writing such looong updates...awesome just loved it👏...sorry for late reply...was busy with work...you have nailed it...and so wanted the cvs to give us such a beautiful wedding but alas...koi baat nahi was so pleased to read your write up...waiting for the SR...update

😳

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu

Res

I'll read tomorrow :-)

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Firstly Am very sorry for being so late...very busy week n weakness yet not over

It's alright hon! No issues!😛

Secondly I'm not going to comment on depth of chapter as it was somthing I can only feel ...and truly it's great feeling...amazing I'm loving it .

Oh my! Kya baat keh di hai aap ne!❤️

Zoya u have absolutely brilliant mind

Thank you hon!

You have written a fantastic story for us n have given your precious time for writing it. I'm so thankful to u for giving beautiful memory .

You're welcome! Time and effort is no issues at all... Dil tha, kar diya😳

Loads of love🤗

Loads of love back!

Originally posted by: sapphire3

86 pages 🤪
Ab Dilli door nahi hai 😉

Originally posted by: orion23

Prii🤣

Pagal😆

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Tareef ke liye shukriya 😆