ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th]

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Riya

@Ri21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#421

This is just so perfect. This surprise date is beyond beautiful. Loved it ❤️

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an_chau

@an_chau

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#422

This is so beautiful Anjali... And that date setting was mesmerizingly beautiful... So happy that you've upgraded the Rajshri brand to meet our times😃 and inclinations 😉...

And thank you for updating diligently despite the work-school commitments...

MUCH LOVE!

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.SardiKiDhoop.

@.SardiKiDhoop.

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#423

IM DYINGGAHIEJFLS

Okay, I'm not entirely sure why, but I'm a legit MESS right now and I have a lump in my throat, I don't know if I want to cry or my face just hurts too much from smiling...AAHH, okay first of all, as soon as he took her to the farmhouse, my mind went straight to "Khosla ka farmhouse" lmaooo. I love when they were driving and she kissed him on the cheek and the car swerved a bit, ahh, I could totally see that happening, it made me so happy!

Date night has never been THIS cutesy, omg! Everything made me so happy, from the set-up to Sumo throwing popcorn at him to the tickles, the banter and then the kisses, gaah!! I love how you used the same movie they watched from the actual show and the tulips! I love the way you capture so many tiny details from the show, it gives this story that added edge of believability. The Pushkar-Aditya scene amused me so much, haha! And then them waking up like that and Sumo flustering Shravan, aahjdlnclsa, I'm an incoherent mess.

Continue soon! :D

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#424

Oh god. Now I just cannot wait for the next update.

Please please please, let the Barjatya-ness stay dormant for some time and give us a shower update. Please please please please please :D

The update was amazing. I've always wanted a date night like this. Very very cute

Now I want the shower scene :P

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#425

amazing update

absolutely loved it

continue soon

superb

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Faith28

@Faith28

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#426

Wowwowwoww...beautiful date setup❤️ Went aaal mushyy☺️ Loved the date sequence, Their romance, comedy, childishness everything infact. Let the romance secrecy remain for sometime😉

Waiting for ur next update😊

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#427

Nice update I read last 2 epi one go... Beautiful

Shravan & his surprise...

Hot & sexy episode loved it... ❤️

Waking up one anothers embrace which they wished for always.

Pushkar & Aditya sneaking around Vandy babhs house & they cought by someone...!. 🤣

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#428

amazing...
. no words...
beautifully written...
... ShraMan...❤️
thanx for PM...😊
egarly waiting for next update...
thank you so much for the wonderful update...
you are an amazing writer...👍🏼

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#429

When I read your A/N saying that its was fluff-central , I grinned.
Which only got wide as I continued reading.

I love Shravan.
The date set up and the movie was to die for.

Them being hot and cute at the same time.
Teasing , goofing around blushing and loving ! <3

Aditya and Pushkar though.
Adorable.
Wonder who caught them. Haha

I have said it earlier, will say it again.
You write magic <3
-God bless