Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 65

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Roshni2015

Zoya,

Rosh 🤗
Firstly apologies for being so late.. Fever got the better of me...
Arey ya! hope you feel better soon...
Coming to the update now...
Oh my freaking God... Thats what I call a super se bhi upar update.. You were fab yaar!!!
Thank you so much hon!!!
I could imagine every scene playing out.. SS being there for each other, SS courtship, their PDA, Pushky back in his colours, the impatient Shravan, the true SS marriage.. You incorporated all... Special mention to the memories box n the following scene though.. It was intense, it was so beautifully penned... I loved it... Well I loved the whole of it..
Aww yey! shukriya navazish 😛
Your updates gave me some peace n brought some much needed smiles on a fever induced bad day...
I'm glad I could help
Love you yaar!! And you know that already..
Yes I do! I love you too, and I'm sure you know that already!
Hugs to you.. 🤗
Cheers!!

@bold
Thank you so much hon!
🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kya iraada hai aapka Zoya ji ? SOO many feels

"I would gladly go back into the hell, cause it's familiar, it's home."
I think we all have been in a situation where we had to choose between forgiving and moving on or keep grudges, this explains it so well.

"Kya aap dono mujhe waqt de sakte hai?"
This is why I love Shravan Malhotra, despite all the hurt, he is ASKING for time, he wants to get better and he wants to forgive and move on and I think that's just beautiful

The scene in their room was sooo cute, ugh what would I do to get a glimpse of that. Shravan is such a cutie when he is in love and Sumo is no less. Sigh, I miss them :( (Bad me jaa Sony)

Preeti Bhoj Part 2. YES, I am in !
BESHARAM SHRAVAN I love, I approve, I wanted more of him, he is so carefree, Manju mami ki to almost death hogaye hogi

THE swelling part , I AM OUT, I AM DEAD

#Besharmikiintehahogaye

"Tum na bas apni nazar se khud ko dekhte ho Shravan, iss liye sirf galatian dikhti hai tumko, tumhari keemat tum nahi jaante. Tum doosron ki zindagi mai kya ehmeyat rakhte ho, jis din yeh jaan gaye na, guroor aa jayega tumko khud par."
Saleha approves !
FAVVV
THis scene was a much needed one ! This is so ShraMan, the whole memory box part!
Mere bacche shaadi kar rahe hain, khushi ke aansoon. I actually think that if the show was still on, the last two weeks would be about ShraMan's marriage with all the rituals, I have a feeling about that and it makes me sad, but hey life happens ( I just complained and assured myself at the same time, I am one weird kid )

"Kal aaonga Sumo, tumhe hamesha ke liye apne saath le jaane..."
Aja aja tera hi intezaar hai

How cute can they get ? The way they were sending each other updates, it was so ShraMan like, waiting for the Maha epilogue!

If it's not obvious till now then let me say it I LOVE IT, this was LIT
and HUGS to you bara wala
Edited by KitkitMkb - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Kya iraada hai aapka Zoya ji ? SOO many feels
Irada toh nek hi hai humara😆
"I would gladly go back into the hell, cause it's familiar, it's home."
I think we all have been in a situation where we had to choose between forgiving and moving on or keep grudges, this explains it so well.

I agree, we all have...
"Kya aap dono mujhe waqt de sakte hai?"
This is why I love Shravan Malhotra, despite all the hurt, he is ASKING for time, he wants to get better and he wants to forgive and move on and I think that's just beautiful
It is! He was one hell of a character... His heart, I can't even...❤️
The scene in their room was sooo cute, ugh what would I do to get a glimpse of that. Shravan is such a cutie when he is in love and Sumo is no less. Sigh, I miss them :( (Bad me jaa Sony)
Don't worry, sony's shows' trps are showing 😆
Preeti Bhoj Part 2. YES, I am in !
BESHARAM SHRAVAN I love, I approve, I wanted more of him, he is so carefree, Manju mami ki to almost death hogaye hogi
Mar hi jaati toh better tha🤣
THE swelling part , I AM OUT, I AM DEAD
Don't die, please don't die😆
#Besharmikiintehahogaye
Inteha ki toh ab shuruaat hui hai😳
"Tum na bas apni nazar se khud ko dekhte ho Shravan, iss liye sirf galatian dikhti hai tumko, tumhari keemat tum nahi jaante. Tum doosron ki zindagi mai kya ehmeyat rakhte ho, jis din yeh jaan gaye na, guroor aa jayega tumko khud par."
Saleha approves !
Zoya is glad!
FAVVV
THis scene was a much needed one ! This is so ShraMan, the whole memory box part!
Mere bacche shaadi kar rahe hain, khushi ke aansoon. I actually think that if the show was still on, the last two weeks would be about ShraMan's marriage with all the rituals, I have a feeling about that and it makes me sad, but hey life happens ( I just complained and assured myself at the same time, I am one weird kid )
We all are weird when it comes down to that😆
"Kal aaonga Sumo, tumhe hamesha ke liye apne saath le jaane..."
Aja aja tera hi intezaar hai
Kasam se!
How cute can they get ? The way they were sending each other updates, it was so ShraMan like, waiting for the Maha epilogue!
It's in the pipelines😃
If it's not obvious till now then let me say it I LOVE IT, this was LIT
Thank you!
and HUGS to you bara wala
Hugs back!!!

@Bold
Thank you so much Saleha🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23


<font color="#3366cc">@Bold</font>
<font color="#3366cc">Thank you so much Saleha🤗</font>


Much Love ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Saleha Much Love back ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unresed on page 68. Agr is baar nhi hota to 😡 Aur maine beginning mein itne saare emoticons daale the par sirf ek aaya
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Unresed on page 68. Agr is baar nhi hota to 😡 Aur maine beginning mein itne saare emoticons daale the par sirf ek aaya

Koi nahi Resh!
I understand your bhavnaas🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Res.

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Unres.
☺️
Mere paas bolne ko sachme kuch v nhi. Tu na perfection ko v complex de rhi hai. This is MINDBOGGLINGLY PERFECT.

Perfection complex😆
The song ❤️ I got teary eyed when ShraMan descended the stairs hand in hand letting everyone know that they will be together in whatever is to come. That was ❤️
Haina!
The haemorrhage has certainly done something to Shravan ha. Bnda kya khul gya hai. Not that anyone's complaining ☺️
Bande ka ab aur khulna baaki hai 🤪
Aur finally meri entry v ho gyi 😳 And OMFG! Shravan put me in his pocket *dead*
Oh yeh! I had promised to unite you with mehboob ke naam😆
But seriously the way you write ShraMan scenes, it's just perfect. Be it intense, comedy, nok-jhok. And their wedding Those messages ❤️ One more wish fulfilled 🤗
Thank you so much hon!!
The mamiji scene was 🤣 Kaash hum hote waha ☺️
Haye kaash!
You know you are just breaking your own record of awesomeness. Thanks a lot for giving us this. OUR EDKV ❤️
Am I really? Shukriya! And you're welcome!
And you just dedicated this awesomeness to us 🤗 I just can't thank you enough for this.
You don't have to hon! You don't...
Love ya yaar. Love ya loads and loads 🤗
Love you too❤️
I feel extrmly blessed
Makes two!

@bold
Resh🤗
Thank you so much!
Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Unressed on Pg-75 FINALLY!

Thank you so much psycho!
Mai kal reply karti laptop pe se!
😛
Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya 😃 Finally I read the 3rd chapter 😃 I loved everything about it, so well you have written dear 👏 It was beautiful chapter, the way the sumo slowly started to understand shrvn and gave him time to heal, she is there as his sangini in the right sense...The way Ramu spilled everything to Shrvn was good, was waiting for that moment, shrvn has a golden heart and he knows how to forgive everyone.

The first scene was beautiful, he felt so peaceful sleeping on her lap and she was there for him he felt it instantly...You are really good at writing such scenes yaar, Pushku was right both of them didn't deserve shrvn at all. You made all the scenes very realistic 👏 I totally enjoyed reading it...Will be back with the next one later ...Till then take care.
Edited by pearl100 - 8 years ago

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