ShraMan SS: Painful Revelations [A/N, Pg 29, Nov 1] (EDKV Continued)

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Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

U.ARE. BRILLIANT!!!👏 The story the emotions were so raw i found myself welling up😭 Why don't they just lock them in a room and let them talk ?! Wishful thinking..😳Was hooked right from the start...amazing narration👏 Pls update the next part like freaking soonish😃

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Prasanna_dhanu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Very Very Beautiful story, thank you

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Riya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Your writings never fail to make me cry and this one is a masterpiece. Trust me i had similar kind of thing in my head of how ramnath's truth ll be out and i so wish it happens like this. My heart was aching while reading it. So beautiful anjali. Its just WOW.

Thanku so much for this one. And thanku for taking out time from your busy schedule and writing so beautifully for us. No complains from my side.i ll be waiting patiently for wonderful writings. Lots of love❤️

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Sneha Chheda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Wow !!!!

Simply Wow

Loved it sooo much every part of it !!!!

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.SardiKiDhoop.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

I love this! Aha, I know what you mean - I once wrote a one-shot while sitting in the optometrist's office on my phone because the idea just wouldn't leave me and I had to write it, then and there.

Anyway, this was much needed and so well-depicted - I think we all just need for Shravan to tell Sumo he loves her and he's sorry and curl up with his head in her lap and we can live the rest of our lives in peace :') I really liked how you showed that confrontation with Ramnath as well - that's the thing about his father, he's under the misguided impression that whatever he's done, is right and it's for Shravan's happiness. And I liked the ambiguity in the ending because obviously in this one-shot it's too soon for anything yet, but the significant thing is that whatever happens next, they'll get through it together <3

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Swagster

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Read it even before your PM..

You're truly very gifted :))

I eagerly wait for your writings all the time

This one was just too good!! It's like you poured out all my feelings into the OS.. how I wish this happens in the show!! Can't take this dry spell phase anymore 😭

You're legit one of the only reasons of why I visit the forum these days!

Amazing!! Keep it going girl!! 😊❤️

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poppinss

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Lovely read anjali... could you also write a piece on how Shravan pampers Sumo and wins her bk?

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Pritha roy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Awsum story how I wish something like this happens in the show but alas dunno when that would happen
a part of me wanted Sumo to forgive Shravan as she too had committed mistakes
but I am glad she didn't
completely loved way u executed everything
Pls give some ideas to cvs too they badly need it

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Ammy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

I'll stand on my words that you're the best writer on the whole IF for me... and this is a masterpiece

What's with the storm!! Are you gonna write 2nd part of this OS!! if so I would wait until eternity😳

Imagining with the flow of your writing is so easy and now I so want to watch Shraman's confession asap... and you're so right in pointing put that confession of their love is just the start of their journey but there would be many storms ahead