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Zoya Zoya Zoya!!!
Oh My Dear God! How can you write so beautifully!
U know I'm a typical PCM girl who seeks logic more than emotions in a fiction, the one who believes love is beautiful but only in books.
But that poetry talked of love of Real world. That it exists in actuality! It was so genuine, that too when it came from Shravan, it made me cry, like bitterly cry, by the end. You defined love. I now believe in it.
Shravan's pain was depicted so flawlessly, as if you were him. I know I friend who has similar tale like his, exactly the same(parents part), except that her story didn't have a happy ending, I know how much she has suffered in life. In your poem that pain was palpable. How Sumo could join those broken pieces, he might have fallen more for her. His gratefulness is described so well.
Loved it so so much or rather it became Love for me.
You write like an absolute professional.
Agar asal mein ShraMan hote toh shayad yahi dialogues hote, yahi gestures hote, yahi poetry hoti!
Shall I suggest you something? I think you should send it to Dilip Jha as an appreciation for his story. No sane person can ignore and not make good use of a talent of this quality. Plus your vocabulary is really vast. Do make something of it, if you aren't already.
I had decided not to read any fanfiction for some days, but this series is special, very special!
However, I've decided I'll read PARCHED later, so that I'm not deviated more towards it than already.
Keep writing!
Cricket
Bade Achche Lagte Hain Naya Season
