*'Tu Jaane Na!!!'* ViCha FF updtd pg.44 prt 16 on 26th September - Page 31

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Superb romantic update.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 I just love the concept of dinner date. They kissed and their kiss was so romantic and passionate. 😳
thank u thank u 😊 😊

I just loved the whole morning scene when she was trying to find her doggy and got him making breakfast for her.

It's really cute when a boy does it.


It was all very cute and lovey dovey scene which ended in a passionate kiss.😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Now she must have realized what she felt for him.😉
I too think so. 😳 😳

But ye Pracheen Uncle ko tabhi call karne ki kya jaroorat pad gayi thi? 😡He broke their sweet moment and uper se Happy Valentines Day wish kar raha tha. 😡
Vo hai hi aisa humesha kabab me haddi bana rehta hai, panauti.😡 😡

But apna Viraf bhi kam nahi hai.😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 He made a plan for Vday and selected a dress for her.😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 She was looking beautiful in that and he was lost in her beauty.

Apne pyaar ka acche se feel karana chahta hai vo Chhavi ko.


Beautiful arrangement by him.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Looking forward to see their romantic date.

You will surely not be disappointed.😉 😉

Continue soon darls.



a big thank u Versha for comment.🤗🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita25

Hey everyone commented here expected me so sad.😒 Sorry for being late.😔
Koi na kaun sa maine update kar dia? 😆 😆

Totally romantic update.❤️
thank u sweety 😊 😊

Viraf and Chhavi are always the best.👍🏼 Jab dono saath hote hain to baat kuch aur hi hoti hai.😉
I so wish ki Chhavi ko kabhi akal aa jaye aur us ko bhi real life me samajh me aa jaye ye. 😉 😉

I just love the cute Chhavi and Viraf who was answering her with full love.😳
He always love to do that.


Morning was beautiful as well. Chhavi found Viraf in her kitchen...hiiieee laaa
we all want such men but kahan milte hain itne asaani se.🤔
I do agree with u


Chhavi is lucky to have him. I think she finally realized the truth when they had kissed.☺️
I too think that. 😉 😉

But yahan bhi ye idiot aa gaya beech me Pracheen.😡
Humesha kabab me haddi banta hai bus. 😡 😡

I am happy that Viraf finally want to make it officially by bringing her on a date.

Yes the best thing he is doing


He chose a great dress for her.👏 She must have been looking sizzling.
Viraf has lost all his sense.😳 I love to see them romancing more and more.😉
Tabhi to apne hosh kho diye us ne. 😳 😳

Continue soon.



thank u so much for such lovely update 🤗🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago


thank u dear 🤗🤗
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Part 14:-

Chhavi could notice his gaze was fixed on her in a different way today and that's why after sometime she lowered her gaze unable to bear the intensity and passion in his eyes. He understood that something in his eyes made her lower her gaze.


Baahon Mein De Bas Jaane Sine Mein De Chup Jaane

Tujh Bin Main Jaayu Toh Kahan

Tujhse Hai Mujhko Paane Yaadon Ke Woh Nazraane

Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera


He came closer to her slowly but steadily, all the while looking at her with love and admiration. She knew he was coming to her. With each step of his, her heartbeats started racing faster and her heart seemed to jump out her chest. He was getting closer with each of his step and she was getting nervous though she didn't know why.


Teri Yaadon Mein Rahu Tere Khwaabon Mein Jagu

Mujhe Dhundhein Jab Koi Teri Aankhon Mein Miloon

Jo Bhi Saansein Main Bharu Unhe Tere Sang Bharu

Chaahe Jo Ho Raasta Use Tere Sang Chalu


Chhavi was standing there speechless and Viraf's eyes were fixed on her. In sheer nervousness she just closed her eyes and he was now facing her.


Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai, Dhadakane Meri Sun

Tujhko Main Kar Loon Haasil Lagi Hai Yahin Dhun


"Chhavi, open your eyes. I have a surprise for you."


She opened her eyes and found him still staring at her."Kya?"


"Come on I will show you." He brought her to the point where he had things ready to make their evening special. She saw the cake on the table and a bucket which contained a champagne bottle in it. The whole place was decorated with rose petals and she was happy to see the arrangements he had made.


"Yeh tum ne kiya?" she asked smiling.


"Obviously but I'm sorry I can't lie to you. I didn't do it all alone. I was helped by a few people with the arrangements."


She gave a big smile, "Sometimes you are really genuine. Tum sach mein itne humble ho mujhe yeh baat ab dikhti hai. Samajh mein nahi aata hai koi itna accha kaise ho sakta hai."


"Matlab main accha hoon?" he asked smiling.


"Haan."


"Toh yeh baat samajhne mein tumhe itna waqt kaise lag gaya?" he winked.


She felt as if he was taunting her. "Tum mujh pe comment kar rahe ho?"


"Nothing of that sort dear..." He said putting a few fingers on her cheek. "Now don't get angry and spoil your mood. I have many more things for you."


"Ok." She said smiling. Next her ears could hear melodious music surrounding her. She looked in the direction of the source of the music and all the musicians arranged by him surrounded them.


Chhavi was surprised and she looked at him who gave a smile in return and said, "I knew it would be best for you." In return her eyes spoke as she was happy enjoying this moment. She closed her eyes to feel the moment unable to see the next thing he did. He went down on his knees and put his hand forward to ask her permission for a dance.


Heart beats fast

Colors and promises

How to be brave?

How can I love when I'm afraid to fall?

But watching you stand alone,

All of my doubt

Suddenly goes away somehow


One step closer...


He waited for sometime but when he understood that Chhavi was not going to look at him, he called her name softly, "Chhavi."


She opened her eyes listening to her name and was left speechless seeing this side of him which she never imagined would be that romantic. She placed her right hand on his hand and he just gave a smile. He pulled her closer to him. His sudden action surprised her and she looked into his eyes.


I have died everyday

Waiting for you

Darling, don't be afraid

I have loved you for a

Thousand years

I'll love you for a

Thousand more


"Shall we?", She couldn't say no as it was the first time he had asked for a dance with her. She just slipped her hand into his and he smiled in return. He held her hand and pulling her closer, they swayed on the beats. His eyes were glued to hers never leaving them.


Time stands still

Beauty in all she is

I will be brave

I will not let anything take away


He had always waited for this moment. From the day he realized that he had started to feel something for her. He twirled her around and she just loved the feeling that he was with her. It provided a type of solace to her heart. His hands soon touched hers and a sensation ran through her body. She had been feeling this sensation for the first time today from the morning. His each touch was giving butterflies in her stomach.


What's standing in front of me

Every breath,

Every hour has come to this


One step closer...


I have died everyday

Waiting for you


He was enjoying her expressions, smiling secretly knowing very well what she was going through. Often he touched her purposely to see the effect of his touch and the crimson color of her cheeks said it all. She was blushing and that showed she was feeling the same thing as he was.


Darling, don't be afraid

I have loved you for a

Thousand years

I'll love you for a

Thousand more


He spun Chhavi around and made her look into his eyes again. They were again lost in each other's eyes and his continuous gaze made her numb. Soon Chhavi realized what his eyes wanted to tell her. Passion and lust were evident in his eyes. Not able to take it anymore, she hugged him tightly. He was just enjoying his effect on her as he had really waited for it for a long time and now finally he has her.


And all along I believed

I would find you

Time has brought

Your heart to me


"Chhavi..."


"Hmmm."


"Tum nahi janti maine kab se iss pal ka intezaar kiya hai. Us din se jab se mujhe pehli baar is baat ka ehsaas hua ki main tum se pyaar karne laga hoon."


"Kab ehsaas hua tumhe?"


"Pata nahi...bus yeh tha ki tumhe dekhe bina, tum se baat kiye bina, tumhari smile dekhe bina mera din nahi katta tha. Bus ab yahi chahta hoon ki yeh pal kabhi bhi khatam na ho. Bus tumhari baahon mein meri poori zindagi yun hi kat jaaye."


"Itna pyaar karte ho mujh se."


"Tumhe nahi pata kitna aur shayad mujhe khud ko bhi nahi pata kitna." He paused hugging her tight.


I have loved you for a

Thousand years

I'll love you for a

Thousand more


One step closer...


"Bahut tadpaya hai tum ne mujhe." pain was evident in his eyes of rejection.


"I am sorry but I promise it will never happen again." She said.


"Pakka promise?"


"Pakka promise."


One step closer...


I have died everyday

Waiting for you

Darling, don't be afraid,

I have loved you for a

Thousand years

I'll love you for a

Thousand more


No words were needed anymore. Sometimes silence speaks volumes. It was just a beautiful moment and both of them wanted to drench themselves completely with this lovely feeling of being loved by one another.


And all along I believed

I would find you

Time has brought

Your heart to me

I have loved you for a

Thousand years

I'll love you for a

Thousand more...


They were totally engrossed in the magic of the moment. He was hugging her from the back. After sometime, Chhavi spoke, "Viraf."


"Hmmm."


"I am hungry."


Viraf smiled. "Abhi...yahan? Chhavi abhi...I think this place is inappropriate for this. He said winking at her.


"Why? Can't we have food here? What's inappropriate in this place?" she asked confused.


Viraf blushed in return. "Thank God you were talking about food. I thought...you... ",And he left the sentence incomplete knowing very well the effect it would have.


"Maine aisa kya kaha?...Main to... " And she froze for a moment when she realized what he meant. "You...shameless man... ",She hit him on his forearm playfully. "Tum...na sach mein."


"Ouch Chhavi chhodo...kyun maar rahi ho mujhe? Maine kya kiya? Jo tum keh rahi thi wahi to samjha maine.


"Haan haan wahi samjha. Kuch zyada hi samajh rahe ho na." She again hit him.


"Accha baba now stop it. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki jab tum ko bhook lagti hai tab tum bhooki sherni jaise behave karti ho."


"Yeah exactly, hungry tigress."


"Really? Toh yeh tigress mujhe kab khayegi?"


She blushed listening to his words but still wanted to give a solid reply, "Anytime."


"Why not now?" he continued further.


"Not now, as you said this place is inappropriate."


"Don't worry." We can try my place for that.


Ogling her eyes, she said finally, "Now stop it. I know I can't win over you with that. But filhal let's have some yummy food."


"Sure my love." She blushed on hearing these words filled with love.


"Chalo." She dragged him with her.


They went to the place where the champagne was kept. Viraf had already signaled the guys to keep and serve the food for them. Soon the dishes were served and both enjoyed their meal feeding each other lovingly. The food was finished and it was time for dessert at which Chhavi got one more surprise from him. "Viraf!!! You remember that?" she exclaimed with joy.


He just smiled in return. "Of course my love. How can I forget anything which is related to you?"


"You are just the best." And she kissed his cheek.


Viraf blushed and soon Chhavi realized what she did and to hide her embarrassment she hide her face behind her brownie ice cream. Viraf knew that she got embarrassed and so to continue the conversation, he said, "Chhavi...you know...you have done it earlier as well."


She was surprised, "Kab?"


"Kal raat." He answered.


"Then I was drunk ok."


"Toh when you were not drunk today morning, then?" he purposely teased her.


Chhavi blushed but she thought to play along, "Woh to tum ne kar lia zabardasti."


"Accha maine zabardasti ki?"


"Aur kya?"


"To theek hai." He got up from his seat to surprise her and went closer to her, "Ab ek aur zabardasti karunga." And the next thing he did was unexpected. He sealed his lips with hers. Chhavi was surprised but she loved the touch of his lips on hers. Their lips started fighting for dominance. Soon his tongue entered inside her mouth tasting each portion of her mouth and evading her. She was no less; she knew not to surrender that easily. She was fighting with full confidence and was not ready to give up that easily. This battle continued for a few more minutes and they parted only when they were breathless. Viraf was not ready to leave her that easily.


He started kissing her face, the crook of her neck and her shoulders. Chhavi was getting goosebumps on her body. Viraf was getting more and more passionate with each passing moment and she was just drowning in the moment. His hands soon circled her beautiful mounds which made her more passionate. He pressed them and Chhavi moaned with pleasure. His hands were now working on her back. He left her and turned her so that now her back was facing him and he started giving sweet and wet kisses on her back. His hands were still hugging her curves pressing them occasionally. His lips were now on zip of her dress when she stopped responding. He sensed the tension in her body and it made him stop. They parted and Chhavi was still blushing so she lowered her gaze.


"I'm sorry...I was...just...just lost in flow of the moment." He was feeling sorry to have made her embarrassed like this.


"It's not like that." She felt sorry for him as she understood that he was taking it otherwise.


"Actually...you know the place is not...right." Viraf finally relaxed that she didn't mind. He just gave a smile. To change the mood, Chhavi said, "Ab kya kare?


"Kya?" he asked confused.


"My ice cream melted." She said disappointed.


"Oh."


"Haan oh se kaam nahi chalega. I need one more."


"As you say ma'am." He said smiling.


Soon they were driving back to their homes. She was thinking how to thank him for this beautiful night. They reached at her place. "So the drive is over now and your home is here."


"Itni jaldi." She said making a face.


"Wow ab jaldi lagne laga hai?" he teased her.


"Depends. Ab company itni hot ho to raaste chhote hi lagenge na?" she winked.


"Really? To itne hot driver ko kya milega return me?" he asked huskily.


"Tum bahut naughty hote ja rahe ho Viraf."


"Kya karu aap ke pyaar me kya kya ban jayunga I don't know." He winked. "Filhaal come to the point and tell me what will I get as return gift?" he asked.


The next thing she did was unexpected for him.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Of course Chhavi will feel shy if Viraf keeps looking at her so passionately!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Everything is so perfect and Viraf has done a fantastic job with the arrangements!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Viraf is indeed so sweet and truthful and said that he had help with the arrangements!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Waise Viraf is right that Chhavi did take time in seeing that!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

I loved the way Viraf went down on his knees and asked Chhavi for the dance!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

The song is very nice and simply perfect for their dance!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The dance was sooo romantic and passionate!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Viraf is just the best and chose the perfect song for this evening as this is Chhavi's favourite song!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The lyrics of this song from The Twilight Saga : Breaking Dawn is just made for them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Hungry is such a double meaning word!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Trust Viraf to interpret it the way he wants it to!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆

Very good Chhavi aur maaro isse as he deserves it!!!!

But then he makes her blush again and it is soo romantic when he calls her "My love"!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Viraf even remembered her favourite ice-cream and I agree with Chhavi that he is just the best!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

It was really sweet when she kissed his cheek and he blushed!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Chhavi is such a liar and said that he forced the kiss on her this morning!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

It certainly didn't look forced to me and she was enjoying it as well!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The kiss was so romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It was very hot and passionate!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

So Chhavi if you feel the journey was too short then invite him to stay with you for longer!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I am sure he wouldn't mind and would just love that!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉

I wonder what she gave him as return gift!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This part is fabulous!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏




Edited by Shaina_b - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank god this Forum is open now. I was really pissed off that when I read that part I couldn't comment here.😡 This part was indeed very romantic dear.😳 I love the proposal way and all the arrangements done by Viraf to express his love for her. They were so romantic and these special moments were so romantic and they do remember the place where they were.😉 I just love this song from Twilight suits them.😊 Now the forum is open than please do update it asap.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely fic Vartika dear! 😳
You write so very beautifully! ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for much awaited chapter🤗
Everything was perfectly designed by viraf...it was too hot & romantic 😳

Itne passionate eyes ko dekh ke kiska haal kharab nai hoga...

Pata nahi...bus yeh tha ki tumhe dekhe bina, tum se baat kiye bina, tumhari smile dekhe bina mera din nahi katta tha. Bus ab yahi chahta hoon ki yeh pal kabhi bhi khatam na ho. Bus tumhari baahon mein meri poori zindagi yun hi kat jaaye."❤️

Overall it was great chapter.

Next update plz. Soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey finally the Forum is open otherwise I suggested you to move this FF in to FF Forum.😊 Indeed it worth more attention than it gets.😉 Beautiful and romantic update. Viraf loves her so much that's why he arranged all these things for her. Her dress is fab I liked your selection.👏 The song is of movie Twilight na? 😉 I am impressed the way Chhavi accepted him and she even blushes many time.😉 Continue soon.

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