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Posted: 11 years ago
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and mariam mein 18 se upar hoon ya neeche
u cant stop me reading ur OS😉
but am glad that now am offically allowed by u 😃😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: S696_sehreen

Am regreting why didnt I read this early...
Again sorry its only this time I get time to read or make something
Mariam my badhi sis this waw amazing and beautiful written 👏
Loved how u build up the story too good along with the song
And shairy... I could imaginr everything happening
While readind this ...
U know I really want something like this happen tomw
Cant say more but the last part were very thouching
Some romace next time please 😳




Awww don't regret yaar, aphle read karo ya baad main the thing matter is that u read it. rit
I understand yaar, as I also get this time to do anything...so I can surly understand ur plight...
Hehe yaar badhi sis bolna zarori tha, but chalo koi baat nahi...
Thanks Shereen, glad u liked the OS...u can give all the credit to this song, its just made me change the shole scene I had in no time.
Glad u were able to imagine the scene,
How I wish something like this to happen to yaar, I mean at least a nice sad song tu banta hai showing Taara feelings, aise ruka sukha uska wait kar rahi hai, bina koi real emotions ke, like u know when a person does when they are really waiting for someone and they had that belief that they will surly come at the end...
Awww last part tu sachi main touchy thi...
Next time romance can't promise, abhi I am not into romance mood yaar

but will try...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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and mariam mein 18 se upar hoon ya neeche
u cant stop me reading ur OS😉
but am glad that now am offically allowed by u 😃😆
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Yaar 18 se upar hi bole le, neeche mat warna tu sachi ki bachi ban jayegi
Haye aisa kya, well yeah I can't really stop u...
Don't be glad itna Sehreen, tune officially allowed sirf is OS main mili hai, nd maybe the next one too...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazzyBusy




Awww don't regret yaar, aphle read karo ya baad main the thing matter is that u read it. rit
I understand yaar, as I also get this time to do anything...so I can surly understand ur plight...
Hehe yaar badhi sis bolna zarori tha, but chalo koi baat nahi...
Thanks Shereen, glad u liked the OS...u can give all the credit to this song, its just made me change the shole scene I had in no time.
Glad u were able to imagine the scene,
How I wish something like this to happen to yaar, I mean at least a nice sad song tu banta hai showing Taara feelings, aise ruka sukha uska wait kar rahi hai, bina koi real emotions ke, like u know when a person does when they are really waiting for someone and they had that belief that they will surly come at the end...
Awww last part tu sachi main touchy thi...
Next time romance can't promise, abhi I am not into romance mood yaar

but will try...

Well then thank u song jee😆
and yes agree ruka sukha wait se maza nai ayga
but tara will faint that gonne happen for sure
Dont worry will love to read anything u write😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazzyBusy

opppsss but mein kya karo u always reminds me my birth year hehehe
saachi mein abhi tak offically nai hoi, chal i will wait for the day when u
make me offically allowed
ohh next one waiting😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: S696_sehreen

Well then thank u song jee😆
and yes agree ruka sukha wait se maza nai ayga
but tara will faint that gonne happen for sure
Dont worry will love to read anything u write😳



Yeah thank u so much song jeee
Kya maza de raha hai mujhe, its sooo soothing, can u believe it I am listening to the song right now...have listen to it more than 10 times now

kya faint hogi yaar, she is taking a nap, tu obivisouly she well get the enought rest to boost her energy back...but yeah this a show anything is possible
main bakwas se bhi bakwas likhon and will u still read it???

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: S696_sehreen




Hehe tu kuch mat kar just enoy these moments of being younger yaar, coz once ur in the age of being an adult, gosh it will be hectic, to much going on in ur life, phewww
Nahi abhi tak officially announcement nahi huwa hai tere !8+ hone ka...
next one, I don't know kya hoga, didn't catch anything interesting in todays epi so Don't know what to write on...maybe I will take a break from this one and go back to my FF writing...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazzyBusy



Yeah thank u so much song jeee
Kya maza de raha hai mujhe, its sooo soothing, can u believe it I am listening to the song right now...have listen to it more than 10 times now

kya faint hogi yaar, she is taking a nap, tu obivisouly she well get the enought rest to boost her energy back...but yeah this a show anything is possible
main bakwas se bhi bakwas likhon and will u still read it???

ofcourse i will read yaar😃
and badhi sis jee u cannot write anything bakwas thats am 100% sure
maybe woh exectly faint no ho but hone wali hai tabhi MJ ki entery hogi na😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazzyBusy

well i know what u mean but the things is I came to know some realities
bit early, so i dont expect my 18+ to be good, but yaha toh mein bass mazak karti hoon
am actually not waiting to be over 18 😉...
comming to the epi yes epi was bass ok and i dont think u can write anything on it
bcoz u already have written na so let it be for next two episodes :))
go back to ur FF

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Posted: 11 years ago
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mariam...tumne to ......tumne to...

kamal ka likha hai yaar...


meine sapne mein bhi aisa kabhi socha nahi...


wo shayari to har jagah ekdam perfect hai...i was not read it...actually i was living in that moment...perfect this is only i can say...


i thought u r very good in aham aham os but this kind of os i never expected form you... kaha chupa ke rakha tha isse


bechari tara kitna der uska intzar kiya ...lekin uske aane se pehale wo RP ...gosh somebody kill him for me...i cant tolerate him ...


meri tarako usane maar dala...


and wo mj ... wow yaar usake emotion bi kitane achhe se dikhaye hai...poor guy stuck between his wishes and duties...and because of this he is not able to reach on time to tara...


jab mj UC pohcha tab tara khoon se lathpath thi and mj usse dekhe bina aage badh gaya...god mein to full on tension mein aa gayi thi...

wo last wala vrat opening scene ...haye...u make me teary



mariam dear please please apne writings skills humse chipao mat nahi to next time mein...chodungi nahi...

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