ShraMan FF: Contradiction & Reality - Chap 16 on P. 31 & A/N on P.31

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anonymousanju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

n one more thing I forgot to mention ..the poem...God this Guy wrote it from his heart...every single word speaks his feelings, deep love for her...n as a mother nirmu couldn't understand it...hell... (if I wouldn't have wrote it down, this thought wouldn't have leave my head) ;)

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Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Woah man tht was outstanding..!!!
Beautifully penned❤️
really loved it...stupendous job dear..
made me bit emotional..khushi kay ansoo u knw 😛
waiting for the nxt part...
love yaa 🤗

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

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Aur.HajnalPM

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Add/buddy this account If you want me to PM you next time I update... 😳

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reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

I have no idea how could I possibly miss this beautiful piece of writing..but in a way it worked in my favor...read all the parts together..my tea turned cold...my breakfast was forgotten...all I was doing was trying to manage this huge lump that I had in my throat...got highly emotional...speechless..wordless..EKDV was such a beautiful story..and you understood the characters in such depth..kudos to you!!

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Akriti12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Amazing update dear..👏👏

really loved the way you picked up small but important elements of edkv like mami's reaction ,dabbu-sumo's relation..👍🏼

dabbu & sumo's bonding was so beautiful, his innocent queries were so genuine..😭

And finally our ShraMan's conversation is always bliss to read..your detailed writing especially ShraMan's convo always make me feel like i'm watching it..😊

Clif-hanger...why??????

waiting eagerly for next part , update soon..😊

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Safire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

A wonderful update after a pretty long time!!!!

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dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Wonderful update !! I like it here because shravan is talking with some sense, asking some very important questions to sumo. Hope she also tkes a step forward.. Much needed shraman dose... thank you 😊