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crazyparrot

@crazyparrot

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Posted: 8 years ago

#701

Beautiful update!

Loved this Besharam Shravan!

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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#702

Ressi res 😳
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Unres
Zoya 🤗
😃
Was smiling like this showing my battisii all throughout the update... 😛

Blasting update Zoya...❤️
Aditya...bade dino baad darshan diye 😛
Shravan ke office...himmat hai bande mein... 😉
Kulhadi ka pura truck... 😆
Maa ke chehre par muskurahat dekhne ke liye wo bhi kar lunga...I feel pity for him.

Angry Shravan...loving n caring wife Sumo...hayee
Naughty Shravan...Awwiee 😳

ShraMan fight over Aditya... 😕
Maine ab tak na apne parents ko maaf kiya hai na khud ko.But Am trying to make it all work...So touching!!..❤️
Both have ego problems...uff!!

Sumo in Black saare...
N ye kya hua... 😲 😲 !!
Zoya ne suni maa ke dil ki pukaar or Nimmo ke Karan- Arjun aakhir aa hi gye... 😆
Nimmo hui emotional...Maa ki barso purani ichha hui puri...Well done Zoya.. 👏 😉
N Shravan allowed Aditya to attend the party for the happiness of his mother.Now thats like our Shravan, always so forgiving❤️

You know, I loose it easily, but then I cool down easily too...Aww!!
Shravan's love is just like a child...Cute, Innocent, Adorable, True, stubborn,forgiving, possessive, demanding and sooo soulful.❤️

Bold Sumo... 😳
Forgiven for the next 10 mistakes you make... 😆
Can anyone be more adorable???...Hell No!!

Aditya hugged Shravan...oh my 😆
Chalo nahate hain!!... 🤣
Loved this Shravan...❤️ 😳

Sumo's dare...not a chance to win from Shravan 😉
Aise na mujhe...Wow!! 😳
N Shravan turned more Bold... 😳
OMG!! OMG!!!...Kiss that too infront of everyone at the dance floor...!! 😳
Kaatil one!! 👏 😉
Bechaare Ramu kaka...budhape mein kya kya dekhna pada...too much for the fragile heart!!😆

Redemtion is always a best option than revenge...good choice Aditya
And the ending was tooo good to say the least!!
Death at his hands was way better than life itself...❤️
Dil loot liya Zoya...❤️

Awesome update as always...slayed it girl 👏
Loads n loads of Love n beary 🤗
Nik

Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#703

"... death at his hands was way better than life itself."

That's epic there! 👏

I loved Aditya's redemption track and ShraMan's argument on it gone wrong at night.

The whole thing was handled by you awesomely.

Aditya and Suman's exchange in the beginning was so hilarious!

Lol... I enjoyed Sumo's retorts so much.

The party, ShraMan making up and publically making out 😆 - all superb.

Keep writing such awesome pieces. 👍🏼

Keep ShraMan alive through your works. 🤗

Love and hugs,

Lara.

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#704

Nice chapter!!!

Married life is highly unpredictable~~absolutely true!!!

I feel happy that you chose to make Adithya a person willing for redemption...,

Love your writing...

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Reshma Ahmed

@Perpetuity

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#705

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Zoyi🤗

Mja aa gya re 👏

Ekdum dhinchak.

Aaditya ki toh lga di sumo ne 🥳

Dil khush kr ditta 🤗

ShraMan ka bedroom romance ☺️

Aur bahar wala v 🤣

Aditya hugged shravan 😲 🤣

Shravan should definitely take the bath of a lifetime 🤣

It's adorable 😳

Lighthearted 😳

Love it and love u ❤️ 🤗

P.S.- Copy nhi ho rha 😡

Edited by Perpetuity - 8 years ago

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#706

You are actually the os queen! No one writes better than you! You will get many analyses! So I won't do that on any of your writings! I would just sit and read and feel! Lots of love to you!

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#707

Wow.. Just wow 👏
Love the song...
Shravan bringing aditya with him for niru kaki.. . That's really nice...
You are just Brilliant 😉

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#708

Call it a co incidence but the song 'Aise na mujhe ' was playing on the radio while I was pulling up the driveway back home.

Perfect choice of song when a naughty Shravan decides to fluster Sumo publicly ...ermm...a tiny glitch. ..Sumo was not the only one to be flustered 😳

Pinch in the midriff. .a small sound of hayo rabba left my lips as well here😆😆

Sumo has this inherent nature of letting her ego take an upper hand over Shravan. .but as long as they kiss and pinch and make up...who am I to event twitch an eyebrow😊

Shravan went and got Aditya along...can imagine Aditya's condition during their drive to Malhotra house. ..poor guy must have gulped down gallons of saliva 😆

But on a serious note ...people do mess up...one should not let a mistake ruin a beautiful thing. ..Shravan's laudable gesture didn't not mean Aditya's behaviour was excused. ..it only meant that Shravan chose peace for himself.

Darn. .I need to control my OS sized comments.

Awesome chapter as usual Zoya...This usual might have become pretty casual to you by now right😉

Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#709

Beautifully penned..

Shravan still couldn't forgive his parents & himself than how can he forgive Aditya so easily after what he did to Sumo...but he realised his mother's happiness is more imp than his stubbornness for not allowing Aditya to attend the party. But has become more naughty after marriage & kissed Sumo in front of everyone...now Ramu kaka also understood anything can be expected from his son when he is with Sumo...aj kal ke bache..is it most natural thing to do in front of everyone now for Shravan?...itna besharam when did he become?

Thanks for PM

Vinu