Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 33

Originally posted by: Flibbertigibbet

Tu zinda hai abhi? Mujhe laga feels wali death hi ho gayi hogi teri😆

Nai. Ab mai bolu kya? AAAQIR KYAA BOLU MAIII?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?! Yaar is se achha kaleje mei khanjar utaardeteen aapn?

Swag hai hi aaisa humara🤣 Pata nahi chala aur khanjar utar gaya!

I dont know if i'm mad at you or i want to give you the biggest hug ever!

Hug hi kar le bro!

Pehle toh,

Thanks for the prior warning. I sat in my room alone as i read this.

You're welcome😎

AFREEN AFREEEN.

I FLIPPED THE f**k OUT. i shit you not i jumped up from my and went "ooohhh!!!!!!"

I legit walked around rigid with my hands fisted by mi aides as i walked around in circles on the carpet in my room all hyped!

Hahahahah! Tujhe toh pata hi hai how much I love that song!

"Tum meri zindagi ka markaz ho."

That line is everything. That confession is everything. That shravan malhotra is everything.

That he got later, he will get it better in the next!

This made me want to get married. You my friend have achieved what a lot haven't XD

I'm serious. This made me want a husband. Shravan malhotra, no less. <3

#IHAVESERIOUSHOTS #FORGOALSMALHOTRA

Dude it made me want a husband and I'm downright "Mujhe shadi nahi karni hai"😆 Let's go find our Shravan Malhotra bro!

Happy shravan is the best shravan.

Agreed!

Sad shravan is the worst for us.

My heart hurt so much. Ouch. #hayyee #merekalejekatukhdhaa

Ab hona toh tha hi😆

Damnn sumo slapped adi into next life! He deserved it!

YAASS QUEEN STAND UP FOR YOUR MAN.

Absolutely! He deserves it!

Pushkar the precious snowflake is love. A love with beauiful hands. XD

Haha! You and his hands🤣

Why is shravan so precious? I want him.

That ending was so *dreamy eyed*

It's not the end yet!

More afreeen?!?!?!

It's caled the circle of writing, bringing it back to the writers vision😳

*clutches heart and prays to god to help survive i am still not married my Goals is waiting*

Amen dude!

Zoyu, i had told you i was already dazed and stoned. I AM NEXT LEVEL TRIPPING ON THIS OKAY. <3

I expected exactly that form you!

This was splendid. It felt like a sugar rush! I havent had anything sugar in the past 2 days. Thanks for breaking my streak bro -_-

Always man!

I loved it to no end. This is bookmarked. I love this. I dont know what else to say aince my comment feels like a post of its own now.

It does! And I love it!

Originally posted by: Adeeba.Ayub

I am an emotional mess right now.
I need time.
Will be back.
Much love <3

@zo yup it's my longest comment till date
Agli bar isse bhi bada wala comment milega coz I'm sure next update gonna be rocking 😉
N thank you for a fabulous maha episode 🤗

Originally posted by: Malika

OMG Zoya!! Damn I am teary as heck reading this!

You had been warned 😆

This wasnt what I was expecting. But this was so what I wanted from the show. A full blown Ramnath-Nirmala revelation that would have changed Shravan's life n ShraMan's equation forever. And provided that you did it at his vulnerable best, both emotionally and physically, it made so much impact 💔 With each word you wrote I could imagine Namik acting all those scenes, speaking all those lines, I can still feel the pain with which Shravan would have braced all this. I could so imagine him falling on the floor outta pain. LIke I feel damned after reading this man...Coz all I want is to see this on screen. Like NOW!
Well that makes two! If only...

And Shravan My poor baby 😭 This was literally one of the best tributes to his pain...1000 times better than what we got in real. The whole confrontation scene you wrote it so beautifully I am in awe of each line as if I can see it all play right in front of me.

Thank you Mallika!

So a big thanku to u Zoya for this alternate ending...it certainly is a very beautiful culmination to many incomplete chapters. Please come up with the next part soon and heres hoping we will have some real good romance now 😳😃

We will have some amazing romance, you have my word. But weekend tak, I'm a little tied up.. But who know, if I find an hour here and another there, maybe earlier😆

Originally posted by: pearl100

Zoya 👏 absolutely brilliant chapter (2) what a beautiful description of shrvn's sufferings for 12+ long years how well you penned it down...Each and every chapter is superb dear, how I wish we had some time to see this in the show, but I;m super glad that you have written for us. Loved reading your chapter, keep writing, will be back again after reading the 3rd chapter...Till then take care.

Originally posted by: sapphire3

@zo yup it's my longest comment till date
Agli bar isse bhi bada wala comment milega coz I'm sure next update gonna be rocking 😉
N thank you for a fabulous maha episode 🤗

I have too many emotions.

Originally posted by: Flibbertigibbet

I have too many emotions.

I want to sing ed sheeran right now.

Who's stopping you bro!

First 2 lines for you: oh i'm a mess right now. Inside out.

Hahaha!

Next lines for shravan: see the flames inside my eyes, they burn so bright i wanna feel your love! <3

Oye! Kya baat!

Our? Shravan mera hai. Dost ki amanat mei qayanat nai karte. :P

Accha! Ab aaisa na!🤣 Shravan pe toh jange chidd jaaye😆 Tope chal jaaye😉 Khanjar utar jaaye☺️

Yeah we're on the same page about shadi XD

Feels

And ofcourse. Hands are important. His hands are so gorgeous <3

That they are indeed!

Haha aapka post tha hi aaisa bombaard merse raha nai gaya :P

Bola kaun kuch andar rakhne, sab likh daalneka bindaas😎

What a delightful update!!
"When the night is darkest, can the dawn be far away?"

Brilliant beginning!! Sumo's introspection over their past and present was amazing. Itna amazing ki thoda out of character laga. Bandi itna soch leti toh itna raita(scratch that , daal) na phailta!! 😆

But really glad that she felt every bit of his pain.

And the love that was resonating through their eyes waa finally translated into words. Shravan was a sweetheart with his assurances and love.

But Ramu had to interrupt. Gadha kahi ka!! 😡

The ultimate reveal was powerful with Ramu baring it all. I dont care what type of people, Ramu-Niru are, but I find Ramu a better parent.

And Daal devi had the gall to act all snooty and saint-like asking Shravan to come stay with him.

Loved the way Shravan responded to both. Even Sumo had to bear the brunt of her actions /inactions. But I loved how despaired she was when Ramu was revealing the truth. That redeemed her so much, only Shravan and his pain mattered to her.

Now Shravan's cerebral haemmoerage was Pure Bollywood and I love intense drama.

🤢 Is Nirmala for real. Her one son was dyinng because of her other son and yet she was so detaches. Useless woman!

Ramu ka bhi blame game on hai!! 😡

Loved the fiery Sumo. Aditya ki band bajani hai isne!! ⭐️

Shravan was well and finally they talked!!

The finale was perfect with perfect balance of romance, love, guilt; grief.
Shraman were live. Sumo acted as his strength and anchor.

Lovely story!!