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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Nice start Mini

So Mj is a photographer that's cool

(I was confused in the starting with 5 years and 2 months,
You meant 5 years and 2 months altogether Or you meant that for five years he was in jail, they were together
And after that they got separated for two months?
There is a little confusion please clear that point ! )
Now you are saying that Mj tara had been separated for five years
Ok let's assume that there is a separation!
They used to meet in a Mandir
That is romantic.

THEN
What had happened?
Why she left him or they got separated
Why he was in jail
Why she started behaving like that?

Sorry for so many questions but
That would be more interesting to know
So I will wait for your next update

After 5 years they met again in the Mandir
Very filmy I like that



Its A good update
Your story has more scope and
The plot is really nice and different

Thanks for sharing with us.
keep updating

🤗





thanks a lot samreen

no , they have been separated for 5 years ( actually i had changed the number then to 5 years )

no they got separetade due to a person you wil know who in te upcoming chappys

thanku i like a some filmi stuff😳😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
hi guys hope you lke this chapter please leave your feedback and lijes thanks a lot fir your support for this story
Part 2
His eyes couldnt believe what he was in front ofhis eyes... Was it a dream ? The person who he tried to search fir years madly is right in front of him...

On the other hand , tara s heart skipped a beat ... the reason why she wasnt coming in the area where he lived ... The reason why she didnt tell anyone where shelived ... She owned a shop now with various workers ... She hid from everyone ... Just so he didnt find her ... Why ... Why dud he saw her ? ... Wasnt it enough what happenned in the past ... Tara riminded that day ...

Flashback starts ( its the cobtinuition of mj flashback )
She was all wet ...with a pin drop silense ignoring what just mj asked and picking her pink kurti snd white salwar ... she went to the bathroom and shut the door behind her... Right after thst ... ... She cried her heart out. .. And remembered all the threats she had just received from Sam... Jairajs big brother ... He would have ruined jairajs and mj bussiness if she diesnt leave from shekhawat villa... She didnt want anything bad to happen. To them...soshedecided to leave... Tara was sobbing ... She didnt had much couragevto leave him un fron of him ... So she decided... She will leave tomorrow ... Early morning. ... When everyobes asleep. ...
FlashbAck ends
Mj was lookibgather... With teary eyes... He maneged to utterher name " Tara " ... And couldnt saw anythung else for o moment ... His eyes fell on her foot... She was hurt...
Mj . Oh..im... Srry tara... I...
He picks her up in his arms and walks to a corner ofthe mamdir staires and places her on thr second one... And sits on the first one ... He takes off her jooti... He holds her foot inhis hand ... Her foot was bleeding...
Mj. dekho kitni chot lag gayi hai tumhe ... Jaabe kahan dhyaan kahanhota haitumhaara ...
He took out hishandkerchief and tied it on her foot covering her wound ... He got up ... abd helped her to get up holding her from her waist ... She got up but steped wrong her her foot was hurting badly ...and she collided with his chest and he held her tightly against his body... Her head was burried in the crook of his neck ... Which made her blush... She felt his scenent... That scent ...that she felt five years ago... a shiver ran through her body... She looked up ... And looked at his eues. ... Which were looking at her Filled with questions emotions and feelibgs ... Emotions and feelings she had hiddden... But not him... she had badly hurt her foot ... So he lifted her up in his arms without bteaking the eyelock... Tara couldnt rake his eyes off him ... He was looking even more handsome than he was before ... And her eyes were filled with love mixed with pain... In that monent he got his one doubt cleared ... She does love him... Abd a lot... At least thats what he could see in her eyes ... Which were teary ... But she was controllibg her teaers ... He then broke the eyelock and took her to his car and placed her on the seat next to the drivers one ... He then got in the car ...

She then regained her senses and knew what was he doing... She was in his car ... she tried opening the car ... But couldnt
T...yeh khul kyun nahi raha ( she said trying to open )... Mujhe neeche utarna hai mrityunjay ... Abhi. ...( she said in a srtious tone )
Mj. ( in a relaxed tone and looking in front ) nahi khulne wala... Kitni bhi koshish karlo... Lock laga diya hai ...
T. Toh phir Lock kholo ... Please ...
Mj. Mujhe pata tha ... Ki tum aise hi karogi... Issi iye lock kiya tha ... ( he said looking at her )
T. Kya ?! Mrityubjay please kholo isse ... mujhe bagar jana hai
M.zid mat karo tara... Itni mushkil si mili ho ... Aur... Jaane ki baat kar rahi ho ?... ( saying this. ... He stsrted driving ) Kabhi socha hai ... Ki mujhse kya beet rahi hogi tumhare bina din katna ? Ya...
Ta. ( she cut him as she didnt want ti answer his question) kahan le jarahe hai ap mujhe ?
Mj. Jahan keval mein ... aur tum ho...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Wow mini... Superb update...
Tara in mj's arms... 😳
Ab mj tara ko kahan le ja rate hai... Jahan bhi ho... Kuch kuch tho zaroor honga... Hai na 😉
Eagerly waiting for the next chappy... U end this one on such a point...
U know.. When Mj tara are alone our expectations have no limit... Tum samajh gayi na...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Superb update Mini👏
I really liked this part very much👏
You portrayed MriAra's expression in a brilliant way👏

Tara had to left Mj because of Jr's brother's threat.

MriAra's fall scene...you described it beautifully!!👍🏼
Loved this scene!!👏
MriAra's eye-lock!!!
Ohooo Tara noticed that Mj looks more handsome than before...!!!😳

Tara is so ziddi...😵
But MJ knows how to handle her...😎
My expectations are a bit high this time...😛
I really hope we will get some romantic MriAra moments in your next update!!😉

Continue soon Mini😃
*Waiting*😊



Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Great Update Mini ⭐️

MJ couldn't believe that Tara was in front of him 😛
Both were shocked 😃

Poor Tara had to left MJ for his well being
She was threaten by Jairaj's brother ...

MJ did care of her and picked her his arms 😳
Tara was hurt but it seemed pain was felt by MJ 😉

Oh fall and holding scene was so beautiful 😳
MJ did affect on Tara ...
And their eye lock was lovely
O ho!!! someone noticed her husband looked more handsome than before 😉
MJ understood Tara loves him ❤️

the jiddi Tara wanted to get out of car 🥱
But MJ also knows very well how to handle his Jiddi wife 😛
Last line was killer 'Jaha kevel mainaur tum' 😊

This part was superb 👏
Update soon 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Zehrin

Wow mini... Superb update...
Tara in mj's arms... 😳
Ab mj tara ko kahan le ja rate hai... Jahan bhi ho... Kuch kuch tho zaroor honga... Hai na 😉
Eagerly waiting for the next chappy... U end this one on such a point...
U know.. When Mj tara are alone our expectations have no limit... Tum samajh gayi na...



Thanks a lot dear

Haan ... Kuch kuch zaroor hoga

haan mein samaj gayi ... Im sure hum sab ki halat yehi hogi 😳

Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
hi guys thanks a lot for the comments and likes and for letting me know you precious views

But please silent readers ... Please click at least like button coz there are many views but few replies ... Please guys ...encouage the writer with writing your comments and likes please
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
You started with mysterious angle
Nice Mini

Their expressions were awesome
aik doosre ko dekh ker👏

Oh why jairajs brother wants tara to leave Villa??

Wow MJ aur tara ka face off
Bohot romantic and intense hai
And you described it beautifully

Does she knows ke MJ jail mein tha for past 5 years?

kiya girna aur sambhalna hai
lovelyTara se ziyada Mj ko tara ka dard feel hota hahi👏👏👏
Acha hai mj tara ko sath leja raha hai
Tara to hai hi apne man ki kerne wali ziddi
Aur Mj ko pata hai Tara ko kaise handle kerna hai
Mj aur hot and handsome hogaya hai 😳😳😳

Muzza ane hi lugta hai ke chapter ka THe END hojata hai

Over all its a nice update
Thanks Mini for continuation


P.S: Thanks for clearing the confusion about numbers.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Superb update Mini👏
I really liked this part very much👏
You portrayed MriAra's expression in a brilliant way👏

Tara had to left Mj because of Jr's brother's threat.

MriAra's fall scene...you described it beautifully!!👍🏼
Loved this scene!!👏
MriAra's eye-lock!!!
Ohooo Tara noticed that Mj looks more handsome than before...!!!😳

Tara is so ziddi...😵
But MJ knows how to handle her...😎
My expectations are a bit high this time...😛
I really hope we will get some romantic MriAra moments in your next update!!😉

Continue soon Mini😃
*Waiting*😊





thanks a lot nira

this is one of the most romantic stories i have ever written

i hope to fullfil your expectations

from this chappy onwards , theres more mriarsa romance and romanitc flashbacks

will be uopdating soon





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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Khadeja


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#330000" size="2">Great Update Mini⭐️

MJ couldn't believe that Tara was in front of him 😛
Both were shocked 😃

Poor Tara had to left MJ for his well being
She was threaten by Jairaj's brother ...

MJ did care of her and picked her his arms 😳
Tara was hurt but it seemed pain was felt by MJ 😉

Oh fall and holding scene was so beautiful 😳
MJ did affect on Tara ...
And their eye lock was lovely
O ho!!! someone noticed her husband looked more handsome than before 😉
MJ understood Tara loves him ❤️

the jiddi Tara wanted to get out of car 🥱
But MJ also knows very well how to handle his Jiddi wife 😛
Last line was killer 'Jaha kevel mainaur tum' 😊

This part was superb 👏
Update soon 😊
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Thankks a lot khadeja

Mj tara still love each other so much
Mj knows it very well that tara loves him coz of the care in her eyw

Tgat last line was an indication that henceforward ove will be flooding the chapters

And he affects so much to tara

Will be updating soon

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