Rihaee - part 5 update 19th nov 2017

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Susmitasumi96
Again a nice update. Plzzz update the next chapter. I am too much eager to know about the further story.. plz plz make it fast. 👍🏼🤗

thanks for the feedback😳 i am glad you liked it😃

I am working on next chap will let you know whenever i update

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Waiting4you

Hey dearie😳
Wassup😳!!
Here I present you 2nd chapter for this story. I am happy with the response and I hope to see more coming as story paces.

This story would not have been possible with out one person KESHU🤗
Keshu thanks for your great help. Or else everyone had to bear my horrendous english😆

So with lots of love let the story began😳

Sorry in advance for the lengthier chapter😆

Chapter 2

Her body started to freeze. Her eyes widened on realization and tears beganto form in her eyes. With lots of courage and withevery single heartbeat getting diluted,sharanya finally dared to look beneath her. As soon as she roamed her eyes ,shemet with a black colour cloth . Sharanya felt her heartbeat increaseinanabnormal speed.her eyes darted the lenght of cloth. It was a plainsimpleblack kurta . Holding her breathe she pushedherself a little more so that she could see the facewhich made her scared. As soon as his face came into her full vision ,her voice hitched in throat and refused to come out . Tears of fearwas pouring downon her face and She let out a loud curdling scream before pushing herself off the bed. Sharanya quickly brought her hand over her eyes and took bigger steps till she felt wall behind. For a second the entire room turned mute. Nothing could be heard except sharanya's uneven breathing.After fewsecondssharanya started pulling her hands off her eyes. She found herself alone in the room. She gasped and turned back to the place where she have slept seconds ago.yet, there was nothing around. She felt the sweat drenching from her skin, the throbbing of her own eyes and the thumping of her heart against her chest. Her fingers weresmashedin between and,nails digging into her palm.hesitantly, She lookedaround for any sign of danger andcame across nothing but thin air. Nothing made sense to her anymore! And this truly scared her.With trembling body and shaking hand she walks close to the bed and spreads her hand taking the feel of bed. "Koi nahi hai sharanya! You are hallucinating! " she slapped her forehead with her palm. "This is hallucination please sharanya get a hold of yourself." She scolds herself. 

She stood freezed on spot, when the only sound of her rapid breathe couldnt be heard anymore. The impossible silent in the room settled a new hieght of fear in her. She desperately turned her head in sideway to see for any reason for this new feeling. It felt like she felt a strong presence of someone in room, like she is not alone here. And it all started again this time the effect turned twice then last encounter. As soon as a strong fragnance of star gazers hit her nose , her nerves freezed and breathing deepened.,She didntknowwhat her body was doing. Just when the last trace of self control was about to looseher body jerked in the loud noise of someone banging the door. She could here vyom calling her name , his begs to open the door to sharanya increased with every knock. Sharanya let out a muffle sound , her mind totally mixed up with fear, confusion and pain, she took a cautious and slow steps towards the door turning her head again and again sidewaysto confirm for any danger.
Thedoor was unlocked and as he rolled the switchthe door moved opening itand vyom took a sigh of reliefseen her. He entered the room without wasting a second and desperately searched for sharanya and oncehe saw it he ran straight to her pulling her in to his arms firmly. He shuts his eyes and let his senses drink the warmth of her body. It definately relaxed his senses. She is okay! The fact uplifted his worried self. He knew this sharanya standing before him didnt love him back but he couldn't resist. The feeling to loose her have overpowered to all his justifications. He leaned in a little closer till their forehead touched each other . she could feel his breathe fanning her face. She closed her eyes letting herself relax despite of the distraction that the cold breeze were giving on her neck and back. Vyom lips curled up in a soft smile and he pulled her back in a tight hug. Sharanya could feel his warmness pouring out in to her which soothed her sje leaned a bit more into him. Her face screwed up at the burning feel on her hand. Her hand felt like someone is pouring acid on it. She opened the eyes to see when her eyes roamed around the room. The entire room lights were dancing off and on speedily. She eyes her position she was still in a hug with him. Sharanya instantly brought her hands off him and struggled to get out of his grip.

Lost in love, vyom felt her shift and so he leaned his body just a little so that he could read her face when she answers while still having some kind of contact "Are you okay sharanya?" His voice begged. He saw tears in her heart and that pierced badly. His eyes too reflected her emotions fear pain and tears all were just a mirror reflection of sharanya. She hears the knock on the door and saw Mr rajan's man standing at it.
Sharanya parted herself from vyom and nods her head in yes without meeting his eyes.
Vyom turned hisheadtowards him and with a glance he asked him to leave. "We will discuss rest of details later." He said and waited until the man disappeared from his sight.
Vyom brought a hand over temple and rubbed his brow with two finger. He kept his eyes shuts to bring himself out of the terror his body and mind have felt just few minutes ago. The thought to loose sharanya is his biggest fear and he just faced a death in those seconds when... *clicked* the window made noise. Vyom turned his head towarss window and then looked back at sharanya. She was sitting tired and exhausted on the place beside bed.
Vyom quickly helped her and made her sit on made. He ran to get a glass of water and helped sharanya in drinking it. "Better?" He asked worried.
Sharanya gave a nod and kept the glass aside on table.
"What happened sharanya? Why did you scream?" Sharanya looked at him with pain and tears.
Its not like she wad not aware about her medicines side effects. But this things which she feels is definately not in the list of side effects. This is something else! Its just that she fails to point a finger at it. She can feel it around but cannot touch it. She can breathe it but cannot hold it. How could she make him understand something which herself fails to understand it. Everything is so unclear! She needs to find answers to herself after that only she can make someone believe her.
"I thought i saw someone." She kept her head low. Afraid of his reaction she didnt want him to not believe her. It was crucial and she expected him to understand if he wants to be with her in this journey.
He spreaded his palm on his face and wiped it "its just an effect of medicined. No one is there in the room."
"Someone was there." Her eyes darted towards the position where she had felt iton bed.
Vyom sighed "sharanya you need to take rest. There is no one here to afraid of. You are getting scared unnecessary" he holds her hand and made circle with his thumb to relax her.
Unecessary!!!!! Her eyes shoted up in anger.
"Do you think i have gone crazy! " she pulled her hand back and vyom heart instantly panged with hurt.
"Dont tell me all i feel and am feeling is unnecessary! You cannot even imagine what i am going through. I have lost my 5 years Mr Vyom Bedi. Do you know how it feels to belooseyour own memory ? " she got up and walkednearthe window.
A tear rolls out of vyom's eyes as he speaks "you think i donot understand you sharanya? I? I have understood you always when we were in love i always have understood your unspoken words, even when you were in coma for 2 years i have understood your silence and even now sharanya you are questioning my feelings for you ,yet i am trying to understand you and your reason to keep me away from yourself. what else you need proof for my love?" He voice thicked in the end and eyes shot up red.
"I cannot feel what you feel vyom. Coz you have your memory and i dont! I am not ready to start any new relationship till i dont get answers to all my questions. This journey is my only hope to drive answers from my faith." Shecupped face with her palms and started crying hiding it.Her hands once again started to freeze but she ignored it as her emotions were too high to focus on anything other than tears.
Vyom could no longer see her tears and he walks out of the room. He too want some space to control his emotions before he controls and heals her wounds.

 
He hits the break and the car haultsbefore a huge guest house with a screech. "Why are we here Vyom?" Sharanya asks as she unlocks the car and gets out of it.
"You wanted some answers and here you will get what you wanted." Vyom locks the door behind him and walks inside the guest room with holding sharanya's hand.
"Whose house is this?" She asked as they walked past the entrance.
"You are here to learn your past sharanya and i am just helping you for it." He replied
Vyom left her hand and walked upto receptions. He took out a piece of paper and showed it to the reception which after that she pointed at a alley and said room no 204.
Vyom thanked her and came back to take sharanya along with him. They kept walking in silent until they were standing in front of a door. Vyom knocked on it and waited. A very old man appeared at door. Sharanya blinked her eyes to recognize the face. He looked very familiar. Vyom and uncle exchanged a smile while sharanya tried to think where she had seen this man before.
"Excuse me uncle. I have seen you before?" She asked politely.
The man let out a small laugh. "Ofcourse you have seen me sharanya beta. few years back i was professor foryour class." This new piece of information enlightened sharanya and she leaned ahead attentively listening to the information he is giving her. She glance once at vyomand he replied with a nod and a smile.
"Sharanya he is our english lecturer Mr shyam bisht. Earlier he stayed inour town but after his retirement he have owned this place and have settled here. " he shared a smile at mr bisht to which he replied with a small nod.
"Mr bisht nice to meet you. I am sorry i didnt recognize you earlier actually i have lost my memory of five years. I am just trying to get those memories back.can you help me sir?" Vyom had already told mr bisht about sharanya's condition. This afternoon after lots of request from vyom over phone only mr visht agreed to meet them. He was happy to see these two are still each other's support.
"Ofcourse beta ask me what you want to know. I will help you to trace your memory." He smiled lovingly.
"Have I ever come here in this place? Kapali hill?" She waited in anticipation for response.
Mr bisht eyes instantly sparkled as he replied "yes , you are not new to this place. I clearly remember we have got all you senior students here for a seminar." He thought for a while before continuing " You have stayed here for 10 days"
10 days!!!! What happened in those ten days? Why i am getting hints on kapali hills! Sharanya thought to herself.
Mr bisht walked upto the cupboard and brought a huge album out. He placed that album in table. "This have all the seminar photos we have conducted all these years." Sharanya and vyom both got up and sat beside mr bisht on knees. As mr bisht was scrolling in photos he kept on sharing the moments when it was clicked. Vyom had a smile when he too remember the days when sharanya was in college with him and all those prankthey played. The room filled with giggles and laughters. Mr bisht is a jolly man he cracked jokes and pulled vyom's ear on sharing stories of vyoms and sharanya's prank and achievements.

Sharanya and vyom thanked mr bisht and walked upto the car. Mr bisht asked sharanya to be in contact with him while he blessed sharanya for faster recovery and return of her memories. Sharanya went to other side of car and opened it to sit. Just then she heard a soft guitar music coming from far. The music holds such intensity that she couldnt resist and didnt even realize when she have started following it a
. Once she tracked it she found herself standing before a room behind the guest house and she enters.
It was horribly dark but it didn't scare her. She followed it as if the rhythm have hooked her legs and were making her walk by some magnetic pull. She finally reached the center of room and suddenly music stopped playing. She looked here and there for the source of music and found nothing but a guitar and a small tape recorder. Her hands itched for the touch of guitar and shebpicked it up from the table Shelf. It was covered in dust and dirt yet it didnt stop her from moving fingers over the chord and a strange music echoed the room. She gasped and turned around to check but found nothing dangerous. Sharanya moved her fingers once again and laughed when funny rhythm came out of it.

I definately needs to learn music before icould play it , sharanya thought with a smile.

She sighed and placed the guitar back on table and made her ways towards door when the soft melody of ek deewana tha began to play again. Sharanya turned around and stared at the guitar and the tape recorder.They were sitting lifeless on table.on seeing this goosebumps began to rose on her bare arms.
"Am i hearing things?" She is about to leave the room when the window door began to shut and open due to air. She thought to put up a latch on it. As she stood before window to latch it she accidentallystared out of it and saw dancing of the tree that moved in rhythm with the howling wind.

"Something is not right. I need to get out of here soon" shranya talked to herself.

She tried to be quickly to pass the door when she felt her feet glued up on spot and a strong fragnance of stargazers flower enveloped her. She started feeling cold. Beads of sweats appeared on her forehead despite of being alaska cold around.
She feltlost in thought as in why she feels cold suddenly. Why are wierd stuff com ing in her plate.
Her reverie of thoughts broke by the ringing of phone.
Without glancing on screen flashing number she picked up the call.

"Hello." She said
*No voice*

"Hello" she felt she heard something so she placed the phone close to her ear.

*no voice*

"He..hello" she shivered

*silence*

"Sha...ra...nnnyaaa!" A muffled sound followed by the rustling of chains in background were all she could hear.

"Hello who is it?" She felt as if someone is breathing heavily in phone after a few helloes she "hello who is there?""someone please speak up or i am hanging up the call. When there was no response she got her phone off ears and was about to press disconnect button when she hears someone taking her name this time clearly and in pain. 
As someone is hurt very badly. She brought the phone back to ear and begged the person to speak. But to no luck there was no response. Suddenly she pressed the phone tighter over hears to listen to any sound and just then the song played again this time over phone
"Ek deewana tha..."

She is scared and she lets the reciever fall from her hand and a step back. When she felt she have banged into someone standing behind her.
A prick of fear paralyzed sharanya. She stood in silence in fear and dared to turn behind. With a lots of courage she checks behind her with side eye. "Vy..vyo..vyom!" Her lips shivered and refused to let any word fall without stammering.
She felt a hand on her hair caressing it. Her heart lifted up thinking its vyom. She turns behind and hugged him. Afraid by what happened just few minutes ago. She cried in his arms where he brushed her hair to calm her down.
Three loud bangs against the door made her jolt back in fear . she turns her face at door and grabs his arms tighter. After several knocks finally the knob to the door opned with a squeak and sharanya screeched, bringing her hands over her eyes sharanya screams.. She could see a male figure standing out in bright rays. She let out a shrill scream and started to faint. The man standing in sunlight started running towards her. Her heart accelerated infear and wanted ti run but her body gave up and freeze in spot just when she gave up on her life. She saw the face of the man. "Vyom"?
She pointed fingered at vyom. He took her in his arm as she falls on floor. Her eyes are sticked atthe spot where seconds before she have hugged a man and now there is no one but star gazers and snow... And a broken tape recorder...

Wow...I like your writing. Waiting for the next chapter...

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Tia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: iamnikki
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Wow...I like your writing. Waiting for the next chapter...

hello nikki!

Thanks for the complement and feedback. Next chapter will be post soon...😳

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Orchid

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Keep updating Tia. Beautiful write up.

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Tia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: _OrChiD_
Keep updating Tia. Beautiful write up.

thankyou lin...bada wala hug🤗

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RANJURIHANA

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Awesome awesome awesome. Poor Sharanya Mr ghost making her really scared. Shit man she hugged our beloved ghost. Thats really giving goosebumps not to Sharanya only but me also. Vyom have to really do more hard work to gain Sharanya love n trust. Waiting for next part.

Superb dear

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Tia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: RANJURIHANA
Awesome awesome awesome. Poor Sharanya Mr ghost making her really scared. Shit man she hugged our beloved ghost. Thats really giving goosebumps not to Sharanya only but me also. Vyom have to really do more hard work to gain Sharanya love n trust. Waiting for next part.
Superb dear

thanks for your feedback😃 ghost are there for such stuff. I am happy it made you feel same. Which means i got successful in making emotion feel somewhere. Yes sharanya is not an easy cake😆

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Tia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Nishita112
This is awesome

thankyou😃 please keep reading 😳

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Tia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Hey friends 🤗

I have written 3 chapter below. Please read it and leave your valuable feedback. They are my motivation.😳

Ps: chapter have different timeline. I hope i did justice with it. If you dont understand any part please let me know i will be happy to explain.

Yours

Tia⭐️

Chapter 3

The soft rays of sun entered the room with dabbed feet through the window and pecked her on her cheeks. Sharanya blinked her eyes several times before opening them. She scanned the room. She somewhere thanked god on realizing she was back in her hotel room. The traces of last night exhaustion still overpowered her and she attempts to bring a hand over her mouth and yawn into it, but stops alerting when she feels her hand rubbed against a skin. Sharanya lifts herself a little to see who is there next to her. The minute she laid the eyes on vyom , time stopped for sharanya as she admires him. He was curled up in a chair next to her bed. His eyes staring unblinking at the diary pages in his hand. Plenty of emotions pass through his face as he turns the pages by pages. Sharanya noticed the dark ring below his eyes,periodically his eyelids would droop downwards, only to have them snap wide open again, feigning alertness. His expensive looked unimpressive due to the several creases on them. His hair was unkempt and it ruffled against the soft breeze as if they were caressed by it. She frowns at the strand of hair ,which, fell on his forehead and couldn't help but itched with the feeling in her hand to push it back gently. Just when she lifts her hand to touch him, the spell broke and he looks at her worriedly. Vyom quickly kept the book aside in bed and got up. "You got up?" He asked as he kept a hand on her forehead to check for fever.

"Thankfully, the fever has gone." He shuts his eyes and sent a small prayer to the sky.

Sharanya fixed his eyes at Vyom while he was busy taking out medicines and water for her.

"Here, drink it . you will feel better."

Sharanya eyed the glass and took the medicine silently" drinking from it. She gave the glass back to him and he keeps it aside.

"Let me call the Doctor and tell him you are up. I will be right back." She adjusted herself and he helped her with the blanket, putting it neatly over her.

Sharanya watched him leaving the room and sighed. A minute, hasn't passed yet and Sharanya started to miss Vyom's presence in the room. She shuts her eyes and pushes the blanket off herself. When the flapping of pages dragged her attention from the door to the diary. She instantly felt curious to read the book and so she picks it up from the bed and sat on the chair where once Vyom was sitting.

She let her finger roam freely on the text of the poem and admires it. Meanwhile, the door opened and Vyom enters with a tray which has a cup of coffee and some fruits on it. He noticed the book in her hand and a small smile lift up his face.

Vyom keeps the tray on table next to bed and helped sharanya to sit on bed while he takes his place on the chair.

" I have spoken with the doctor and he said he will visit here in the evening to check you." Vyom kept the coffee cup on the table and pulls up the tray on his lap. He settles the fruits on plate correctly and sprinkles chaat masala on it.

"Last night , uncle aunty have called you ,but you were sleeping. I told them i will ask you to call them in the morning. So in a while please call them ." vyom moved the fruit plate ahead of sharanya still holding it. He hums while pointing her to eat from it. "And they dont know anything about last night. I didnt said anything. I know you wouldn't want them to be worried about you." Sharanya listened to him and nods while picking up apple slice from plate.

Vyom smiled when she took a bite from Apple. He then gently placed the plate on bed for her to finish it up. Sharanya quietly ate the fruits on her plate as she felt really hungry due to not eating for more than 12 hours since yesterday evening. Once she finished it she kept the plate aside on table and picked up coffee mug.

"Vyom?" She calls him and he turns with his brow squeeze.

"You ate anything?" She just realized she havent even offered food to him and ate it like selfish. Vyom holds his eyes on her face as his eyes wrinkled with happiness and nods his head in no .

Sharanya feels guilty and she turns to pick up an empty water glass from the table. She pours half of the coffee in it and stretched her hand to him. "Come , join me for a coffee". She says with a smile.

Vyom sat back on chair with a ghostly smile and took the coffee glass from her. Vyom stealed a glance at sharanya while they sip on coffee.

"Vyom?" Sharanya asks while holding the mug with both her hands.

Vyom hmms in response and looks at her.

"Is it written by you?" She eyes up at the diary still on her lap. Vyom chuckles and nods his head in no.

" These are your words." Sharanya stopped and looked at him surprised.

Vyom laughs " don't look at me like this sharanya. You were very good with poetries in your college time. This poetry-" he stopped as if thinking about something and smiles "-is written by you. Actually they are lyrics you wrote it for my first song at college annual function." This piece of information surprised her and she keeps the cup aside.

"Then will you sing it for me?" She requested stretching out the book to him. He smiles and nods in no.

"Ofcourse sharanya." How can he refused any request from the girl who is his life. He took the book from her and kept it on his lap. Sharanya knots her brow in confusion making him chuckle at her adorable face.

"I dont need to refer this book for lyrics sharanya. They are imprinted on my heart. They might be your words but have became my only truth." He says and shuts his eyes relieving all the beautifull moments of them In college when for the first time he had sang the song for her. He clearly remember how happy she was that day and have hugged her before everyone on stage.

Tu guzar raha hai mere dil se meri ruh tak..

Tu he tu , tu he hai sukoon mera

tu he hai junooniyat..

He opens his eyes and looks up at her with a love that cannot be described through words.

She could somewhere relate with his emotions and her sudden change in heart beat only confirmed her strong liking for this song and she shuts her eyes taking in all the feelings that the song has to offer.

When she shuts her eyes she sees a vague and unclear pitcher appearing before her eyes. It looks like people are clapping and cheering up. Sharanya clutched the bedsheet in her fist as the pitcher began to get slowly clear as if the fog is settling down from her memory.

Tu guzar raha hai mere dil se meri ruh tak..

Tu he tu , tu he hai sukoon mera tu he hai junooniyat..

Mere haal se bhala kyu nahi hai tu wakif

Ishq ke mutabika nahi hai ye munasif

His words are falling gently like a pleasant flower on her ear and her soul feels content with the music playing around. Sharanya focusses more to understand the pitcher clearly which her mind is playing. She could see a very unclear image of a person who somewhat looks like vyom and He is playing music on what looks like guitar. She feels attached to the music and she lives the emotions once again.

Suddenly her eyes starts blinking rapidly and her heartbeat is racing faster. The track of reel now pulls her in different set up where now she has walls around her , looks like someone's room and she is facing someone's back. Those line now have turned more pleasant with the rhythm that voice is playing. The person looks a lot different from vyom. He is taller and broader than him. Although the image is not clear yet she could connect with the emotion that the voice had.

Jo ye deewanapan hai tumse he adhatan hai

Tere sath lamha lamha jee raha hu katra sa..

Surprised with the intensity and emotions sharanya opened her eyes with shock and confusion. She found vyom still singing the song with passion with his eyes shut closed. She could no longer understand her own emotions. What are those clips? She is seeing why is she feeling such strong connection to the song. Lots of such questions began rising in her mind. A fading headache started to make its way and she brought a hand on her forehead.

Pyar tumse lakh hai..tu dhua dhua ya rakh hai..

Roz jal raha hai mujhme-

Her hands parted on their own and left her forehead . They got replaced with cold breeze which were blowing on her face and temple. The room was warm and she didnt feel cold on any other part of body but just her face and forehead. The feeling soothed her and she shuts her eyes again and once again the image rolled before her eyes. This time she was standing in a place with lots of white flowers around and smiles when the same music faintly falled on her ears.

- kuch kahi kahi zara saa...

Jayaz hai tujhpe deewangi meri

Rago se ruh tak hai rawangi teri

Music have stopped and she could only hear the breeze the breeze that passed by her. She saw an arm outstretched up for her. And without thinking she makes a mad run towards him to hug him tightly like she wants to hide herself from this bad world. As she is covering up the distance between them. She could see a smiling vyom standing before him and she hugs him with such a passion that made him stumble few steps behind taking her along with him. She holds him tighter in her palm and hides her face in his warmth.

The faint music have again began to play and she looks above her to see his face.

Jayaz hai tujhpe deewangi meri

Rago se ruh tak hai rawangi teri

Her face drains all the colour when she sees her own image happy with someone else whose face is hidden behind the fog. She focusses more and more but abruptly stops when a voice rings in her ear "sha...ra...nyaaa" laughing out loud.

Sharanya flashed her eyes open as fear crepts on her. She looks here and there for any danger but finds noone around. She glanced back to vyom question but his eyes are still shut and is humming the last note of the song. She looks around and finds lights are switching on and off in loop and a tremendous amount of cold filled her body and she hugs herself tighter and tighter bringing her knees close to her chest she rubs her hand against her body to gain some warm.

The feeling is so worst that it grows goosebumps in her hand and back of her neck almost like someone have hold her from behind and is breathing on her neck. When she turns to see behind her. She finds no one but thick air...

Edited by Waiting4you - 7 years ago