ShraMan SS: Painful Revelations [A/N, Pg 29, Nov 1] (EDKV Continued) - Page 2

Wonderful... Well written thanks dear

Do you know, in my imagination, Shravan comes to know about everything EXACTLY like this?

Amazing!!! Such a simple and genuine way for Shravan to find out. How I Wish this is how it would go down in the show!

This is so beautifully written. I loved reading it. I don't mind reading it again and again. Talking is all that they need to do. A proper talk. It seems top difficult for them. Nice one Anjali. Someone please show this to the CVs and end our torture.

Wow it is a wonderful culmination to this angst fest.
Loved the way everything was reveals. Straight and simple, no heavy drama..
Your writing skills are amazing. The whole thing felt like pictorically unfolding right before my eyes.

I really liked that Suman finally let it all out.

Your Chachi was completely in character. Grant her wish and have Shraman move out.

Shravan finally confronted Papa the great.

His guilt was tormenting. Everything finally fell into place and woah! that breakdown was indeed something!
I am glad that you made it about both their mistakes rather than only his.

Loved the way she was his emotional support.

But it is the lull before the storm. They have got so much to deal with! They need to let it all out. It has been about Shravan's miseries for so long! Even if Suman is a forgiving person, how does she forgive something so big. His barbs have accumulated since a long long time. Inadvertant bitterness will seep through their relationship.

She may forgive, how does she forget? Please write a second part to this amazing piece of work. With them working towards a new future.

Impact of Shravan's words on Bachelor's party when he betrayed their friendship. And the memory box?
Please do write another part!!

Fantastic Anjali...!!!!
luv it frm first to last sentences i enjoyed so much
❤️

Wishing they can use this in their current track.,I am tearing up w little ,so beautifully portrayed...he does need her as he does too to heal each other and be each other's protection...and home..!!'''''cheers violetgirl..

Beautifully penned
Finally Shravan knows whole truth and is ready to rectify it
They have a long way to go and l'm sure they will overcome it together
It is really AMAZING piece of work

Amazing!!! Actually no words to describe. You write really well. The way your write, the reader just flows with the imagination, emotions. You describe it so well that I just imagine everything as it would have happened in front of my eyes. A secret wish that such a scene may be added by the CVs which would just bring out the acting in our superstars..

Anjali,