Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 61

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Ress zoyee!🤗

N honestly u n Bella just rocked! 🤣

Originally posted by: orion23

Mrina🤗

I'm working on it..

Should be up by weekend😃

Diwali gift

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Main bhi 😳

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Absolutely wonderful chapter, dear! 👏

Thank you so much Lara!!

Shravan missing Sumo was cute. 😳 Loved that he was a raging bull while missing his wife.

Indeed a bull!

The romance in different scenarios, the mami catching them in scandalous situation and Shravan's bold talk - it was hot and hilarious at the same time.

Haina! I had no plans of anyone coming in to disturb them, while writing it just popped and it kind of stuck, hence.

Most of all I loved the mystery box opening scene. Finally! And it was a thing neglected disappointedly in the show. I'm glad you included it. ❤️ Shravan's emotions - it was heart touching when he read the letter.

I'm glad I could do justice!

And then there was the much awaited wedding in the end. 🤗

Weddings are so amazing na! Especially when you have waited like crazy😆

Loved it all.

And oh, the most imp thing - I'm terribly happy that you didn't unite Ramnath and Nirmala here. They're better off without each other. It's best that they learn to try being friendly and patient with each other before anything more than that happens. You can't just click fingers and mend broken relationships. So, thanks a lot Zoya, for this bit the most. 👍🏼

Thank you Lara!! I couldn't handle the milaap honestly, it was too much to handle!

Love you!

Love you too!

Will be waiting for the giant epilogue. Tada!

Me too!

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Aai shappat!

Mumbaikar nikla andar ka😆

That has to be the best of Zoya till now.

Aye haye! Mahi 🤗

If I were to make a film on your Fantasies, this would be the Grand one in the trailer like those Movie highlights! Fantabulously Mind boggling and blowing! Like I'm struggling with my limited vocabulary to appreciate what you've written!

Ooi ma! Movie and all!!

Pushpa Returns! Yipeee!😎🤣

She never left! To me that was the best time on the show, can't get over it!

Ooparwaale!🤣

And what justification which Shravan gave to accept Ramu back. This has to be the most accurate, the most convincing of all! He's Peacing out! Finally uff. I liked that⭐️

Glad you did!

And faking that back pain, my Gawd!

Slyster Malhotra!

Shravan ko heart attack hua hai!🤣

Ek din karva ke hi chodegi Sumo😆

Chashmish, buddhu. That feels like bliss.😳

It does indeed!

I've heard that Aapki Nazaron ne samjha

It's a masterpiece, much like yours.

Aww man! You're comparing me to Sanam right now 🤪

This comment falls too short, I know. Ive hardly written anything, mostly coz I don't recall what I read in a nutshell. #MemoryWoes 🤓

I enjoy reading but cannot come back to write what all I loved coz that means writing something longer than what you've written.

Do I even make sense?

Yes yes you do! I understand your bhavnas!

Okay so the point is I've bookmarked this. Ill read it Aaram se in my small coming up vacation, again.

Oh yey!!!!

And I'll re read it like Zara Si Dosti Karle.

Arey yaar! Dil le tu!

PS : I was wondering what inspiration I'll have to write after the show ended but I've got two awesome posts full of admiration and worth learning from.😎

Ohhh!! I love you!!!

Cheers

Love

Admiration

Awe

Charan Sparsh

Take a bow

Sab kuch ke liye 🤗

PPS : Please thoda chota likho Malik. I forget what to praise!😆

I know you! Aap bas aa gaye, bahar aa gayi...

Unressed before 12. Now imagine my speed!😉

Aj mai late hui reply mai.. Sowii

Oh yeah, see I forgot. I lub you!🤗

I know😎 I lub you too❤️

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

That was super fluff! Aaye haaye! 🤗

Chalo good night 😆

Originally posted by: memories_im

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Loved the update Zoya! The scene was adorable where Shravan was sulking on Sumo leaving for her home. The way you presented the memory box was perfection. I loved how awed Shravan was while going through the contents of the box. One thing I really wanted to watch in the show was how the memory box would reveal in front of Shravan. Namik would have nailed those scenes. You penned it beautifully. Really looking forward to the epilogue. :)