ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th]

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Riya

@Ri21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#461

This is so adorable😳

Can't wait for the next part. waiting for nirmala's plan😆

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 8 years ago

#462

Awesome update der👏

lovedd tt😊

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 8 years ago

#463

I absolutely loved the chapter.

Hahahaha... Pushkar and Aditya getting scolded by Kamini was epic. 🤣 Shravan and Sumo are evil. 😈 Loved it. ❤️

The haldi scene was so cute. 😳

Ah, Shravan going back to London, only to return.. so... 😳 But Sumo is upset as she cannot stay away from him. As they say, distance makes the heart grow fonder.

Ooohh... Preeti has is much better detective than Pushkar and Aditya. 😆 Loved the mehendi scene. It was adorable. ☺️

Um, what is Nirmala planning now? 😲 I swear some evil plan in her head which I'm sure includes Priya. 😈 Eagerly waiting for the next one,

Continue soon. Love you. ❤️

~ Mrina <3

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

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Posted: 8 years ago

#464

Awww Adi and puskar got scolded
Superb update loved it

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.SardiKiDhoop.

@.SardiKiDhoop.

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#465

I love reading your updates for this one because I'm always left with so many happy vibes!

I was SO amused with the Kamini confrontation with Pushkar and Aditya, the dialogue and actions you've put in, just made it funnier, especially when Pushkar complained that she wasn't letting him speak and she whacked his head in response! And of course, the fact that ShraMan managed to get away with everything :P

I LOVE how flirty and touchy Shravan is with Sumo - I could just hear that sexy bg music from whenever he'd flirt with her from the show play...ahhh, if things had played out differently, I could totally see something like this happening *sigh*

I laughed when Shravan and Pushkar attacked Varun with the haldi, I miss their fun bromance! And, of course, Shravan putting haldi on Sumo was a given - but I love how you still managed to write it differently from your OS. And Sumo flustering Shravan was so fun! It made me very happy to read...I guess because I'd always really wanted a scene with Sumo flustering him instead of the other way around.

I really appreciated how Sumo reacted to the news of Shravan leaving and the way they talked over it - honestly, so many of their issues would have been solved through just talking things out instead of pushing each other away.

Ahh, Preeti knowsss! i'm glad you've made her ahh..."useful" here, haha! And I love how, like in the show, Sumo tells Shravan the S stands for her name, yet only to tease him. Loved this chapter!

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#466

Awesome update anjali..
Love it.. ❤️
Poor Pushkar and adi...maza as gya... 🤣
Haldi scene was so good .shra playing with her stomach and haldi makeup of sumo and shra... ❤️
Preeti knows everything and that dumb and dumber man that suits them.. 🤣
Mehndi and s and nirmala priya knows shra was there .. mast parents hai.. 😊
Then cones ShraMan and swing..Beautiful...
Nirmala planning something don't say marriage if shra or sumo... 😆
Amazing update dear..
Thnx for pm 🤗

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canoodle

@canoodle

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#467

This is sooo cute!

I love the Pushkar-Aditya-Shravan bromance, Kamini is hilarious and Priya & Nirmala are devious. ShraMan are obviously cute as hell!!

Looking forward to more soon :)

-Meera

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manisha771

@manisha771

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#468

Lovely update Anjali...waiting for the next update, what is this nirmala upto 😕

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nawal_imran

@nawal_imran

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#469

Hi Anjali!

You're just so amazing at writing , and these days my pass time is your incredible and impressive text.

It's been a month or two since I've joined the forum and it's the first time I'm commenting something on someone's writing, just love how you make amazing fluffs. And by this time I don't think I've missed any kinda text written by you on forum..:D

Coming Home is just so amazing and I'm absolutely smitten with your stories, also I want you to update "Cupcakes and Barbels".

*sincerely longs for every update*

With love,

Your sincerely off-border writing fan

Nawal Imran.