LOVE THOUGHTS......(SS ) updated Part 4 pg 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww Jui... Its so beautiful... šŸ¤—

Silence... And Sea...

Full fat icecreame... Ohhh wow... Kya likha hai...
Just loved it...

Going to read next part... ā¤ļø
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohhh wow... So beautiful... Gazal is just perfectā¤ļø

Loved it šŸ¤—
Edited by ShagufElina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohhh God... Me too Dancing with raindrops and blushing like Mj...

Awww its so awsummm...

Arrogant girl... Creepy attitude...

Party... 😃

The way u described her saari... Ohhh just beautiful...

Kuch na keh kar bhi bohot kuch kaha hai... ā¤ļø
Usse dekh dil bass ab wahi thehar gaya hai... ā¤ļø
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice jasmine... Fine i say its wonderful though no one find this is written by fun loving writer m sorry...m not a big fan of kapil nor of his show so i can't compare him with you... Truth 2 be say intially i dont want to give it a try as if it is belong to current track then i better make my distance but it was so beautiful you describe a normal girl so beautifully coz no one born as a angelina jolie or cp ... Every girl has her own flaws ... Asusal my prob with hindi song but never mind it apt here for mriara... Keep writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: fraser

Nice jasmine... Fine i say its wonderful though no one find this is written by fun loving writer m sorry...m not a big fan of kapil nor of his show so i can't compare him with you... Truth 2 be say intially i dont want to give it a try as if it is belong to current track then i better make my distance but it was so beautiful you describe a normal girl so beautifully coz no one born as a angelina jolie or cp ... Every girl has her own flaws ...Asusal my prob with hindi song but never mind it apt here for mriara...Keep writing

...I'm truely honoured dear...tht u hav read &liked this...havn't written anything like this before...my major writing criteria is analysis...bt ppl doesn't like to be serious all the time...tht's why i tried comic style...
But in this case...i'm totally dependent on my pov about life,ppl,love...had no idea how it wud be look like(still don't knw)...i just can say it won't be abt only mriara or just the romantic love...love has many form,many life...it comes in various shapes & sizes ...frm different sources...so get ready fr the journey.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: BlueJasmine

...I'm truely honoured dear...tht u hav read &liked this...havn't written anything like this before...my major writing criteria is analysis...bt ppl doesn't like to be serious all the time...tht's why i tried comic style...
But in this case...i'm totally dependent on my pov about life,ppl,love...had no idea how it wud be look like(still don't knw)...i just can say it won't be abt only mriara or just the romantic love...love has many form,many life...it comes in various shapes & sizes ...frm different sources...so get ready fr the journey.



ofcourse jasmine everyone has their own liking towards reading... All i want to say give a try to your writing... You come out as bestest
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful ā¤ļø( im imagining vicha insted of mriarašŸ˜‰)
waiting for nxt partšŸ‘šŸ‘

Edited by its-alexandrite - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: its-alexandrite

beautiful ā¤ļø( im imagining vicha insted of mriarašŸ˜‰)

waiting for nxt partšŸ‘šŸ‘

u can imagine viffy for MJ but tara is different from chhavišŸ˜† ..me also waiting for the next part...šŸ˜‰ ...it is stuck in traffic jam on space...will take time🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superbly written JUI ''' very creative thoughts JUI The way u describe the scenes through write I can really imagine them
After Reading the first part I could not keep myself from reading the rest
Gonna try pistachio with cherry choco chips topping for sure
That gazal was perfect choice it made the whole write up of part 2 magical
The way u mould Tara character through whole 3 parts is really superb Jui '
Tara's dressing is superbly putted in words JUI could imagine it
Flashback was awesome JUI loved it for real
Loving the both characters
Keep Writing n pls continue
Sorry for the late comments
Thank u for the pm JUI
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4

When tara woke up ... rain had been stopped ...the sun was shining straight over the head... she is quite flexible with her sleep...for working days she is an early riser... but on weekends ... she loves to sleep like a baby...

The phone was ringing...for the fourth time ...tara knew who it is ...switched it into the silent mode ...threw the phone in the closet ...went to freshen up...

At the same time...Somewhere in Darjeeling...Shekhar Roy Chowdhury was dialing his daughter's number again and again ...after 6th time he got sure that she won't pick up ...he thought something ...then made a call to his brother , Shankar in pune... " hello..shankar...tinni isn't picking up the phone...ya...again...will u please try once ? or call Mrs. Sharma...her neighbor...please inform me ...&..." he stopped for a sec..."...if tinni talks to u ...don't tell her I've said u to...bye " ...

Tara's home...calling bell rang for several times... "who has come at this hour? " ...tara said in her mind... opened the door..it's mrs sharma... " kavita aunty ! kya hua aunty ..koi problem? " " nehi beta ...i made some coconut barfi this morning...u love it na...so have brought it for u ...I've called u ..but u didn't pick up..so thought...i should go and check that u r alright ...season is changing...kab kaun bimar paad jaye kaha nehi jaa sakta... " ...after some more conversation mrs Sharma took a leave ...

Tara shut the door ... gave a look to those barfi...it is strangely warm...if it was made in the morning then it shud be in normal temperature by now ... Meaning something is wrong ...aunty actually came to check that is she alive or dead... must be kaku is responsible for this... uff...she went to her bedroom...opened the closet to take the phone out... Exactly what she thought ...20 missed calls...6 from dad...12 from sankar kaku ...rest of 2 from kavita aunty...she made a call to sankar kaku ...though by this time he must be got informed about her well-being..."hello...tinni...what is this ma? Where u were been ? why didn't u pick up the phone? ... we all got worried..." sankar chowdury said anxiously ... " kaku ! relax!...i'm fine...was sleeping ... Late nights...phone was in silent mode... where mira- ma ?...wanna talk to her... ."

after 15 minutes conversation with mira- ma tara was feeling much better...mira ma's official identity is tara's kaki & masi...but practically she is her mother ...tara can't remember her mom ...how was she... Mira-ma never let her realize her mom's absence in her life... this lady love tara even more than her two sons... Arun & Arnav ... just before cutting the line ...tara said to give phone to shankar... " kaku...I'm sorry for the morning...take care ...and..." gave a pause and said ... "...inform him that I'm alive...must have forgotten to eat breakfast & to take medicine in tension...I know he called u...no kaku...he doesn't love me...if he did ..he wudn't let me go far from him... me always wanted to be with him ...but he always ran away from me...ok fine ...now me also don't need him...no need to mention my name to him...bye " tara put off the phone ... Crying...

In Darjeeling ... shekhar's phone was ringing ... " hello ...Shankar... is everything fine? Ya..thanks... breakfast... no didn't get time ...oh ...medicine I forgot ...will take ..don't worry ..." with a mixed feeling shekhar ended the call... looked upon the sky... it's cloudy...this kind of atmosphere makes him nostalgic ... that day was like this as well ...

Flashback :25 years ago ...31 october ...Assam ...

Shekhar went to his ancestral village for two weeks ...his father was a native landlord there once upon a time ...rupongkor roy chowdhury... Still they had some property & tea states there ... Shekhar, Shankar and their elder sister dhara had equal share in those property...but ironically for 5 generations no girl has been survived more than 25 years in this family ... dhara also died in an accident just the night before her marriage at the age of 21...after her death incident...with her memory on every wall ... it was impossible for the members of roy chawdhurury family to live there anymore ... So they moved to guwahati ... but for taking care of the properties Shekhar and Shankar used to go there once a year ...this time they hav come there after 2 years ... shekhar's wife Vishakha was 7 months pregnant ...she wasn't suppose to do long journey ...but she insisted... so her sister & Shankar's wife...mira also accompanied her...

On 31st October afternoon they were returning their home by car... in the middle...suddenly Vishakha felt her labour pain has started ... and was unbearable...there was no hospital within 20 kilometers... they saw a tribal village there ... went there with vishakha ... after they got into the village ... the storm started..it was cloudy frm morning...that horrendous storm continued till midnight... Strangely that village and the villagers were safe ...Here, after 9 hours of labour ... at about 1:00 am ... A baby girl was born ... an old women came out with the baby ... Gave her to shekhar...shekhar couldn't take his eyes off from that little angel... shekhar asked the lady about his wife..she said vishakha is alright ...sleeping ...

At the morning ... the chief of the tribe came to shekhar ... shekhar thanked him for his hospitality and co-operation... the chief said... " no need to thank me... every thing is decided by god ...but I've a request... Will u name your daughter as tara?..."

Shekhar was surprised with such kind of request he asked the reason ...just then Shankar came there in a hurry said that last night ...during the storm cause of landslide 2 car and 3 buses have faced accident ... Cause of that the road is block for sometimes ... "

The chief said with a smile... " you've got your answer son ...she is godess herself...if this reason is not enough for you then just look at your daughter's eyes... they r clear like water ... sparkling like stars ... What could be more perfect name for her ? " the chief left ... shekhar wasn't that religious ...but that miracle and chief's words forced him to name her as TARA ...

" sir...lunch is ready...please come" shekhar got his sense back hearing the voice of his trusted butler martin... shekhar stood up with a heavy heart ...and a thought in that ...possibly he may never be able to tell his daughter that how much he love her...

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Ignore the silly mistakes...and give your valuable comments... ur comments r the fuel of my writing... otherwise this writing car cud stopped in the middle...šŸ˜‰

JUI

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