ShraMan FF: Contradiction & Reality - Chap 16 on P. 31 & A/N on P.31

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

It was sooper

Shravan's caring... Sumo feeling afraid of last nights incident

Nanu was super... he didn't allow inside the room to bad mouth Manju...

Update soon

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Nice part

Confrontation!...!...

I would like to see Shraman's scene & romance...! ❤️

Update soon...!...

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Love your story. hope you continue

Edited by bworm - 8 years ago

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

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Aur.HajnalPM

@Aur.HajnalPM

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Add/buddy this account If you want me to PM you next time I update... 😳

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Oh!! You are fulfilling all my wishes with respect to the story of Shraman which we didn't get on the show. Appreciate your efforts and work. Good to see a changed and understanding ramnath. Already waiting for the next part.

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Thanks for the uodate.

Awesome . ..lovely read.

Wish the show had gone this route. makes sense if the title edkv...

Can't wait for next update

Please update fast.

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

The confration between Shravan And his mother was something I really wanted to see and you handled it so well, loved the dialogues and how Shravan's poem was used ! I wanted to hug him but I think Sumo is there for that ;)
Ramnath is feeling guilty and how, kudos to you for keeping the characterization as it was, the bond between him and Tiwari Ji is so well written !
Continue soon !

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Izza

@memories_im

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

This is what was needed to give a proper closure to Nirmala's story. You have immense talent as a writer. You are literally fulfilling all my wishes I had with respect to Shravan and Sumo's story. The way the marriage was imposed on them in the show seemed way too rushed. And then we never got to know what were they planning to do with the storyline. Please continue soon :) I am loving this story and all the characters!