ShraMan SS: Painful Revelations [A/N, Pg 29, Nov 1] (EDKV Continued)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

it was soo beautiful...
...

Quote

Shikha Singhania

@Nimik

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Anjali this is just...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok u left me speechless again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow I am teary-eyed!!😭

Girl plz plz update coming home asap or I am going to murder both u n me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

U for not updating n me for enough of waiting!!!!!!!

Then we'll both go to heaven or hell n u will write with me reading!!😉

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

PprEDKV

@PprEDKV

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Ohhh man!!!!!

What is this...

I just loved it yaar... This is the only OS I loved it for the truth of Ramhoe... This is best..I love u for this.., virtual hug 🤗

U r amazing I just like all ur OS but this was the best.. Really.., bcoz it didn't show the guilt which everyone wanted to show.. This OS show the guilt that I wanted for shravan that's why I loved it really... U r awesome... Keep writing plz...

Thank u for this OS.. I hope CVs read ur OS👏👏

This Made my day., 👏

Quote

donottulip

@donottulip

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

I keep imagining all these scenarios , of how Shravan would find out about Suman's feelings , how all of their entangled emotions and thoughts would finally detangle , how they would confront each other , and what you wrote today is so close to how I want things to play out , right from him over hearing Sumo-Preethi talk to the confrontation to Shravan crying to Suman. This OS hit my heart so hard , I can't even begin to describe it.

It was BEAUTIFUL , I cried.❤️

Thank you so much for this !

Since tomorrow is my birthday (17th Sept ) , I am going to think of this as my birthday present :))

Quote

Adeeba

@Aadee04

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Its beautiful.
You write beautifully.
The way everything unfolded infront of Shravan.
Finally his lawyer brain connected the dots.
The way this lad broke down.
Suman's turmoil. Her heartache.

You, Anjali , make me love an understand them even more and with so much warmth.
Even in one of your OS 'Mine' , the way you differentiated betweeen Shravan's and Aditya's help and Sumo's take towards it was heartwarming.
And even this , painfully beautiful !

I so want them to be together already but best things happen in their owm time.
But this and you are enough for me for now.

I love you and I love the way you write magic.
Love and best wishes always <3
P.S: Waiting for 'Coming Home' :)

Quote

Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Marvelous shot anjali..
Each and everything you have written is amazing and Cvs should do something like this confession revelations and confrontation...
Brilliantly written dear..
Love it...❤️

Edited by _Eternity_ - 8 years ago

Quote

aachal20

@aachal20

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

I have said it before also and again saying your stories are far better than the actual show.it should happens in the show.love it.plz write more and update other stories. will be waiting

Quote

Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Omg such a painful revealation
Anjali as usual your work is beyond awesome girl 👏
Both were hurt but the only place to calm their inner turmoil was them in each others embrace
🤗