' KISSED ' A SHRAMAN OS - 100 EPISODES CELEBRATION

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Nileshni Devi

@nileshni679

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Wow what a write up. Wish it really happens in the serial.

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: orion23

Mahi my love!
Prii ka res bhi first and unres bhi first!
Tujhe Thenga toh woh de hi chuki hai😆
But I'm so happy!
Both my besties made it to page one!
Psycho came in a close second page😆
Mera toh os safal ho gaya🤗

Bechare masoom bachche school jate hai , main hi sabse vella hu 🤣
Koi na mahi agli bar first comment tera 😛

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Deboleena Chakraborty

@Deb_05

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+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Lovely OS, zoya!! 👏

I really wish that shraman at least come back to talking terms like this. I can't see them fighting constantly. And after, if such a scenario takes place like written in this OS, then Ramnath. ..🤣. He will go into the "shock" mode that Shravan went into after hearing his father's plane crash news. 😆 When I was reading the whole interaction between Shraman, I was like OMG where is ramu? He has to see all this. And of course, he shows up. But not like a creep this time.😆 Such a hilarious and beautiful piece!! 👏

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Eeshaal

@Eeshaal

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

First of all so sorry zoya Been so busy that not being active that's y missed such beautiful thread , bravo what an OS , amazing writing 👏 , it was simple , cute and took me to Shraman land , the kiss hotness to the max 😳 . Write more

Edited by Eeshaal - 9 years ago

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Kavila

@Kavila

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Omg omg

Thiis just jhakash bindadh and rapchik
.zoya standing ocation

Oh god writers ko yeh aab ideas kyun nahin atey

That old aunty fain ing

And kiss me hum Dono ka hath i mean muh cracjed me up.

Oh gid wish cbs could think in that way.

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mineforever

@mineforever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Zoya!!!
It was super awesome!! 😊
I had so much fun reading it.. 😳
Now this is called a passionate,sensual kiss..😉
Kash yeh sach main ho jaaye..mazaa aa jayega or Ramnath ko shayad heart attack aa jayega.. 😆

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Ramya

@Ramya_98

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+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Woah! What a piece zoya!
Sumo looking like sarson ka khet in yellow and shravan as always like khamba! 🤣
Shravan ka workload badhing because he'll be sued for abusing and attempting to kill those who dared to look at sumo! 😳😆
OMG, that warning and the kiss, vo bhi sabke samne! ☺️ Sabke samne announcing marriage! 😳 ❤️ Bechare ramu ka face dekhne layak hoga! 😆 😛
Zoya you are a really good writer! 👏 Tussi kamal ho! 😆 🤗