ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th] - Page 33

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

I will unres this right now since I am using my laptop and not my phone.😳 I will unres the remaining ones as well, as soon as I get a chance to re-read them all😳

First of all, I would like to mention the titles of each chapter!!! I LOVE them!! Brilliant job on that Anjali!!! All to do with flying and getting home!!! Which reminds me, since we are at high right now, does it mean there's only a few chapters left?

Each part of this chapter was BRILLIANT!! I will not lie when I say I was crying (I am super embarrassed about this) because of the news, esp since the producer confirmed it as well, but you made me smile with this chapter.

Sumo upset at Shravan cos he is making her dependent on him again but she cannot let that happen; their talk where he assures he will never leave her again, ever; him cornering her to the closet and flustering her like always and her getting frustrated at that!!

I LOVE the way the mothers talk to their respective children and tease them leaving poor ShraMan all embarrassed. Even their moms know their dil ka haal but they don't. 😆

I LOVE how you recreated the whole Preeti bhoj sequence, the whole cornering her to the closet. to the same clothes, to her making his favourite bhujiya ki sabzi and him looking for her then pinning her to the counter and teasing her while asking for his fees!!! BEAUTIFUL!!! And I just watched this scene earlier today, so I am even happier!!!

Thank you so much for updating today Anjali esp when things are so down for the fandom!!!🤗

I have a request to make, please don't stop writing on them😳😊

And thank you for the PM.

I will unres the rest soon😳

Originally posted by: .SardiKiDhoop.

OMG YAAAYYY!

This update was so great, I had such a huge grin on my face reading this entire thing :D

Okay, first of all, I love how you brought in Shravan helping Suman with her business without asking her and her not being okay with it. But instead of him blaming it on her "ego", they've managed to address the real issue - which is her not wanting to rely on him if he won't be there for her forever. I think that's such an integral part of EKDV - I really think that part of Suman's unwillingness to accept help from others is because everyone she loves always ends up leaving her; it's something that has left the same long-lasting effect as Shravan's experience with the women in his life. Of course here, she still has her mother, but I can definitely see her being reluctant to depend on him - that coupled with her independence - l LOVE how subtly EDKV addresses feminism...okay, anyway, I'm going off on a tangent, let's get back to this chapter.

And then the way you brought back the closet and kitchen scenes was awesome, I just kept picturing the actual scenes from the show. And I love the way you brought their mothers in on the whole thing. Especially because if Nirmala had not left and was a proper mother, she'd be able to key in on her son's feelings. Also, is it bad that when she said "you could wear anything and Suman would love it regardless", my mind went to "you could wear nothing and Suman would love it regardless"? - It's true, though! 😆

I love the way you've written this short story - in an alternate universe, where Nirmala hadn't left, Priya was still alive, Suman hadn't hurt Shravan and Shravan hadn't left because of it and their relationships progressed in a natural healthy way, I can totally see this happening. And because of that, there's far less of a chance for misunderstandings to take root and when Shravan asks Suman for his "fees" here...he won't be asking her for friendship.

Can't wait for the next chapter! <3 Hope you continue soon :D

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

Anjali...i didnt expect that u wl upload ths chptr so fast... but whn i checked my inbox a huge smile crept my face :) this chapter was amazing like others... i love the way u name each chapter... awww i loved shraman bedroom scene ...when sumo said i want to do everything by myself n how shravu said m not going anywr sumo...i loved it... n pritibhoj scene...i love u for this anjali...totally reminded me of tht pritibhoj epi...i was reminding each n everything in my mind n was smiling like a mad person anyone would claim if see me at this hour smiling while reading smthng on phone ;) the cabinet scene omg it was amazing how he cornered her n askd for fees ...eyes flickering from eyes to lips n back again... n nirmala's n priya's confrontations to shraman i loved it... how flushed n embarresed they both wr... awww i love both mommies... they knew it since childhood...bestest mommies :) n how nirmala said trying to impress sumo n priya said blue is his fvrt color ...wear blue anarkali... n his black blazer ... reminded me of thr pritibhoj dress... n how they both stood beside shravu n said sumo is in kitchen controlling their laugh... n kitchen scene...i was reliving each n every scene... from past few episodes , thr wr many instances whr they could have kissed but they didnt... i really feel u have really bcm too much influenced by barjatya's tht you wont add any kiss but m happy tht at least shravu kissed sumo on cheek... loved this chapter totally ...thanks so much for changing my mood...i was crying whn i heard edkv is going to end as i was already sad tht shraman are not well n now edkv...how'd i survive?? but u really changed my mood n made me relive all moments... pls update next part soon dear.. cant wait now... :) love u loaatsss... take care :)

Originally posted by: khadz20

You desreve an award.

This was BEAUTIFUL. ❤️

You give this to us at this time , with all the negativity and horrible accusations being thrown around , THANK YOU SO MUCH !

I was so upset earlier , didn't want to believe the show is really being pulled off the plug and then I see this update. You have no idea how much happiness you give me every single time you update.

And I know you are in medical school and I am sure it must be very difficult taking time out and giving us such happy poistive updates , I really can't thank you enough , but I am going to pray for you. I never really say that , but you are really special.

I absolutely love your work.

Shit , I sound creepy now.

But seriously , this is awesome.

Please do.not stop writing on ShraMan , it is a request.

Pleaseee 😭

I loved how you potrayed their relationship , gradually building it up , unlike the show where they get closer and then have their ego clashes or whatever. Honestly ,I dont even know why I love that show so much , and now they are just shutting down , my poor heart.

I loved how they notice things about each other , I loved how they look at each other , I love how you talk about their emotions , like you are there and you can feel them and you make us feel all those things.

Do you have any idea how precious your talent is ?

Most of all , I loved how you took this update , from the show , and made it a 100 times even more beautiful , I just don't have enough words to express how beautifully you have done this ! ❤️

May God bless you Anjali , you really are a pocketful of sunshine.