LOVE THOUGHTS......(SS ) updated Part 4 pg 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear friends...

this is my first attempt to write up something in fiction section... try to tolerate me... don't know yet what it will be... an OS( this is the most possible option) ... FF or something else... good luck( to u of course😉)

JUI

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( mj and tara r not married here... Colleagues ..at a Production house... MJ recently has proposed tara fr being in a relationship with him...in the office lift ... but tara didn't say anything yet after 15 days...but yesterday... agreed for a date...)

Where they were sitting ... from here the sunrise , sunset and the sea... all can be captured ... it is about 8:30... sea is all they have now... with the silence in the air... mritunjay looked at tara... this girl has come on a date in white shirt -blue jeans...with a pair of green ballerina shoes..a small messenger bag...and absolutely no jewelry... He has dated a lot of girls in his life but never seen a girl who comes to her first date like this... She may be not the most beautiful girl he has ever seen... but there is something within this girl ... he feels contended when she is around...this time he is more than sure that she is the one...did some chit chat at first...but last one hour ... they didn't say a word... But that silence is not uncomfortable...they r watching the sea together...

" so ... U love me?" suddenly tara said to mj ... "yaa...I think so " he replied "...ok .then prove it ..." She said... " I want pistachio -cherry- Choco chip ice cream... Full fat... with extra chocolate sauce on top...right now...go get it." ... MJ smiled ... said... " ice cream is all that u wan..." suddenly remembered something and stopped ... there r a few ice cream parlous in this area...and this particular flavor is very difficult to be found here... But said " wait for a while...in the car."

After half an hour... MJ got back with ice cream... He didn't find the exact one but close to it... cherry wasn't there in the ice cream ... so he has brought some caramelized cherry along with the ice cream... tara silently stared at MJ for few moments ...got out of the car ...with ice cream cup ... saw two street children on the roadside ...gave them the ice cream ... was watching them lovingly to be happy with an ice-cream... MJ was now in shock...tara smiled at him for the very first time...and then said " aise hairani se kya dekh rahe ho... tum pass ho gaye ...It was a test..." "a test !!!! (? )"... MJ said with a great difficulty ...( was some anger also there ?) Tara came near to him ... make him sit on the rock and said... " u really love me... I asked for full fat ice cream... and a difficult flavor to found... I'm overweight already... u can see that... But u have get me the ice cream with much effort ... u didn't care tht cause of the full fat ice cream I will gain some more weights... U want me to be happy at any cost...that says...my happiness mean something to you... that's called love...isn't it ? " there was full moon in the sky...and she was smiling beneath... MJ couldn't decide which seemed more beautiful to him...

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Ignore the silly mistakes... and guide me with your valuable comments...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful OS
Tara testing MJ to see if he really loves her , that was just fantastic
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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badhiya hai ji😛 ...ice-creame k flavor ne toh tara ka omi ko ullu banao program yaad dila diya, 😆 itna kuch kaise soch lete ho tussi sab😕

dear meri ek request hai...suspense aur thriller try karo,sare characters ko include karte huye, ho sake toh horror bhi include karo,mai sach me show se inn sare elements k gayab hone se dukhi hoon😔plzz tussi hi thodi khushi de doh,i know you can do this👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it. So romantic. Tara is naughty.
Ur really talented
👏 👏 😉
Can't wait to read the rest
Dhak dhak dil mein stop kiya aap ne.
Me curious to know to the rest
Edited by Dilsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please continue Jui! I want to read more of this 😃 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely! And interesting! Collegues! At next I want to knw their first meeting pleej Jui, add it there!
Edited by selvi6690 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good start Jui!!! 👏👏👏
Interesting to see Mriara in a realistic set up!! 👍🏼 Would love to read more.. Update ASAP!! 😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ye 1st attempt hai😲
really nice one👏

toh aap writer bhi hai...aur kya kya talents chupake rakhi hai...😃
🤗for you...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its so sweet Jui...😳
Would love to read more...
Pls continue...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Beautiful OS

Tara testing MJ to see if he really loves her , that was just fantastic
loved it

thanks dear for reading...

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