You're/were the only EXCEPTION-~- MriAra OS MY Version KarwaChauth

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-~- You're/were the only EXCEPTION-~-

Credit: None of these Shayari are written by me, all these are from Internet

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"Haste dilo me gham bhi hai,
muskurati aankhe kabhi nam bhi hai,
dua karte hai aapki hansi kabhi na ruke,
kyunki apki muskurahat ke deewane hum bhi hai"

Taara said startling Mrityunjay who was smiling and giggling with Maria, while he gave her a sponge bath cleaning her. He straighten himself masking his face with anger and blocking his face for any feelings to be seen thru him. He by now knew she can very well understand his feelings, and he can't afford to have kept himself as an open book to her, who can read without his will and he won't even know when and how she has read him. Just like till now, every little secrets related to him she had found out, at the end all those clues only brought her to him, to the last person who knew the whole truth, and he knew the moment she will come to him she would leave no stone turned to find the answer to her questions, and past few days all she did was question him, she did tired her best, but failed to make him talk. Failed to find the answers to her question.

"aab tu mujhe sach main lagta hai ke ye Maria aap ki biwi zidya hai aur main koi ghora ya ghadi" Taara said angrily seeing his sudden change of expression. She angrily walked to him and with her pointy finger she poked on his build dhole shole type arm saying "kya, aakhir problem kya hai aapki, hun" Mrityunjay sternly looks at the raised fingers that was just about to poke on his arm again but then stops seeing his stern look Taara pulls her hand back and says "kya, I ask u something what is your problem, jab bhi, mind it jab bhi main samne hoti hoon u just behave like an angry young man, aap Amitab bachan ho kya, nahi na. Ya phir koi zinda lash ho jo aise looks dete ho jaise koi emotions hi nahi ho, arre baba insaan ho insaan ki tarha behave karo na, aur jab biwi samne hoti hai tu pati use pyar se deakh te hai, na ki aap ki tarha har waqt gusse se ke aab ki tab use kacha hi kha jao aap, arre biwi hoon main aapki itna tu haq banta hai na ke aap mujhe pyar se dekho mujhe pyar karo, kabhi kabhi muh se bhi tu do meethi bol, bol liya karo" saying that she moves toward him making him take a step back, "aab peche kyun ja rahe ho patidev main aapki biwi hoon mere pass ane main kuan si problem hai" she said again walking toward him while he took another step, but was halted soon as he bumped into Maria. Mrityunjy looked behind as Taara said "Apna Humsafar Bana Le Mujhe, Tera Hi Saya Hu Apna Le Mujhe" and they both stood staring at each other. "dekho aab tu Maria ne bhi haanmi bhar di apni real biwi ke saath thoda romance karne ke liye" Taara says as she puts her hand around Mrityunjay neck, she pulls him closer to her and says "tu Pati dev kya irada hai, kuch romance ho jaye ya"

"Ya" He snaps, without letting her finish what she wanted to say, She smirks and says "Ya aap mere sawalon ke jawab do, now its ur choice, Biwi ke saath romance karna hai ya Biwi ke sawalon ke jawab dena hai"

Mrityunjay rolls his eyes and says "ho gaya tumhara bakwas" den snaps her hand from his neck pushing her back making her almost fall, but in the nick of time he gets hold of her wrist and pulls her toward him. Just then his cell starts ringing. He leaves her at once and moves away from her and receive the call.

"main bhar kisi zarori kaam ke liye ja raha hoon" Mrityunjay says as soon he was off the call and walked to get his white t-shirt.

"Bhar, achanak, par aaj tu mera varat hai" Taara says to which he gives her a questioned look but didn't voice it out.

"arre wo Karwachauth ka varat, wo kya hai na when we got married main ne us time aap ke liye varat nahi rakha tha na tu main ne socha abhi rakh loon" Taara replies giving the answer to his questions.

"Main late ho jaunga, tum ghar chali jana" Mrityunjay says ignoring her Karawachauth talk.

"Lagta hai aap ne meri baat theek se suni nahi, aaj mera varat hai aur aap ko jaldi ana hai warna main apna varat nahi todungi" Taara says.

MJ- I didn't asked u to do any varat-sharat, tu tumhe jo karna hai tum kar lo.

"Mrityunjay karwachauth ka varat pati apne pati ke haat se tod thi hai aur jab tak aap khud se mere varat nahi todo ge main apna varat nahi todungi" Taara says sternly but Mrityunjay paid no heed to her words and left leaving her feeling sad as she thought here she is doing so much to make their marriage work but he, wo tu khud hi nahi chatha. And she stood silently watching him go but then he stopped and turned his head toward her as he says "tumhara aur mera koi rishta nahi hai, na main is rishte ko manta hoon aur nahi kabhi manuga, tu phir ye sab kar ke tum kya sabit karna chathi hon mujhe nahi pata par itna jaanta hoon ke tumhe is rishte se kuch nahi mile ga, kuch bhi nahi" and he walked away leaving her once again all shattered as she thought does he even realized how much it pains to hear from him denying their relation, how much it hurts when her own husband doesn't want to accept her as his wife. "Taara tu bhi na kya faltu ki batein soch rahi hai, ye tu bhi jaanti hai aur wo bhi ke tere ya uske na maane se ye rishta khatam nahi ho jaye ga" She says to herself and den smiles at her own thinking as she thought

"Koi Vadaa Nahhi Phirr Bhhi Teraa Intezaar rahega,
Judaai Kee Baadd Bhhi Tujhhse Pyaarr rahega,
Teree Chehhre Kee Udassi Dee Rahhi Haai Gawaahhi,

Mujhhsse Milnne Kee Liyee Tuu Bhhi Bekaraar Hainn"

"Taara u don't worry I will make all the arrangement of ur karwachauth, bas u just tell me what u need, baqi sab main deakh lungi" Meethi said as she help Taara in cooking Kheer.

Taara- thanks Meethi.

Meethi- but Taara I still don't get it, jab Karwachauth nahi hai tu phir ye varat kyun.

Taara- Meethi jab hamari shadi huwi thi tab main unke liye ye varat nahi rakh pai thi, par aab main rakhna chathi hoon, unki lambi umar ke liye dua karna chathi hoon aur phir ye tu sirf ek bahana hai, main ne tu ye varat sirf unke lambi umar ke liye rakha hai, unki salamti ke liya rakh rahi.

Meethi- Par Tara tumne tu kaha tha ke Mrityunjay Bahi nahi ane wale hai.

Taara- main ne ye nahi kaha, usne ye kaha tha, par main jaanti hoon wo zaror aye ga, aur aaj main usi ke haaton se apna varat todungi.

Meethi- Taara mujhe tumhre yaqeen pe yaqeen hai Mrityunjay bahi zaror ayenge aur apne haaton se tumhara varat todenge, acha aab main chalti hoon, aur phir tumhare varat ki tiyari bhi tu karni hai na" saying that she leaves from their while Taara goes to Maria and gives her the water as it has been a long time she wasn't given any water.

"Tujhe kya lagta hai, tera Malik aye ga na Maria" She asks as she creases on Maria neck and she neighs. "mujhe bhi yaqeen hai wo zaror ayega" She says and she kisses Maria.

Dhal gayi raat, chup gaye taarey,
Aap ka bass intizaar baaki hai..

She stood leaning against the wall dressed up in red sari just like a new wed bride does, she had everything that was resembling a new wedded couple yet she was not, the glow wasn't there, her eyes were moist as she stood their staring at the entrance waiting for the person whom she had done everything.

Meethi and Jairaj looked at Taara feeling sorry, as they both knew how excited she was about all this, her believe in Mrityunjay that he would come back to break her fast, was fading just like the dia flames diminishing. "Baba aap ek bar aur call kare na and ask Mrityunjay bahi where he is" Meethi worriedly said as she looked at Taara.

Jairaj- hmm hum deakhte hai.

"Hello" Jairaj heard Mrityunjay voice after few rings of his call. "Mirtyunjay aap kahan hai, Aap ko pata hai na aaj Taara bahu ne aap ke liye varat rakah hai" Jairaj spoke sternly.

MJ- Baba main kisi zarori kaam se aya hoon, aaj nahi apunga, I had told u earlier"

Jairaj- Mrityunjay agar aap nahi aynge tu Taara bahu apna varat kaise todengi.

MJ- Baba main ne use ko mana kiya tha ke wo varat na rakhe.

Jairaj- Par mirtyunjay aisa kuan sa kaam a gaya hai ke tum thodi deer ke liye bhi aa sakte, kam se kam uska varat tu tod ne ke liye a jate, aap aakhir hain kahan.

MJ- Baba main wapus ake samjhunga sab kuch aap ko abhi main phone rakh raha hoon" saying that he cuts the call when his eyes fell on the clock in the room. "ye ladki bhi na, mana kiya tha ise varat na rakhe par nahi karni tu hai bas use apni man ki" Mrityunjay says running his fingers in his hair.

"Kya huwa sab theek tu hai na" He heard Kaka asks who was sitting beside Dada ji.

"Kuch nahi Kaka bas..." and he just leaves his sentence unfinished.

Kaka- kya huwa is everything ok.

MJ- ji sab theek hai, aap Dada ji ke pass rahe I will go and talk to Doctor" saying that he leaves from there.

AT UC:

"Kya huwa baba Mrityunjay bahi ne kya kaha" Meethi asked seeing Jairaj keeping his cell back in his back pocket.

"Wo nahi ayega" He said and looked at Taara who was still staring at the gate.

Meethi- aab kya hoga Baba, Taara ka varat

"Beta hamari abhi Mrityunjay se baat huwi thi" Jairaj spoke as he came to Taara and her pale face instantly lit up just by hearing Mrityunjay name and she excitedly ask "kya kaha unhone, kab a rahe hai, kitne deer main a rahe hai" but her all excitement just vanishes as she heard Jairaj says "Taara wo nahi apaenge, beta aap plz apna varat tod dijye"

Taara- Baba main unke bina kaise varat tod sakti hoon.

Meethi- Taara tum kab tak aise bhoki pyasi beethi rahe gi, itni

"jab tak wo nahi ayengi tab tak"

Meethi- Part Taara itni raat ho gai hai Mrityunjay bahi nahi ayenge.

Taara- Nahi Meethi wo ayenge, Mrityunjay zaror ayenge aur main apna varat unke hi haaton se khloungi.

Jairaj- par beta usne kaha hai ke wo nahi a.

"Baba ye ek patni ka wishvas hai ke wo zaror ayenge aur main jaanti hoon ke wo zaror ayenge" Taara replies before he could finish his talk. "Baba aap meri ek baat manoge"

Jairaj- haan bolo.

Taara- Baba aap aur Meethi aab ghar chale jaiye bauth raat ho gayi hai, aap log thak gaye honge.

Meethi- nahi taara hum tujhe akela chor ke kaise ja sakte hai, hum yeahi rahenge.

Jairaj- meethi bahu sahi kah rahi hai Taara, hum kahi nahi ja rahe tumhe chor ke.

Taara- nahi baba plz aap ko meri kasam hai aap log ja kar so jaiye, plz baba meri baat maan le" since she had given them her kasam they were left with no other option and they both left her in UC, unknown to the awaiting storm that was coming her way. or should I say their way.

Taara goes next to the idol and lit the diya once again as she sings.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W3i9AmQpRCA&feature=player_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

(Don't forget to listen to the song, It will surly give the feeling while u read it)

aaja re aaja re, aaja re aaja re

aakhiri ghadi hai mere intzar ki

sun jara sadaye dil bekarar ki

wo wade wo kasme tut na jaye

She smiles at her own thoughts, thinking he never made any promises, then she becomes sad thinking what about those promises that he did during those pheras, but then another question raised in her mind thinking just like he doesn't accept their relations, did he even made any promise during those 7 pheras.

chahat ki wo rasme tut na jaye

aaja re aaja re, aaja re aaja re

She smiles lost in thinking of their marriage moments, and the rituals they did in the jail of Bhopal.

ishk ke gum ko julm o sitam ko

aake aaj mitade

apni mohbbat pyar ki takat

sare jaha ko dikhade

ishk ke gum ko julm o sitam ko

aake aaj mitade

apni mohbbat pyar ki takat

sare jaha ko dikhade

She thought how their previous encounter weres, where she was left with only sore memories one who would never ever want to think of it in their dreams, but then the little time she had spent in their UC with him she knew he was not bad, but circumstance had made him to behave like that with her. But now forgetting all that, she now only and truly all desired from him was to give her all the love he has within, and erase all the pain and all the bad memories he had given to her, yet unknowingly!!!

She walks to the door of their UC house staring at the entrance, while Mrityunjay was having a war with himself. He knew her a little too well sadly. He knew once she had made her mind she will never back off from it, and once again she had done the same, and here he was fighting with his oneself of leaving and going to her or to stay with his beloved Dada Ji who needed him, just like she needed him their right now.

"Tujhey chahtey hain be-inteha par chahna nahi aata
Ye kaisi MOHABBAT hay k hamain kehna nahi aata
Zindgi mein aa jao hamari zindgi ban ker
k tere bin hamein zinda rehna nahi aata
Her pal tujhey bus tujhey duaon mein mangty hein
Kya krein k tumhare siwa kuch mangna nahi aata.." He smiled sadly remembering his moments with her, which was a bliss for him to get in this cursed life of his. He knew somewhere deep down in his heart he has fallen for her, but was it in his life to even think of loving someone or give his love to someone like HER.

"Main kya karo Taara main kya karo, kiasi kasmakash main dal diya hai tumne mujhe Taara, ek taraf Dada ji ko meri zarorat hai aur dosri taraf tum, tum ho jo mere bina apna varat nahi kologi, Kya karo main" Mrityunjay screamed hitting his hand against the wall.

"Beta aap chaho tu ja sakte ho, main hoon na Thakur ji ke pass, I will look after him" Kaka said seeing him torn out between his relations and responsibilities'.

"Kaise chala jao Kaka kaise, Dada ji needs me" Mrityunjay cried hugging him.

"But she also needs u, u also have some responsibilities toward her, she is ur wife" Kaka said hugging him back, Had it been in his hand he would have taken all his pains yet he was tied with his own responsibilities, but he knew he can at least do is to stand up for him in time of need.

dekhe sada tera rasta meri to nigahe

jeet wafa me ho teri mangu mai duaye

wo wade wo kasme tut na jaye

chahat ki wo rasme tut na jaye

aaja re aaja re, aaja re aaja re

"Dil main nakaam hasratain le ker, Hum tera intizaar kartey hain.." Taara says as she walked out to the entrance as she looked for his arriavel, yet she saw was a lone long road with no sign of the person whom she is awaiting for since forever now. She sits down leaning against the wood railing, with her head rested on her knees.

tere bina aise hi akeli

ghut ke na mar jau mai

"Wo akeli hai, ise acha mauka nahi mile ga use apne raste se hatane ka, Mrityunjay aur Jairaj koi bhi nahi hai, bilkul hi akeli hai, just finish her story today" Kalawati spoke to her men as she stared at Taara.

Meanwhile After so much of Kaka pleading him to leave the hospital Mrityunjay left from there. But he didn't knew for the person who he was coming was already surrounded by dangers, a danger that was slowly creeping toward her to end her life.

chhin le pyar ke dusman mujhko

tujhse na mil pau mai

tere bina aise hi akeli

ghut ke na mar jau mai

Taara instantly stands up all excited hearing a horn of a car thinking it to be Mrityunjay and gets all happy thinking her wait has finally came to an end, and her husband came for her, her believe in him won, but least did she knew it was not him but someone whom she had never imagine to come face to face, it was the same Kinar who was after her, standing right in front of her with her half face hid in the veil. At least not like this, not the day when she was here waiting for her love, her life to come for her.

chhin le pyar ke dusman mujhko

tujhse na mil pau mai

She knew he was after her life after their second encounter, and knew its better for her to run for her life, but guess she was late, too late and soon she was surrounded by many other Kiners. She tried to run when she felt herself being pulled harshly held by her arm and thrown toward the wall.

soch ke ye darti hu mai

der ho an jaye

jane tamnna milne ka

waqt kho na jaye

She turns toward them after getting hit in the wall that Mrityunjay had just painted in the morning leaving the print of her blood on them, only to come face to face a gun pointed toward her by none other than Kalawati.

wo wade wo kasme tut na jaye

chahat ki wo rasme tut na jaye

aaja re aaja re, aaja re aaja re

And the bullet went right thru her stomach, splashing the blood all over her face and the white painted wall which was covered by her blood and she lifelessly fell on the ground and she watched all the Kinner walk away leaving her to die slowly, giving her a slow death. Just as those kinarl, what seemed like an eternity passed Mrityunjay car stopped making a screech sound due to his sudden brake, he got out of the car. "Taara...Taara...Taara" He came in screaming her name. He turned around looking for her, yet he failed to see her on the ground in pool of blood as she held her hand out toward him as if calling for him pleading him to look down, to come to her least now.

aakhiri ghadi hai mere intzar ki

sun jara sadaye dil bekarar ki

wo wade wo kasme tut na jaye

chahat ki wo rasme tut na jaye

aaja re aaja re, aaja re aaja re

But he didn't looked at her and went right into their UC house, only to find it all empty, he runs out of their and was about to run to their Shekhawat Mansion when he heard her faint voice saying "Mri-tyu-nj-ay" that was it, and what he saw made his world to still, the moments when he saw her laying there in pool of blood reaching her hand toward him while the other held her stomach and she tried crawl toward him, he felt the earth beneath his feet slipped.
"Taaraaa" Mrityunjay screamed as he ran to her and took her in his embrace hugging her as he cried. "Mri-tyu-nj-ay, aa-ap aga-ye, u ca-ame fo-r m-e" Taara spoke with lots of difficulty as she touched his face with her bloody hand, to which Mrityunjay just nodded kissing her bloody hand.

"Taara ye sab kaise, Kisne ki ye sab, Taara aankhe kholo" Mrityunjay shouts as he saw Taara drifting eyes. "Mri=tyu-nj-ay ha-ma-re pa-sss wa-q-t n-ah-i hai, ha-ma-ra va-r-at t-o-o-o-d d-e, pl-lezz" Taara says cupping his face in her both hand. Mrityunjay nods in yes as he looked for the water. He places her carefully on the ground and runs up to get the water. Once he gets it he carefully takes her back in his embrace while Taara hand wound up around his waist as she snuggles closer to him and he makes her drink the water and soon the first drops of water went in her mouth Mrityunjay felt Taara hand loosen around him and he saw her hand lifelessly fell on the ground. "Taaraaa" Mrityunjay cried screaming hugging her tighter, while the rest of the Shekhawat family came running only to witness the scene of A broken Mrityunjay holding onto a lifeless Taara covered in blood.


A/N: I know I am hoping nothing like this gonna be happening in tomorrow Episode, but after listening to the song I have included in here the ideas just came to me and in the flow I just kept writing. So here I am with my New OS. I hope u all like it.

IMP Note: To my readers I will be soon opening a thread of my work collection, so if u want to follow up with my writings u can always check the thread. Will be updating that regularly with my any future OS/Versions.

PS: Kavz don't, I reapeat Do not come after me with a chapal killing me if u didn't expect this kind of OS coming from me. But yaar main sad hi likhti hoon wo tu Mere Mrityunjay<3 ne meri us Naughty side ko nikala tha warna main tu kabhi na likhti naughty OSšŸ˜‰

@Sehreen, Bacha u can freely, I mean pura khul khal ke, oye Bacha freely matlab without any fear of being this 18+ ke read kar sakti haišŸ˜†

@All once again I hope u all like this OS

Do leave ur comment/ review and Don't forget to Like

-Mariam

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Archi21 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

Awesome OS
ā­ļø

Kya sayariā­ļø use ki haišŸ‘

Kya songā­ļø use kiya hai šŸ‘

Kya imagination ā­ļø hai šŸ‘

Kya dialogues ā­ļø use kiye haišŸ‘

I can imagine each and every scene ā­ļø it is well written ā­ļø
šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

I can feel pain ,waiting , Tara's strong determination and MJ's majburi
ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø
šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

I want to dedicate one song to her wait

~Aaja sajan teri dulhan tujhe ko pukare aaja
Aa kar mere hatho mein mehndi tu hi racha ja~

Waiting for next part
šŸ˜‰

😃 😃😃 😃😃 😃😃 😃😃 😃
Worldpeace thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Awesome shayri..
awesome song
AWESOME concept. ..
awesome writing...
ufff main to thak gayi tarif karke...
thank you so much for the pm...
pls write more...
this time ek happy ending wala o.s.
plsss.😊😊
Cathy25 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Aww an os that ended on a tragic note. guess you wanted to play around with the "toh phir marr kyun nahi jaati" dialogue of mj that came back to bite him where it hurts.

Great writing, keep it up.
Divya429 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Very nice OS
Climax ws sad
I feel Somethung like Ths will happen today aslo except the lifeless Tara part
CrazzyBusy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: Archi21

šŸ‘

Awesome OS
ā­ļø

Kya sayariā­ļø use ki haišŸ‘

Kya songā­ļø use kiya hai šŸ‘

Kya imagination ā­ļø hai šŸ‘

Kya dialogues ā­ļø use kiye haišŸ‘

I can imagine each and every scene ā­ļø it is well written ā­ļø
šŸ‘

I can feel pain ,waiting , Tara's strong determination and MJ's majburi
ā­ļø
šŸ‘

I want to dedicate one song to her wait

~Aaja sajan teri dulhan tujhe ko pukare aaja
Aa kar mere hatho mein mehndi tu hi racha ja~

Waiting for next part
šŸ˜‰

😃




Awww thank u thank u thank u so much for the sweet comment dear...
Yeah u can give all the credit to those who wrote the shayari...
So loved it and it went so well with the story...
So happy u were able to imagine all the scene...
A MAJBORI, sadly that probably no one can see or feel except him
My poor MJ...
Aww thanks for dedicating a song on Taara wait, I had planned to use the song deer na ho jaye, from Heena movie, but ended up with this song which I just loved it...
Awww ur waiting for the next part but sorry dear their is no next part to this OS, it was the end...
But will surly be back with another OS on MriAra...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Worldpeace

Awesome shayri..

awesome song
AWESOME concept. ..
awesome writing...
ufff main to thak gayi tarif karke...
thank you so much for the pm...
pls write more...
this time ek happy ending wala o.s.
plsss.😊😊




Thank u for liking the shayari, song and the concept...
Glad u liked the writing...
Awww itni main thak gai, koi baat nahi jita bhi tarif kiya wo bauth hi acha tha, made my day thank u
No problem...
Will surly wirte one soon...Happy or sad can't decided, as right now I am in sad mood😭, It will only depend on my mood and the scenes I can get in my mind...
but willl surly have one happy ending one...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Cathy25

Aww an os that ended on a tragic note. guess you wanted to play around with the "toh phir marr kyun nahi jaati" dialogue of mj that came back to bite him where it hurts.

Great writing, keep it up.




Yeah an OS that was with an tragic end.
How did i forgot this dialogue of MJ, uff I should have included this at the end, tu it would have given a different emotion on MJ part...
Will be surly writing more
thank u for liking the OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dsnair

Very nice OS

Climax ws sad
I feel Somethung like Ths will happen today aslo except the lifeless Tara part




Thank u for liking the OS
yeah it was a sad ending
I hope nothing like this happens yaar, nahi tu that Kalawati will get the golden chance to attack on Taara which she won't be successful in...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Am regreting why didnt I read this early...
Again sorry its only this time I get time to read or make something
Mariam my badhi sis this waw amazing and beautiful written šŸ‘
Loved how u build up the story too good along with the song
And shairy... I could imaginr everything happening
While readind this ...
U know I really want something like this happen tomw
Cant say more but the last part were very thouching
Some romace next time please 😳

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Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".