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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: sapphire3

It is heartwrenching yet so beautiful !!!!
Start analysing the episodes
You are amazing !!

Thanks so much Prii!!
Analysing episodes haan?
Maybe someday, right now, we have a bunch of talented people doing that..
Someday...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully penned dear
I m at loss of words
shravan's plight has been beautifully described
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Beautiful and appropriate written for Shravan's plight
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 0Bella0

Beautifully penned dear

I m at loss of words
shravan's plight has been beautifully described
Thanks for the pm

Thanks so much Preetha!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Zoya yaar jhappi paa!!Every word of your's resonated deeply with the true *bewda* Shravan Malhotra whose pain is gnawing at him and killing him inch by inch with each passing day. In fact,he wouldn't even understand the reasons for why he is behaving as such but his feeling extremely lonely,helpless pricks my soul so adversely that I juz wanna pick him up and cry with him,hug him and tell him that all he needs to do is pour his heart out for once...Let it all out and let her know and find all the answers you need...Just you and Sumo..and no one else matters!!!Leave everything behind and go away far where no one could torment your souls for none can understand the two of you other than Sumo and Shravan. You two have suffered enough...Ab aur nahin!!!Ab aur nahin!!!!
Cheers,
Jassie
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jassie_17

Zoya yaar jhappi paa!!Every word of your's resonated deeply with the true *bewda* Shravan Malhotra whose pain is gnawing at him and killing him inch by inch with each passing day. In fact,he wouldn't even understand the reasons for why he is behaving as such but his feeling extremely lonely,helpless pricks my soul so adversely that I juz wanna pick him up and cry with him,hug him and tell him that all he needs to do is pour his heart out for once...Let it all out and let her know and find all the answers you need...Just you and Sumo..and no one else matters!!!Leave everything behind and go away far where no one could torment your souls for none can understand the two of you other than Sumo and Shravan. You two have suffered enough...Ab aur nahin!!!Ab aur nahin!!!!

Cheers,
Jassie

Word Jas!
Word!
I just want them to go far far away from all these people that only want to see them suffer.
Just the two of them and their love!
I hate to see him so, yesterday I just wanted to hug his pain out..
To Shravan I'd say, "kyun hai dabi si khwaishen dil mai tere bewajah
Jaake zara usse bol de chahta jisse tu raha"

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Posted: 8 years ago
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THANK YOU FOR THIS!
WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: potterginny

THANK YOU FOR THIS!
WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!
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Potter 🤗
Deal!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Beautiful Poem Zoya .. and your narrative of it ..its lovely .nice dear
To that one purpose. I beg
You, have mercy on me Lord
A sinful wretch distraught,
How can broken hearts afford
Every now and then he looks up to the skies begging for mercy. His only questions being, "Why me? Why always me?" Yesterday, his laugh when he fell was proof of the fact that he is tired. And now so helpless that he can do nothing but laugh at his loneliness. His heartbreak is such, no man can endure.

my heart goes to him when ever he says he is lonely..😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -rhythm-

Beautiful Poem Zoya .. and your narrative of it ..its lovely .nice dear

To that one purpose. I beg
You, have mercy on me Lord
A sinful wretch distraught,
How can broken hearts afford
Every now and then he looks up to the skies begging for mercy. His only questions being, "Why me? Why always me?" Yesterday, his laugh when he fell was proof of the fact that he is tired. And now so helpless that he can do nothing but laugh at his loneliness. His heartbreak is such, no man can endure.

my heart goes to him when ever he says he is lonely..😭

Thanks so much hon!
I know right!
It hurts to see him so..

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