You're/were the only EXCEPTION-~- MriAra OS MY Version KarwaChauth - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: S696_sehreen

ofcourse i will read yaar😃
and badhi sis jee u cannot write anything bakwas thats am 100% sure
maybe woh exectly faint no ho but hone wali hai tabhi MJ ki entery hogi na😆



Hehe acha then u don't know me...
yeah thats a possible entry of MJ she may be at the verge of feeling lie fainting par hogi nahi, warna wo fast kaise todi gi

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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008




mariam...tumne to ......tumne to...

kamal ka likha hai yaar...


meine sapne mein bhi aisa kabhi socha nahi...


wo shayari to har jagah ekdam perfect hai...i was not read it...actually i was living in that moment...perfect this is only i can say...


i thought u r very good in aham aham os but this kind of os i never expected form you... kaha chupa ke rakha tha isse


bechari tara kitna der uska intzar kiya ...lekin uske aane se pehale wo RP ...gosh somebody kill him for me...i cant tolerate him ...


meri tarako usane maar dala...


and wo mj ... wow yaar usake emotion bi kitane achhe se dikhaye hai...poor guy stuck between his wishes and duties...and because of this he is not able to reach on time to tara...


jab mj UC pohcha tab tara khoon se lathpath thi and mj usse dekhe bina aage badh gaya...god mein to full on tension mein aa gayi thi...

wo last wala vrat opening scene ...haye...u make me teary



mariam dear please please apne writings skills humse chipao mat nahi to next time mein...chodungi nahi...

kavs u too read it now 😲
i thought u might have already read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: S696_sehreen




Yup that REALITIES😡
How I wish i was still a kid
Yeah epi was just OK nothing exicted, Taara rokha sookha wait and all Nimmi and other things were not much of needed in today epi...I guess...
Yeah not planning to write anything on this epi...will wait for tomorrow or Firday and see if I see something touchy or catchy then will write...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
No na I was not able to read...and how can I sleep without reading Maria story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Mariam and seher u both r now making me confuse

Both siggi and dp is near about same
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazzyBusy



Hehe acha then u don't know me...
yeah thats a possible entry of MJ she may be at the verge of feeling lie fainting par hogi nahi, warna wo fast kaise todi gi

na i think ur writing is tooo good😳 u shouldnt doubt about it !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Mariam and seher u both r now making me confuse

Both siggi and dp is near about same

🤣 mariam kavs i just noticed it 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008




mariam...tumne to ......tumne to...

kamal ka likha hai yaar...


meine sapne mein bhi aisa kabhi socha nahi...


wo shayari to har jagah ekdam perfect hai...i was not read it...actually i was living in that moment...perfect this is only i can say...


i thought u r very good in aham aham os but this kind of os i never expected form you... kaha chupa ke rakha tha isse


bechari tara kitna der uska intzar kiya ...lekin uske aane se pehale wo RP ...gosh somebody kill him for me...i cant tolerate him ...


meri tarako usane maar dala...


and wo mj ... wow yaar usake emotion bi kitane achhe se dikhaye hai...poor guy stuck between his wishes and duties...and because of this he is not able to reach on time to tara...


jab mj UC pohcha tab tara khoon se lathpath thi and mj usse dekhe bina aage badh gaya...god mein to full on tension mein aa gayi thi...

wo last wala vrat opening scene ...haye...u make me teary



mariam dear please please apne writings skills humse chipao mat nahi to next time mein...chodungi nahi...




OMG OMG OMG Don't tell me u didn't came after me with a chappal and I was able to make u 😭
Arre Kavz tujhe abhi tak nahi pata chala ke sapne kabhi sach nahi hote aur tune jo sapne main nahi socha na whoi asal hota hai
Shayari, thanks to my pagalpan toward the shayari and all sad things I can easily bring it out and also find what I am exactly looking for, tu is baar shayari ki credit tum internet ko de do...
no yaar I am not gud in Ahem Ahem at all, I am gud only in this type of writing sad ones...
Ahem Ahem I suck on those...sachi
yeah poor Taara, itne intezar karne ka dekho use kitna bura phal mila, Bechair RP ke haaton mar gai aur wo bhi kab jab usen pane pati ke liye varat rakah tha...
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wo last wala vrat opening scene ...haye...u make me teary



mariam dear please please apne writings skills humse chipao mat nahi to next time mein...chodungi nahi..."
OMG I am in so much love with that part...
main koi skill nahi chupaya tumse yaar...
tu u don't get a chance to do this to me😉😆
Thanks for the lovely comment kavz

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Seher mein to samja samjha ke thak gayi kr mariam ek awesome writer hai...but is not accepting it...

Now u also try hope she believe u
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

No na I was not able to read...and how can I sleep without reading Maria story



MriAra sotry yar meri sotry????
*raised eye brows
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