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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: miniapplepie



Thanku so much nira

Will be turning this ibto a story with partts coz i cant finish it in one part


Glad you liked it

Will be updating today





Wow...

looking forward to read the next chapter!!!! 😃

And please try to give us a long update... 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Khadeja

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0066CC"><font color="#0033CC">Wow Mini another OS on MriAra 😃

You are writing despite of having exams 👏

The title is wonderful ⭐️
Tara and MJ are separated 😲
But Tara's only prayer is MJ 😳

MJ has become photographer 😊
He remembered her 😛

Like this teaser very much 😊
When you get time update first part 😊</font>
</font>



Thanku khadeja

happy you liked it

Yes in werkebd update karna trt karti hoon coz i have a bit of extra time abd i love to write in my study breaks ...

Yes i so wanted to give him ajob 😃 ⭐️

thanku so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Wow One more OS

Teaser is interesting and I really wanted to read more

keep writing girl

👏

Thank you so much !

Best of luck for your exams !



Will be turning it into a story coz i couldnt finish it in one part
Thanks glad you lijed it

Will be writing on mriara its one of my fsv jodi

Thanku dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zehrin

Another os on mriara 👏
I'm really looking forward 2 read further...
Please update fast.. But only after ur exams girl
Thanks for writing despite of ur exams...
The os is very interesting...



thanks a lot dear 😃

will be updating 😃 this weekend

afetr exams will be updating soon ⭐️

my pleasure coz i write in my study breaks 😃

thanku
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com





Wow...

looking forward to read the next chapter!!!! 😃

And please try to give us a long update... 😛



thanks nira

i am not sure about long , coz i am not having much time , but i promise, whatever i write , i will try to make it worth a read 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys hope you enjoy this part and please leave your feedback and likes hope you enjoy it

Part 1

It had been 5 years since he was free baa izzat bari ... and two months since they got separated ...Tara reached the mandir ...she was wearing a white and red salwar kameez ... they say... that whoever goes to that mandir and ties adhaga there ... their wish willbe fullfillled ... so he desperately went there ... to ask for her wish ...which was only one ... Mrityunjay . She placed her dupatta over her head and started walking to enther the mandir .

On the other hand ... mrityunjay on his way to his photo studio ...he had to click pictures of a top models in bridal look ...yes ...he was a one of the biggest photographers in india and had won many awards ..suddenly his eyesfell on a mandir ...he stoppedthe cad and looked out from the window ...this mandir was the ...was the same mandir where she used to come .and sometimes she he woukd accompsny her too ...
When he stepped out of the car ... his mind took him to the past where he always had run from ... this time he couldnt help it ... he didnt want to answer of his minds questions ...he had accepted ...she lad left him...she didnt love him... thats it...but his heart knew it somewhere that she did love him...and she still does... well...its been 5 years ...he had not receivee any news of her... his nights were passed thinking where was she...trying to find out where she lived ... his heart was hurting every day ...every moment ...it hast been a day that he hasnt thought of her ... he got lost in his past ...

Flashback starts
It was a never ending stormy night for mrityunjay... he was pacing extremely worried ...it ws taining and tara wasnt home ... he didnt know what happrenned ..why she ws behaving so dull so indiderently woth him... kind of pain was what he felt in hrr voice when she talked to hom...or when shye looked at him...

After a while ... he felt someone ebtering his room ... he turned around s he was facing the window ... and he saw a wet petite figure standing right in frpnt of him ... with wet hair ... wet clothes ... wet eyes ... which made person doubt did she cry or its the rain ... it was the first one but she wished he seemed it was rain ... she stepped in the room and mritunjay camevto her woriied and held her shoulders

Mj. Yeh kya ho gaya hai tumhe tara ? Kya halat bana li hai tumne khudki ? ( refering to her tears ) kitni mushkil se toh hamari zindagimein sab normal hoba shuru hi hua tha ...aur ... phir aisa kya ho gaya .ki tum mujhse itna...
Tara didnt let him finish and removed his hands from her shoulders and went to the bathroom ... with tears flowing from her eyes ... mixing with the droplets thst were on her face ...

Flashback ends when ...
A woman had fallen down.next to his carc... she by mistake stumpled and fellthere ... and her hand touched his back before falling on the ground ... he turned around and looked down ... the woman was hurt ... her foot was bleeding ... she had been cut because there was a broken bottle where her foot was ...
Mj . Imso sorry ... ap theek toh hai ?
He said while he waa kneeling down on one kneee ...and his eyes fell on the person he was searching for 5 years ...his wife ...Tara.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Loved chapter 1

Its different and engrossing!!

Mj-Tara mei aisa kya problem ho gaya tha ki dono separate ho gaya... 🤔

but you described their pangs in a brilliant way... 👏

And after 5 years dono phir mile wahi mandir ke samne

and the whole scene was dramatic!!!!

loved it...!!!

Aisi jagah kyun end kiya chapter...

Thoda aur padhna tha...

Update soon dear

Eagerly waiting... 😊

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great Update Mini ⭐️

MriAra are separated
Tara's pray is just Mrityunjay 😛
WOW !!!

MJ has become famous photographer 😊
MJ knows Tara still love him ❤️
5 year separation 😲

Flashback was painful... 💔
MJ was worried but Tara didn't listen 😔
She was also hurt...
What had happened ...? !
That they had to be separated

I have confusion ..
MJ had freed 5 year ago and separated from 2 months !!!! ???? 😲
Actually I don't get it 🤔
And when the flashback incident had happened.. 5 year ago ???
Sorry .. I have asked many question ... 🤪

Tara got wound 🥱
But MriAra meet 😃

Waiting for next update 😛

Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: miniapplepie



Mention not


Thanks a lot

Glad you liked it

Thanks a lot

THANKS AND POST ANTHER PART SOON
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
I posted my comments
😛😛😛

Forgot that I res that box
Please check !
Edited by SamreenJ - 9 years ago

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