LOVE THOUGHTS......(SS ) updated Part 4 pg 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: tina_28

badhiya hai ji😛 ...ice-creame k flavor ne toh tara ka omi ko ullu banao program yaad dila diya, 😆 itna kuch kaise soch lete ho tussi sab😕

dear meri ek request hai...suspense aur thriller try karo,sare characters ko include karte huye, ho sake toh horror bhi include karo,mai sach me show se inn sare elements k gayab hone se dukhi hoon😔plzz tussi hi thodi khushi de doh,i know you can do this👍🏼

meri write up se badiya toh teri dp hain 🤣... pata nehi kabtak tik paungi in writing ke dunia mein...😆... so I can't promise... yaar tu na mujhe horlics ki yaad dila rahi hain...that "mom said i can do"... 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Dilsha

Loved it. So romantic. Tara is naughty.
Ur really talented
👏 👏 😉
Can't wait to read the rest
Dhak dhak dil mein stop kiya aap ne.
Me curious to know to the rest

it was just an idea to jump in fire... so I jumped... if that is a talent then I am surely talented 😆
one shot ek bari mein hi khatam hota hain... but if u guys feel that it really deserves to be updated farther then I may extend it... but can't assure u...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: sfarazi

Please continue Jui! I want to read more of this 😃 ❤️

thanks dear.😃... will try... but if I wud extend it ... it will always avoid the bedroom😉😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: selvi6690

Lovely! And interesting! Collegues! At next I want to knw their first meeting pleej Jui, add it there!

if i do the update then definately will try... thanks for the reading and the Idea😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: SoumiGirl

Good start Jui!!! 👏👏👏

Interesting to see Mriara in a realistic set up!! 👍🏼 Would love to read more.. Update ASAP!! 😃😃😃

realistic set up😆 ...akher hume rehna toh yehi hain😉 ... update... time will tell everything... saach batao... saach mein ye bakhwass acche lage ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: its-alexandrite

ye 1st attempt hai😲

really nice one👏

toh aap writer bhi hai...aur kya kya talents chupake rakhi hai...😃
🤗for you...

PINKED

haa first attempt hain ... aur last bhi ho sakti hain... 😆
thanks dear...🤗
writer ... pata nehi😕
talents... kya bataye .. baas samjho.. Mj ki sare talents hain mujh mein😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Its so sweet Jui...😳

Would love to read more...
Pls continue...!!!

sweet tha...😲 ... agar ideas mile toh...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Awww cuteee I want someone to get me a full fat ice cream without counting the calories. Pls continue jui 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Part 2

Mritunjay was not sure what to say ... was just listenng... Tara was talking like express train...as if after years she has got some one to tell her words ... . past 2 years with whom he has worked day and night... did a lot of arguments ... who talks less than minimum ... keep a distance with everyone around ... T his is not that tara ... He don't know this girl at all ...his thoughts interrupted by tara ... " u r thinking ... I am crazy... right? ... u r allowed to ... it's not baseless totally... hahaha... ok... Listen..can u drop me home ? plz..." "yaa...sure... let's go... It's been late ..."

They were in the car... Tara was trying to find out songs fr playing in the car from music Cds ... "hey! U like tarkish pop... u never told... " tara seemed excited ... wanted to play those songs but music player got some problem in the middle of the song... He turned on the radio... it was Saturday night ... and a full -moon ... that station decided to do a program with requested old songs and gazals... tara and mj both were wandering in their thoughts until the RJ said... " our next caller is from haydrabad... hello... What's your name?... hi. It's sunaina... I'd like to request the song called " hoshwalo ko khabar kya " by jagjit singh' ... thank u for calling sunaina... so now we r playing the song u've requested ... enjoy ..." MJ and tara shouted out together loudly " that's my fab song!"... looked at each other with a surprised expression on their face... Then laughed their heart out... Song began to play...

Hosh walon Ko Khabar Kya Bekhudi Kya Cheez Hai
Ishq Kije Phir Samajhiye Zindagi Kya Cheez Hai
Hosh walon Ko Khabar Kya...

Unse Nazrein Kya Mili Roshan Fizayen Ho Gayi
Aaj Jaana Pyar Ki Jaadugari Kya Cheez Hai
Ishq Kije Phir Samajhiye...

Tara's home was there ... She bid a good bye... was a little bit awkward ... she has talked too much for one day... mj tried to make her comfortable ... said... " oye... twikle twinkle little star !...tu Monday ko naye jhagrhe ki plan toh nehi banarahi na? smile kar zara... kya pata... Kal ho na ho... " ... tara cudn't help but smile... " yaa.. ofcourse... puri taiyari karke aungi... chalo bye..." "ye hui na baat... bye..." MJ went away...

He returned to his 2 bdh apartment ... all dark... He went towards the big window ... moved the curtains aside...From 17th floor ... Everything seemed so small ... he opened his laptop... played the same song once again ... skip...skip.. play...

Khulti Zulfon Ne Sikhayi Mausamon Ko Shayari
Jhukti Aankhon Ne Bataya Maikashi Kya Cheez Hai
Ishq Kije Phir Samajhiye...


Hum Labon Se Keh Na Paye Unse Haal-E-Dil Kabhi
Aur Voh Samjhe Nahin Yeh Khamoshi Kya Cheez Hai
Ishq Kije Phir Samajhiye...

... he was again in deep thoughts... he didn't realize when he started to think about how things were 2 years back ...

...o......o...o...o...o...

Hope it wud be enough...I may take a long break any day... so I am updating it as a bonus... Love it or hate it.. please inform...😊

JUI

Edited by BlueJasmine - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Aww Jui make your updates longer dude! I'm loving this so much ❤️

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