ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th]

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mariajamal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#331

I read all parts in one go cud not resis to hold it back awesome yr plz cont...

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-Shilpaa-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#332

This was beautiful Anjali...

And you are my only hope now.

Please don't stop writing on ShraMan even after the show goes off air. Please😔

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aishwarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#333

This chappy was brilliant❤️

Lovedd ittt

And amazingly written😳

Eagerly waiting for the nxt part😊

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dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#334

This is really really good to read👏. am new here and visiting regularly IF or twitter only after knowing the off air news. You write so well that all the characters, scenes just unfold before eyes😃. Am die heart fan of this show from Day 1. Never been so attached to any shows like this before. The off airs put me into depression literally and I feel like carrying something very heavy in my heart for past one weak😭.

Personal life is disturbed so much. 😭

Reading this story so far really changes my mood and I think i can stick over to this for my recovery.

Please Please do continue and for our sake never think about discontinuing this.

Best Regards.

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PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: astonmwritings

Aw, Sara your comments always make me smile!

LOL, I am glad someone caught onto the titles lol, and man, this story was not supposed to be this long in the first place but I can't stop writing it. I don't even know when I'll end it, we shall see.

Aww, thanks I am glad you liked it!

I think there is still hope for EDKV, it makes no sense to me that they would can it at this point - if Nikita's health is the problem they could change her but I think she's back now? I hope the show goes on.

I love it when moms tease their kids like that, and I really wanted to add it in the story because they are both so deprived of "maa ka pyaar" in the show and it makes me sad.

The Priti bhoj is my absolute fave thing about the show, I had to do it! I was watching the scene while writing and dying of feels!

I don't think I am going to stop writing ShraMan anytime soon, especially if they do end this show right now with so much to uncover. My brain and heart won't allow me to stop!

THANKS FOR YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENT SARA. You make my day <3

Thank you so much for replying😳

Was I the only one who caught on to the titles? I noticed it from the 4th chapter if I remember correctly but I never posted a comment on any chapter until this one...

You have a promise to fulfil Anjali the show is being wrapped up and I am sure they must have missed a lot.

^^ Hehe I am just kidding no stress. You are under a lot of uni pressure as well, I understand.

It's really sad we only got a handful of what I might be able to call romantic scenes. Sigh. Anyway, you and the other writers have done an amazing job at that!

The moments with the respective mom's are awww worthy. Would love to see one with Shravan Priya and Nirmala Sumo. Hehe.

I am looking forward to the next chapter and write as much as you want to, I love this story!

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astonmwritings

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Posted: 8 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

Thank you so much for replying😳

Was I the only one who caught on to the titles? I noticed it from the 4th chapter if I remember correctly but I never posted a comment on any chapter until this one...

You have a promise to fulfil Anjali the show is being wrapped up and I am sure they must have missed a lot.

^^ Hehe I am just kidding no stress. You are under a lot of uni pressure as well, I understand.

It's really sad we only got a handful of what I might be able to call romantic scenes. Sigh. Anyway, you and the other writers have done an amazing job at that!

The moments with the respective mom's are awww worthy. Would love to see one with Shravan Priya and Nirmala Sumo. Hehe.

I am looking forward to the next chapter and write as much as you want to, I love this story!

I don't think anyone else has tbh, and if they have they haven't said anything LOL.

Don't even get me started on how much they're missing, I am so disappointed because I expected a lot from this show, and I literally just want to rewrite everything, I just don't know where to start from because I have a few possible options, so I'll wait until the show is done :(

The next chapter should be up soon!

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astonmwritings

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Posted: 8 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
So heartbroken with the news of EDKV ending 🥺 but your updates always give me a reason to smile. 😃

Fantastic update Anji. 👏 Loved everything about the update! ❤️

The way Sumo was holding back from depending on Shravan again and Shravan trying to make her believe that he is never going to leave her again. 😳 Especially when Sumo just straddled him. 😆 Poor guy, I feel for his hormones! 😉 ☺️

"You've always been my only real friend Sumo, the only one I wanted to share my life with"

Does Sumo expect him to spell it out after he said what he said? 😳

The mommies are having their share of fun teasing the kids and I'm absolutely enjoying it. 😆

Continue sooner.

~ Mrina <3

MRINA! <3 I've missed you, I am going to catch up on Zehnaseeb soon. And I am so sad about the show ending gah.

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astonm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#338

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PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#339

Anjali goodness gracious, losing touch with the story? Is that why I had a big smile on my face throughout this chapter and was sad it ended?😲

I absolutely LOVED this chapter!!! The whole scene where he tries getting her attention and his mum teasing him because he keeps looking at her was so adorable, if I can even say that!!

And I always loved the laddoo scene aahhh so cute and Namik looked so adorable with those expressions! I love how you used the whole scene from the show but making slight changes for the story. Priya and Nirmala's conversation plus their teasing Sumo was a bit funny😳😆

And most of all, I loved the terrace scene!! Man Anjali that scene was so so beautiful! The things you kept similar to the changes I.e. Their confession and kiss. It was so so so beautiful!!! Made me go aww with a huge smile on my face! I can go on and on about it, but I might take away from It... But beautiful!!

The two thinking about each other all day, texting each other first thing in the morning and speaking for an hour long, smiles not leaving their faces is such a normal thing for them. They would do that otherwise as well only perhaps smile lesser cos their confession has given them a bigger reason to smile!

Shravan pouting, sad and kind of throwing a tantrum because she came late was so cute man! And he demands a kiss in exchange and she melts cos heck 7 years he has loved her but was silent about it!! Man you make me want to watch them instead of read!

Anjali in short, an amazing chapter that made me smile throughout! Although I wonder if and how they will dance for the sangeet... Thank you for the PM😃!

Update soon please. And thank you so much 🤗

Edited by PrincessAshVik - 8 years ago