ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th]

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 8 years ago

#431

Fantastic part👏

Lovedd ittt😳

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Miaprincess

@Miaprincess

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Posted: 8 years ago

#432

One of the best stories I have read.. Even I like Rohit more than Raj..Please update soon.. Thank you! P.S. Are you a fan of twilight?

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PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#433

Hey Anjali!

I really enjoyed reading this update!

ShraMan bickering and teasing each other is always fun to read. They are so damn cute! Loved reading their whole night out right from her seeing the setup to the pizza and their favourite film (Kaho Na Pyaar Hai. Goodness I have watched that film too many times when I was young. Lol! Not 55 times but I am sure it's somewhere close😳😆) to the popcorn fight and the cake fight; bachchon jaise ladte hain abhi bhi Lol, and the whole tickling and romantic scene ☺️☺️

Pushkar and Aditya are caught!!! Who caught them and what happens thereafter... you've left me in suspense. I guess we will know when the 2 get back home.

Update soon please. Really looking forward to the next chapter. And thank you for the PM. 😃🤗

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

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Posted: 8 years ago

#434

OMG THAT DATE IS THE CUTEST THING IN THIS WORLD

I love how you write intimate scenes, it wasn't cheesy and yet SO cute. The tickling, the popcorn, the fighting over the cake while watching the movie and making out. GAHHH.

I love love love love love this. They're so cute!

YO SUMO TEASING HIM RIGHT BACK ABOUT THE SHOWER THING YASSS GIRL SLAYYY

And I adore your Pushkar + Aditya, I wonder who caught them LOL

UPDATE SOON!

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anonymousanju

@anonymousanju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#435

Anjali yar...wow is the first word left my mouth after reading this...sorry for commenting this late...thanks for the pm buddy ...loved this chapie...it was so beautiful from the beginning to end... everything was perfect... their romantic date was wow...God their proximity n control of saint...haha...that's so amusing...n girl you're going to be the death of me ;) as I'd told you earlier... your story, name of chapter's, n the way you describe each n everything is perfect... n the pic God it was so beautiful...wow yar ...n pushkie n adi being Sherlock Holmes ...God these guys are too much... n shraman's smirk...these two are so obvious...can't let other win over themself... waiting for next pm dear...:)

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PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#436

CHAPTER 2

Chapter 2 is one of my favourites to be honest. Must be surprising right since I did not comemnt on it earlier, but before I got the chance to comemnt you had updated the third and the fourth, and back then I was kinda lazy in commenting. But I had decided I will comment and so here I am.

I read this chapter again because I had to comemnt and also because I miss the weekly dose of "Coming Home". Anyway, it was fabulous back when I first read it and as good even after 9 more chapters!

There is something so beautiful about it. The simplicity I think. And the relationships between the characters. ShraMan have come a long long way at present yet are so similar to the ShraMan in the second chapter. The innocence, the playfulness, the naughtiness, yep the same ShraMan! But also more open with each other, more comfortable with each other!! Anjali I just LOVE how you have gone with this story!!!!

Loved Priya's talk with Suman. Esp her comment about "When it comes to Shravan you are like a 5 year old child throwing a tantrum"!! I loved this!!

Pushkar as always teasing his bhaiyya and bhabhi😉😆 And man does everyone except the two of them know that they love each other? I don't blame them though... Distance does that to you (I think😳)

The moment Pushkar mentioned about getting a helping hand, I knew Shravan was coming back and was excited to see Sumo's reaction and I Loved it!! Sumo running up the stairs in his room and hugging him!! Man Anjali, that would have been awesome to see!!!

He gives her chocolates!!! I would have been as happy if not more if it was me in Sumo's place😳😳 And he remembered the gift she liked!! It so reminded me, for a second, of Ross and Rachel!😳😳

And Shravan has started noticing the smallest things about her!!!

I love how you mention exactly how minutes later Sumo answers Pushkar, him teasing her about the halwa, Shravan and Pushkar's convo.

And damn Shravan is Naughty!!!☺️ Bechari Sumo!!

All in all, I LOVED the second chapter!! Thank you for the PM!! Please update soon😳