The Wanderer - Shravan's plight

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys, yesterday's episode left me at a loss of words. It was so spellbinding and so well written. No words would suffice. A lot of you guys have done excellent analysis and hence I'm not delving into that territory. That's been taken care of. After watching yesterday's Shravan scene's there was a poem by Rumi that came to my mind. It's as though it's been written for Shravan. So I thought I'd share it here with a little interpretation as to why I feel it's got Shravan written all over it.




The Wanderer

It isn't aimlessly through streets
And bazaars that I wander
It's for a glimpse of her, my love
Intoxicated, I squander

My time like a vagabond
Weaving idle rings
Arounds my lover's haunts
And yet consciousness clings

To that one purpose. I beg
You, have mercy on me Lord
A sinful wretch distraught,
How can broken hearts afford

To be still? A million souls
Delved in this ocean's swell
Searching in their hearts
For the pearl inside the shell

So come my love, be kind to homme
A wanderer without a home.

Rumi
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Here's how I look at it:

It isn't aimlessly through streets
And bazaars that I wander
It's for a glimpse of her, my love
Intoxicated, I squander
Isn't this how Shravan is these days? Wandering aimlessly for one glimpse of Sumo, intoxicated always to see her as he loved her just once even if in his hallucinations... He is dying each moment to be with her like they were earlier.


My time like a vagabond
Weaving idle rings
Arounds my lover's haunts
And yet consciousness clings
He reminisces the times that were, he lives in the past for his semblance. His past comforts him, for where she lives he thrives. But his ego, his today does not let him. Try as he may, he cannot look past the happenings of today.


To that one purpose. I beg
You, have mercy on me Lord
A sinful wretch distraught,
How can broken hearts afford
Every now and then he looks up to the skies begging for mercy. His only questions being, "Why me? Why always me?" Yesterday, his laugh when he fell was proof of the fact that he is tired. And now so helpless that he can do nothing but laugh at his loneliness. His heartbreak is such, no man can endure.


To be still? A million souls
Delved in this ocean's swell
Searching in their hearts
For the pearl inside the shell
He spoke to his love, his best friend, the Sumo of yore. He clings to the only shard of light in his life, his love for her. He delves deeper into the ocean of life, of torment only to find that pearl that lights up his life, the love that keeps him alive.


So come my love, be kind to homme
A wanderer without a home.
His pleas to Sumo, to save him. For without her, he is homeless, for without her, he is aimless, for without her, he would all but die.

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I just had to get this out of my system. Since yesterday this is lingering in my mind. Do share your thoughts guys!
Cheers!

Companion piece, Sumo's Predicament link:
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Posted: 8 years ago
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RES
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Yaay!! I got the first place

This poem is so beautiful Zoya and so apt for Shravan❤️

And the way you related every stanza to Shravan's feelings and turmoil is perfect.

Its very heart-touching and painfully beautiful❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Zoya,
What an amazing poem. And how apt for Shravan...
You described the lines linking them to Shravan's state of mind so beautifully...
Yesterday again Shravan gave so many feels... I was overwhelmed...
Let me reiterate be it the real Shravan, tge tedha one or tbe seedha one... I love Shravan Malhotra.
And girl, you deserve a clap... 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Bingooo dear...u describe shravan state so beautifully
luv ur poem so much...well done Zoya
a clap for u...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This scorches my heart like the sun in the desert of the sahara *clutches heart*
Beautifully penned man. Imm bookmark this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It is heartwrenching yet so beautiful !!!!
Start analysing the episodes
You are amazing !!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy_vaish

RES

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UNRESSED

Yaay!! I got the first place

This poem is so beautiful Zoya and so apt for Shravan❤️

And the way you related every stanza to Shravan's feelings and turmoil is perfect.

Its very heart-touching and painfully beautiful❤️

You first
So cool that you're first on a poem for Shravan!
Thank you so much Vaish!!
🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roshni2015

Zoya,

What an amazing poem. And how apt for Shravan...
You described the lines linking them to Shravan's state of mind so beautifully...
Yesterday again Shravan gave so many feels... I was overwhelmed...
Let me reiterate be it the real Shravan, tge tedha one or tbe seedha one... I love Shravan Malhotra.
And girl, you deserve a clap... 👏

Agreed!
Shravan in any form, we love him!
Thank you so much hon!
😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: PALAK19

Bingooo dear...u describe shravan state so beautifully
luv ur poem so much...well done Zoya
a clap for u...

Thanks a lot Palak!!
😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Flibbertigibbet

This scorches my heart like the sun in the desert of the sahara *clutches heart*

Beautifully penned man. Imm bookmark this.

Drama Queen😆
Thanks bro!
Means a lot😛

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