ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th]

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Posted: 8 years ago

#441

Thank you for sharing AnjaliR :)

Edited by katdarling - 8 years ago

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1097025

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hey,

What's up ? 😊

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siliya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#443

Awesome update

loved it

One thing I want to tell you is that I didn't like Adithya in EDKV ...so when Adithya was Introduced in your FF I didn't like it but now I'm loving Adithya❤️...and I love Preekar...they have brain's...

Every characters in your FF are Amazing

Thankz for the pm...waiting for next update

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PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: astonm
Hello everyone!

I know it's been over a week since I've updated, I am just swarmed with tests right now and I am simultaneously working on another ShraMan SS (Painful Revelations). I have my days where I feel like working on one story more than the other, but I am working on the next chapter for Coming Home and it should be up sometime this week. I apologize for the wait, but time is just really short right now.

I hope everyone is doing well! Thank you for all the wonderful comments you guys leave me, they make me so happy and I know I don't reply to them individually (again due to time) but I really appreciate them.

Special shout out to Sara who goes back millions of chapters to comment. You are literally a ball of sunshine my friend <3

That's all from my side at the moment!

XOXO,
Anjali

You are a sweetheart Anjali🤗 Thank you for the shout out😳

Waiting for the next update😳😃 Hope it is soon😳

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astonm

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Posted: 8 years ago

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PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#446

ANJALIII YOU UPDATED!!!

And my it was a brilliant brilliant chapter!!! Trust me when I say I Loved every bit of it!!

Pushkar Aditya being scolded;they were being so nosy!😳😆 and Vandy ke papa caught them, daant toh padni hi thi!! I could so imagine the whole scene playing out in my head! Kamini not listening, Pushkar whining, Shravan laughing- well trying to control his laughter and Sumo whacking him and Nirmala doubting the duo😆 And the end bit of that part was the best!! Pushkar doubting himself and Aditya getting pissed off at him because he did not check the bathroom🤣

Haaye the haldi moment!! Reminded me a bit of ShraMan from the show where Shravan just looks at Sumo during PreeKar haldi! He was mesmerised! And Shravan never leaving a chance to torture her and joking around with her infront of everybody!!😲😲Applying the haldi on her the way he did and making her run after him!! Sumo is no less! Just knows how to get back at him, the little cheat!😈 I so love the brothers bonding in this FF!!! Shravan Pushkar and Aditya as well are all wack😆😆

Because of all the time they spent together, with their confession and romance, she forgot he has to leave Liked how you wrote out the table scene! Sumo's emotions so on point and Shravan kind of confused as to what exactly happened! Priya and Nirmala noticing that... Loved how Shravan managed to pacify her! He is a sweetheart!!

Haayeee Preeti KNOWS!!! Goodness she is sharp here unlike the show😆😆 And teasing Sumo about having his name on her hand, teasing Shravan with jeeju😉😆 But she is a sweetheart, helps them both!! And hahaha Nirmala KNOWS about the S😉!!! And is teasing Sumo about it!!!😲😈 And Priya and Nirmala know that they are together NOW!!! ShraMan scene on the swing was super cute! And Shravan ktitna pagal hai! He thought the S was for Sumo! Buddhu! Show main bhi maan liya, aur yahhan bhi!😳😆

Kya yaar, what is Nirmala planing now? Why do you always end at such crucial places Anjali?😳😆 Haha update soon please!!

And guess what, just after resing, I was about to read the chapter, but I could not because my nephew came to me so I thought I will read it later when I get the chance.. And then we watched TV and guess which movie?! HSSH!!!😳😃 Hehehe!

Thanks for the PM!! I am so glad you updated!! I hope you don't get any of those writers blocks anymore😳 Not for this story at least😳😳

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deeisreading

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Posted: 8 years ago

#447

Oh, this was so so cuuute!

The sneaking around and the giggles.

The roothna and manana.

Loooved it.

I wait so fervently for your updates everytime.

Looking forward to the next eagerly!!

Love !

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vrushali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#448

The scene in which aditya n pushkar
were being scold was so funny 😆
and rest of d chp was beautiful 👏
Thanks for pm 😛

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Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#449

Ressi res 🥳
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Unres

OOO-MMM-GGG...THT WAS TREMENDOUS N DAMN HILARIOUS YAR.. ⭐️
Pushkar-Aditiya partners in crime...partners in scolding session..ROFL..really felt bad for thm specially pushkar..becharay ko bari maar pari.. 🤣 🤣
Our Oxford return got brains n so doz Sumo..very wel played..naughty naughty 😳
Shraman moments were epic ❤️ thm 😉
It was stupendously penned indeed...made me grin having a 500 watt smile 😃
really felt sad bout the fact he wud be leaving.. 😭
N thn Nirmila n Priya r just unbelievable...thy r trying to keep an eye on thm so so smart of thm.. 😆
Moreover i guess shez planning to catch thm red handed..like seriously..woh bhi along with Ramnath 😲... 🤣
Loved it to core ❤️...love u too yar thnks for such a beeeaautiifulll upii 😳
Its like we r reliving thm
Tons of love n 🤗 for u...
N thnks for the pm 😊
Continue soon dear 😉

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago