ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th] - Page 32

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Posted: 9 years ago
Anjali...i didnt expect that u wl upload ths chptr so fast... but whn i checked my inbox a huge smile crept my face :) this chapter was amazing like others... i love the way u name each chapter... awww i loved shraman bedroom scene ...when sumo said i want to do everything by myself n how shravu said m not going anywr sumo...i loved it... n pritibhoj scene...i love u for this anjali...totally reminded me of tht pritibhoj epi...i was reminding each n everything in my mind n was smiling like a mad person anyone would claim if see me at this hour smiling while reading smthng on phone ;) the cabinet scene omg it was amazing how he cornered her n askd for fees ...eyes flickering from eyes to lips n back again... n nirmala's n priya's confrontations to shraman i loved it... how flushed n embarresed they both wr... awww i love both mommies... they knew it since childhood...bestest mommies :) n how nirmala said trying to impress sumo n priya said blue is his fvrt color ...wear blue anarkali... n his black blazer ... reminded me of thr pritibhoj dress... n how they both stood beside shravu n said sumo is in kitchen controlling their laugh... n kitchen scene...i was reliving each n every scene... from past few episodes , thr wr many instances whr they could have kissed but they didnt... i really feel u have really bcm too much influenced by barjatya's tht you wont add any kiss but m happy tht at least shravu kissed sumo on cheek... loved this chapter totally ...thanks so much for changing my mood...i was crying whn i heard edkv is going to end as i was already sad tht shraman are not well n now edkv...how'd i survive?? but u really changed my mood n made me relive all moments... pls update next part soon dear.. cant wait now... :) love u loaatsss... take care :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesum chapter...keep on d great wrk..update soon.. n thanks for the p.m ... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Posted - Chapter 7

Edited by PrincessAshVik - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally...i wa so eagrly waiting for dis update...
Beautifully penned...now lets see wht hez gong to ask her as his fees... 😉 😳
plz update soon...
loved it alot... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
I love this chapter so cute these two are.and nirmala and priya gang up.and shravan flirting and teasing sumo.superb update.update fast dear can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Flattered just amazing. Please update soon need to know what is the fees.waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Brilliant
This scene happened in the show
But it will be different in this because they are already in love
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi anjali,
Wow u r amazing our Shraman r so cute & adorable

I loved each & every para of the story

They r like puzzle both r needed to complete each other

Thank you

Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
You desreve an award.
This was BEAUTIFUL. ❤️
You give this to us at this time , with all the negativity and horrible accusations being thrown around , THANK YOU SO MUCH !
I was so upset earlier , didn't want to believe the show is really being pulled off the plug and then I see this update. You have no idea how much happiness you give me every single time you update.
And I know you are in medical school and I am sure it must be very difficult taking time out and giving us such happy poistive updates , I really can't thank you enough , but I am going to pray for you. I never really say that , but you are really special.
I absolutely love your work.
Shit , I sound creepy now.
But seriously , this is awesome.
Please do.not stop writing on ShraMan , it is a request.
Pleaseee 😭
I loved how you potrayed their relationship , gradually building it up , unlike the show where they get closer and then have their ego clashes or whatever. Honestly ,I dont even know why I love that show so much , and now they are just shutting down , my poor heart.
I loved how they notice things about each other , I loved how they look at each other , I love how you talk about their emotions , like you are there and you can feel them and you make us feel all those things.
Do you have any idea how precious your talent is ?
Most of all , I loved how you took this update , from the show , and made it a 100 times even more beautiful , I just don't have enough words to express how beautifully you have done this ! ❤️
May God bless you Anjali , you really are a pocketful of sunshine.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Anjali,
This is amazing... It really made my day...
U r such an awesome writer... Loved every bit of it...

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