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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">You started with mysterious angle
Nice Mini

Their expressions were awesome</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">aik doosre ko dekh ker👏

Oh why jairajs brother wants tara to leave Villa??

Wow MJ aur tara ka face off
Bohot romantic and intense hai
And you described it beautifully

Does she knows ke MJ jail mein tha for past 5 years?

kiya girna aur sambhalna hai</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">lovely</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">Tara se ziyada Mj ko tara ka dard feel hota hahi</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">👏👏👏
</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">Acha hai mj tara ko sath leja raha hai
Tara to hai hi apne man ki kerne wali ziddi
Aur Mj ko pata hai Tara ko kaise handle kerna hai
Mj aur hot and handsome hogaya hai 😳😳😳

Muzza ane hi lugta hai ke chapter ka THe END hojata hai

Over all its a nice update
Thanks Mini for continuation


P.S: Thanks for clearing the confusion about numbers. </font>



Thank you so much samreen

Coz he didbt lije mj villain toh villain hota hai

Mj jail se out tha before also ... He had got out vefore she had left ...

Youre welcome dear

Will be updating this weekend soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Hi guys thanks a lot for the support for this story hope you like this part please leave your feedback and hit the like button please for motivation

Part 3


Mj. Jahan keval mein ... aur tum ho...

Taras heart skipped a beat when she heard those words... What was he going to do ? What was he upto ?
She saw from from thewibdow. ... It was cloudy ... A lush green area with lots of trees. ... A beautiful place ... She was trying to think hard ... Where waas he taking her ... First. ... He thought of taking her to his farmhouse ... But then he changed his mind ... He turned to go to his stable ... after a moment... She understood... He was taking her to the stable... She looked at him... With teary eyes ...why was he doing to her ? Why washe making it sodifficult for her to bare all those memories that she stsyed away from for the past 5 years... She wiped her tears... And trying to end the piercing silence
T. Apne toh bolatha ki jahan mujhe leke jaoge whahan keval hum hunge...
Mj. Haan toh ... Jahan main tumhe lekar jaunga... Wahan maria nahi aa sakti... Woh toh bahar hogi...
Hearing that name her tears fell from hrr eyes ...
Mj... Waise... Tumhe badi iccha ho rahi hai..." Keval hum honge " ... ( he said teasing her .. But she wasnt in a teasing mood... Hr heartt feared his questions...those which she thought he might ask her soon... )
She helplessly looked towards the window... It was cloudy ... Better said... The sky was really grey ...lije it was about to rain ... She got lost in her thoughts ...

Flashbackstarts ( resumind from earlier flashvack given ) ...
She came out of the bathroom after washing her face and changing ... mj was also changing...hehad just removed hisshirt when she cameout...sohe rushed to see her ...he stopped reachng the closet .. And to try to talk to her. ... she steped out from the closet ... And he took a step further. ... Looking down at her ... Pulling her from her waist ..holding her against his chest ... Tara was a litlke shocked but tried to ignore him by looking down... She was so close to him that shecpuld feel his hot breath on her face... Her hands were on his bare chest ...

Mj lifted her chin up to look at her ... even though he lifted her facw up her eyes were still not ready to look at him... Due to the fear ... And she knew ... If she sees him... She wont be able to control her emotions ...

Flashback ends ...

Tara felt thirsty ...
T . Paani hai ?
Mj stopped the car in a safe corner ... And gave the water bottle to tara ...while giving her... Their hands touched ... They looked at each other and mj yokk his hand off the bottle .. She drank from it... But coughed... Mj started rubbing her back...
Mj. Theek ho ?
T. ( stopped coughing little by litle ) haan ... Thanks
She then ... Turned hee face towards the window ... She closed her eyes in pain...in sadness... Mj noticed it ... He resumed driving ... His heart wasbadly hurt... They finally reached the stable ...
Mj . Yeh jagah ...yeh jagah mere liye bahut khaas hai tara ... Bahut zyada khaas

He stepped out of the car and helped her to do the same... After that...he held her waist and her one hand so dhe doesnt Fall ... She looked at him... His eyes met hers ... They shared an shortyet intense eyelock ... He then had to break the eyelock even he dudnt want to... Coz he coukd stay staring at her a whole day ... Then... Theywalked in the stBle... It was the same... The same as she left it ... they entered in the kind of little house there... He made her sit on the bed ... Looking at her but her eyes were low ... kneeled down
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Late hogayi uske liye sorry

Nice Update

Tara ko UC nahin jana tha kiya
per
MJ had taken her to UC 😃
Beechari Tara
kuch kaha bhi na jaye aur saha bhi najaye😕

Flashback was very sad
Tara ki majboori thi ke woh MJ ko chorde aur
Tara aj bhi majboor hai
UFF

MJ Tara ka aik doosre ko youn dekhna
Uff Heartbeat taiz hogayin

Overall it's a nice, cute and piyara update
Your are so sweet
ke itna acha likhti ho
Thanks a lot
🤗

Tum younhi Likhti raho aur hum youn hi perhte rahein😃
Edited by SamreenJ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
First of all sorry for the late reply Mini!!! 😛 😛 😛

Tara was scared and of course it was quite normal for Tara 😉 😉 😉
And MJ took her to the UC!!!! 😳 😳 😳

She too is in love with her MJ but she was compelled to hide her feelings!!!!
Bechari!!!
😔 😔 😔

Flashback was sad!!!
😳 😳 😳

She was helpless in the past and now again!!!!

Their eye-lock!!!!!


Hayeee!!!! 😳 😳 😳

Very nice update!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Update soon!!! 😊 😊 😊

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Sorry Mini, I am again late

Superb Update ⭐️

Hearing MJ's word Tara did scared 😉
MJ had taken her to UC 😛
Poor Tara had to hide her feelings 😔

MJ teased Tara talking about Maria 😆

The flashback was emotional as Tara had left MJ for her helplessness
Tara was helpless now again 😒
She just couldn't express her feelings 😔

MriAra eye lock was intense ...

You are writing on MriAra so well Mini 👏
It is not easy to write on a couple like MriAra 😊

Great work 👍🏼


Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

thank you so much

😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Late hogayi uske liye sorry

no problem dear

Nice Update
thanku
Tara ko UC nahin jana tha kiya
per
MJ had taken her to UC 😃
Beechari Tara
kuch kaha bhi na jaye aur saha bhi najaye😕

Flashback was very sad

mraira ka past romantic bhi hai
Tara ki majboori thi ke woh MJ ko chorde aur
Tara aj bhi majboor hai
UFF
majboori hi tara ki limitation hai otherwise she is also in love with him
MJ Tara ka aik doosre ko youn dekhna
Uff Heartbeat taiz hogayin

mriara hai hi aise , super romantic

Overall it's a nice, cute and piyara update

thanku so much
Your are so sweet
ke itna acha likhti ho

thanku mriara itne romatic hai ki likhta romatic hai there sucha wonderful couple
Thanks a lot
🤗

my pleasure

Tum younhi Likhti raho aur hum youn hi perhte rahein😃

i will surely write more

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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Part 2...
Sorry for late...actually I didn't noticed...

Finally..Mj ko Tara mill gai...
BT jis halat me mili mj ka dill toot gaya hoga...

Mj ki ankhon me ansoo...WO toh hona hi tha...

So Sam uncle is the reason behind separation...

Mj always knows that Tara loved him...now her teary eyes confirmed that love...

Tara bhi na kitna jidd karti hai aram se baat kar leti.

Achcha kiya mj ne lock kar diya...

Wah last line toh great hai...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Part 3...

Tara ki halat understandable hai...
Jisse chhoop rahi this aaj woh uske samne hai...

So mj stable jaa raha great place...

Flashback was sad & Tara ko helpless dekhna achcha nai lagta...

Mj samajh raha tha Tara ka situation...
So he tries to make soft environment...

Tara & mj ka maria ko lekar kamaal ka likha hai...


Update soon...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

First of all sorry for the late reply Mini!!! 😛 😛 😛

no worries dear
Tara was scared and of course it was quite normal for Tara 😉 😉 😉
And MJ took her to the UC!!!! 😳 😳 😳

uc is soo , love using uc in this story
She too is in love with her MJ but she was compelled to hide her feelings!!!!
Bechari!!!
😔 😔 😔

due to jairajs bro shes haas to stay away from him
Flashback was sad!!!
😳 😳 😳

She was helpless in the past and now again!!!!

hum , when shwe got to see hi aganin and control her feelings
Their eye-lock!!!!!


Embarrassed
Hayeee!!!! 😳 😳 😳

Very nice update!!!! 👏 👏 👏

thanks you so much dear

Update soon!!! 😊 😊 😊

willl try by best to update today

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