ShraMan FF: Contradiction & Reality - Chap 16 on P. 31 & A/N on P.31 - Page 7

So So needed Confrontation with Nirmala. every dialogue was on point. well written👏 feeling content to have seen a whole chapter dedicated to this much needed task. Khudos!!

Hey, dear the update was awesome Shravan & nirmala confrontation needed. 👏

Ah!! What a lovely write-up!!!! You have wonderfully brought out the changed attitude of ramnath which we could not witness in the show! well done 👏eagerly waiting for the next part!!!

Awesome update dear..
Nirmala and shra superb yr..
Ramnath finally realized his mistakes..
Nanu ask for ShraMan hand and that lines law degree waste, nanu add shra too.. 😆
Sumo worried for him..
Finally ShraMan rishta..
Update soonish..
Thnx for pm dear.. 😃

Awesome update... so glad that shravan made nirmala realize her mistakes Nd the pain he suffered... finally ramnath redemption track has started... beautifully written

Very well written dear...👏

Very good chap...!!

This was simply wow!! Brilliant!! 👏
Your story is one of the best interpretaion of Shravan and Suman. So perfectly balanced. You are hear to tell a tale withing hinging the scale in either's favour.

The confrontation was epic. He tries to play it cool but the rawness kept peeking.

His self admission that he cannot claim to love her anymore... The moment broke my heart.

Ramu is still so selfish . Grasping at straws and trying to shift the blame. Ah! The helplessness was catharitic!

Man! You excel in writing Suman. Such perfect edition balancing Suman,the individusl and Shravan ki Sumo.

The way her hackles raise when someone tries to harm Shravan was epic. Her worry was endearing.

Marriage... Hmmm...Ramu thinks he has landed a gift horse. But I doubt that Shraman would agree.

His guilt festers so does her wounds at the betrayal of friendship.

Looking forward to the next update.

finally an update from u...I was waiting for it eagerly...again it was amazing...loved the confrontation part between mother son...but hated nirmu a lot...inspire after knowing shravu loves sumo from more than a decade how could she still blamed him for all...I agree he was at fault but her Foster son had pissed him off till the end that he did it ...n bloody hell he was the one who was dying to know if there's something between shraman...really hated nirmu how she blamed her own son like he's the Foster one ...n one thing about which shravu was right watevr he said doesn't justify wat that bloody ass did...he could've asked her if he really loved her or else he could've called off the wedding after knowing the truth... he had said he sees his mother in sumo n molested her ..whoa...that was new to me...I never knew a person can do this to one whom he loves n respects the most... n shravu ka dialog 10 days ka pyar dikha but more than 11 years ka ni ...touched my heart badly...n how hurt he himself was that isn't sure if sumo would talk to him at least... finally that ramu got brain...if he'd have said no to the proposal I swear would've killed him ...and nanu as always most responsible n understanding person ever...n how sumo was waiting for him...wow... n one thing I loved the most in this is when shravu said we were always like this...we never needed anyone's permission ...only he has right to hurt her n if anyone would do that he'll have to face the shravan malhotra... loved it ..the way you portrayed their conversation n everything... we didn't get to see in serial all this...so its kind of ointment to our heart's ... thanks for the pm :) ...means a lot... have send u a buddy on that pm account... will start reading ur another ss ... amazing it was ...loved it...:)