mriara Story * Javeda zindagi *Part 4 , page 7 up ! - Page 3

Sorry for late reply!!!!!

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

<font size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Loved chapter 1

Its different and engrossing!!

Mj-Tara mei aisa kya problem ho gaya tha ki dono separate ho gaya... 🤔

but you described their pangs in a brilliant way... 👏

And after 5 years dono phir mile wahi mandir ke samne

and the whole scene was dramatic!!!!

loved it...!!!

Aisi jagah kyun end kiya chapter...

Thoda aur padhna tha...

Update soon dear

Eagerly waiting... 😊
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Hi nira

Thanks a lot

Glad you liked it

Youll get to know the reasons why in the second chappy that im workibg on

Kya karun nira itna hi likha tha and update kar diya

Tjanks a lot

Originally posted by: irfan2

THANKS AND POST ANTHER PART SOON

Mention not

Will be updating near weekend

Originally posted by: miniapplepie

Mention not

Will be updating near weekend

ok thanks

thank you so much i enjoy 2 part best story

Originally posted by: Khadeja

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#3333FF">Great Update Mini ⭐️

MriAra are separated
Tara's pray is just Mrityunjay 😛
WOW !!!

MJ has become famous photographer 😊
MJ knows Tara still love him ❤️
5 year separation 😲

Flashback was painful... 💔
MJ was worried but Tara didn't listen 😔
She was also hurt...
What had happened ...? !
That they had to be separated

I have confusion ..
MJ had freed 5 year ago and separated from 2 months !!!! ???? 😲
Actually I don't get it 🤔
And when the flashback incident had happened.. 5 year ago ???
Sorry .. I have asked many question ... 🤪

Tara got wound 🥱
But MriAra meet 😃

Waiting for next update 😛
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Thank so much khadeja

They r separated due to a person you will get to know in upcoming chappys



Yes actually i had changed the daes its only 5 yeaes ... Thet been separated for 5 long years and tgey are very much in love

Thanks a lot khadeja

Willbe updatibg soon

Thanku so much dear

Will check it out now

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

I posted my comments

😛😛😛

Forgot that I res that box

Please check !

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Wow One more OS

Teaser is interesting and I really wanted to read more

keep writing girl

👏

Thank you so much !

Best of luck for your exams !

Thanku so much samreen

Yes i love mriara and love to writw ob them

Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: kumari27

Sorry for late reply!!!!!

Great start dear!!!

I read ur teaser & 1st chapter👏👏

So Tara mj separate😕

I loved how u described Tara & mj entry👏👏

So mj is photographer now great!!!

Yeh mera fantasy hai!!!

Kamaal ka scene hoga when mj click her fantasy Tara as super model😳

BT Tara kyun naraz hai mj se😕

Mj ko chhod bhi diya !!! Kitne pyaar se mj use manane ki koshish kar raha😭

Hamesha se ebi me mj ko Tara ke peechche bhagte dekhna chahti now getting full filling by ur story!!!

Keep updating😛

No worries dear

Yes he is very very famous photographer 😳

They were separated due to a person you will know who

In the nrxt chappys



I got your fantasy noted down 😃 thanks