Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 62

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Posted: 8 years ago

Finally I read it..

Marvellous Update Zoya...🤗 As Always...😉

Loved it to the core.❤️❤️❤️

God... You wrote such a long one that it could not be posted in one piece.. woooaahhh 😆😆😆

Each and every dialogue was PERFECT. You are an amazing writer yaar..

I loved everything in the update..

The way Shravan and Sumo descended the stairs as a couple hand in hand.. awww .

The way he confronted everyone and forgave his parents.. this guy is something .. and then he gave the credit to sumo.. man.. so humble he is..😊

i liked how he understood that his mom may not feel comfortable to stay with his father.. totally logical.. cvs ne toh kachra kar dia tha iska..

Pushkar's tooth paste wali smile always gives me a reason to smile.😊😊😊

The way he held sumo and felt guilty for his doings and then sumo stopping him in order to save his izzat and announcing that he wanted to marry her again...and of course this line "as far as my wife is awaiting me at the mandap, I can get married in a pair of tracks at a Mandir" ... yaaar its just ❤️❤️❤️

when nanaji said he was taking sumo along... bechara shravan... itna toh nahi socha tha usne..😆😆😆

them callng each other chasmish motu lambu .. I love it...

Pout becoming Poutier ...😆 yeh big shot lawyer sumo ke sath kuch aur he ban jaata hai.. and I really like it..😳

Oh God.. Shravan is so damn desperate to get married...😆😆😆

PDA @ TK was khatarnaak...🥳 He said Maine kaat liya to maamiji...🤣

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Faking back pain to spend some time with her...😊😊😊

But sumo being Sumo... everything must be spelt out to her.. kuch nahi samajhti jhalli ...😉

Pakka ek din heart attack kara kar hi chodegi...😆

"Arey chup kar meri maa! Yeh pagal mere hi hisse likhi thi!" ... yeah... made exclusively for you ...😛

Besharam Nalayak Jhoote Aadmi!... I found this very cute..

So shravan realized what he said to adi was wrong whatsoever were the circumstances and decided to ask for forgiveness... and sumo also asking for forgiveness for taking him for granted and realizing his value and that he is gem of a person... Superbly written... and much need realisation 😊

Finally Shravan aur Memory Box ka milan toh hua... 😎

Shravan : Man-child.. hahahaa... yeah he is such a baby when it comes to her...

The way they sleep in each others arms , cuddling and kissing... goals yaar.❤️

You made them dance on Kaho na pyaar hai... wow... they had to... bachpan ki itni yaadein jo judi hai is gaane se...

their full on filmy chat before the wedding was so LIT..

Yo... Finally dono ki shadi ho gayi... poore taur tareeke se.. saare riwaazo ke sath.. dil khush ho gaya Zoya...😆

Aap ki nazrooon ne samjha so perfectly goes here...👍🏼

Desperately waiting for the next one bro..

I don't usually make such long comments.. but this SS did something to me...

Thank you for writing this alternate ending..👏👏👏 , and fulfilling our chote mote dreams which the show failed to fulfil..

Edited by evaviego - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Absolutely loved it...❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
WHOA! That was a long update.
So Shravan decided to give them another chance. Sweet!

Aww! Poor guy had to stay away from his "newlywed" wife.😆Loved his antics. But he kinda made up for it, and how!😆
That ShraMan-Mami encounter had me in splits!! Poor lady! I can imagine where she dropped her jaw.🤣Jawaan ladka hai, pyaar karta hai☺️That line was so cheesy!☺️

Loved the shirt-swelling scenario. It was too hilarious!!😆

Yay!! The memory box is here. It was such an emotional conversation. Heartwarming indeed!😳

"Kal aaonga Sumo, tumhe hamesha ke liye apne saath le jaane..."This line was classic!👏Loved the way Sumo kept sending him pictures of her jewelry and not herself, that kept him waiting and wanting more!

So finally they are married! YAY!!🥳Super excited!!

Highly entertaining update! Updates, I mean.😆

Thanks for the PM.

Cheers!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoyi.. 🤗
What an update.. 👏
Damn long but superb..
U r awesome Zoyi...❤️
Family scene lovely...
Shravan and and his pouts and his talks..aww..so cute..
Am not important or needy so u r not taking me with u aww. So good Zoyi.. 😳
Pushkar teasing 😆
Then comes marriage fix date poor maami heart attack nhi aaya great..katta and then maami comments and shra I bite her..omg .besharam shra but awesome scene..just amazing 😳
Haye shra ko back pain and uska baad ka ShraMan scene..stupid sumo shra heart attack aaya hai tumhe..lol..Zoyi jaan legi kya...itna mast scene.. ❤️
Then memory box so sweet and beautiful scene al those memories and letlers and cards..beautiful 👏
Marriage functions..haldi mehndi superb... 👏
Fabulous update Zoyi...everything was perfect...

Waiting for epilogue..

Continue soon..

Thnx for pm dear... 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya...tooo good...hope you keep writing such looong updates...awesome just loved it👏...sorry for late reply...was busy with work...you have nailed it...and so wanted the cvs to give us such a beautiful wedding but alas...koi baat nahi was so pleased to read your write up...waiting for the SR...update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you so much guys!!
I'll reply individually tomorrow 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
I can't see it on 67 hon 😆
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Nevermind I found it on 68😃
Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

I can't see it on 67 hon 😆
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Nevermind I found it on 68😃

U r right so sorry bahot din se page 67 open tha na isliye mistake ho gyi I was searching par mummy se dant pad gyi isi chakkar me abhi ki ab tak mobile me ghusi hui ho ..sorry haan
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu

U r right so sorry bahot din se page 67 open tha na isliye mistake ho gyi I was searching par mummy se dant pad gyi isi chakkar me abhi ki ab tak mobile me ghusi hui ho ..sorry haan

Arey re!
Daant pad gayi..
Soweiii.
And it's okay ya.. mujhe mil gaya tha. ..😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
hey very nice both part ... I want special night full of romance... but before some sharat to bunti hai to try some sharatpan ...

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