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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Oreo 🤗

Congratulations and Thank You for this little gift.

This OS was so beautiful and hilarious.

Couldn't stop laughing.

How well do you write? And how unique are your ideas!

I am officially in love with this piece.

When Shravan said" isme mera haath tha..nahi actually mera

a muh nahi dono ke muh thaa" I burst out laughing.

You are the best when it comes to this genre of writing.

Loads Of Love.

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Flibbertigibbet

@Flibbertigibbet

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Heyy zoyaa!!!

THIS IS SO AMAZINGGG!!!!!!

"sumo ko kiss karna bandh karo" hahahaha ramnath's despical flop show attempt XD

I was squirming and smiling like a giddy eyed school girl :P

"Hum dono ka mu tha" cracked me.up so hard XD

Lovely! Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read more from your archives! :D

*hugs*

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

amazing
absolutely loved it
kiss was mind blowing
superb

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
Res
Priii

Mahi my love!

Prii ka res bhi first and unres bhi first!

Tujhe Thenga toh woh de hi chuki hai😆

But I'm so happy!

Both my besties made it to page one!

Psycho came in a close second page😆

Mera toh os safal ho gaya🤗

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: orion23

Mahi my love!
Prii ka res bhi first and unres bhi first!
Tujhe Thenga toh woh de hi chuki hai😆
But I'm so happy!
Both my besties made it to page one!
Psycho came in a close second page😆
Mera toh os safal ho gaya🤗

Mein pehle kar dete!

School tha mera :'(

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Suruchi

@sheeluneelu

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

That was lovely os loved it

Thanks for d pm darling 🤗

Celebration time 🥳

Can't write long comment in office but truly it's great

Edited by sheeluneelu - 9 years ago

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Awww I found it cute 😛
" sarson ka khet lagri ho" that dialogue cracked me up 😆
And then kiss that was it was hot
I was thinking about Ramnath reaction 🤣
And others were also good but Ramnath bechara armano par pani pher diya shravu ne
Than last part his explanation for kissing sumo 🤣 Papa ka aashirwaad thn haath aur muh 😆
It was fab OS mind blowing Zoya Api 🤗

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Mein pehle kar dete!
School tha mera :'(

Chalega!!

You commented!

Bas..

Ho gaya mera day made🤗

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Awesome one🤣

well written zoya

lovedd d kiss part and aftermath of the kiss🤣

everyones reactions perfectly written😆

can imagine ramnaths face😆

lovedd ittt😊

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Reading_love

@Shree06

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Zoya

It was something too good

unbelievable Shravan you have mentioned here, If it happened na ti I will die man wow 👏

Superb
Specially this paragraph is like OMG!!!!!!!!!!! 😳☺️

"People, Sorry for scandalizing you guys. Aj kal ki generation" He said tried to lighten the mood. "Papa ko pata hai iss baare mai, unhon ne apna aashirwaad de diya hai. I mean kiss ke liye ashirvad nahi, hehe, humare rishte ke liye ashirawad. Kiss mai sirf mera haath tha, I mean muh tha. Actually Sumo aur mera dono ka muh tha. I don't think we should talk about this any further." Ramnath knew all was lost. Pushkar was delighted. Mammiji was gaining consciousness with the change of tide.

Zoya you don't know what you have done sweety, love you for this

Big hug yaarrr 🤗

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