ARDHIKA SS - MMZ Season 2 (updated - Chapter 3 on pg 11)

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Reserved... 😉

Battu is planning on an SS with an alternative ending to the MMZ serial, that can make a smouldering story of passion, unrequited love and broken friendships possible in the form of a MMZ Season II. Lots of new characters will be thrown in and bonds will be tested. But no worries, true love always triumphs, and so it will.

Watch this space!!! 😛
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The origin of the Season II Idea...

It all began in my head when I was travelling in the Himalayas. I was upset with Star Plus, for ending the serial way before its decided deadline of October, and I found myself thinking how the hell am I going to see the serial when I would be in the mountains... but hotstar did come to my rescue, and I was able to see the epis one day late. I so wished to write reviews then, but was unable to type so much on my phone, so instead i would go over the epis again and again in my head, reliving every moment between Ardhika to the nth degree, as I had so much spare time on my holiday.

And then one night I was in Gopeshwar - just after my return from a very remote mountain area - and my room had a tv in it with cable... I thought, yayyy!!!! I'm going to watch MMZ realtime today. And I did. And I felt... so very irritated and frustrated with the CV's for completely butchering Arjun's character. I was ready to throw utensils and vent my anger, but unfortunately I wasn't at home, and there was no kitchen in the hotel room. 😡 😡 😭 😭 😡 😡

I remember chatting with esprit_00, and saying to her that this guy does not deserve Radhu anymore. Episode in question - Episode No. 109 - the day he proclaimed in the toilet - "I love you Sam, I love you very much!"

Aisa laga, ek kaan ke neeche thappad doon bande ko, tv mein ghus ke. 😕

Par possible nahi tha, So then I started thinking of a serious separation track for Arjun and Radhika. I was convinced that any man, who clearly loves her as Arjun loves Radhika, has to be completely deranged (and this is why I said, that the CV's butchered his character) inside his mind, to still covet another woman, on his sister's behest. It just does not fit into the normal scheme of things, even as far as hindi serialdom goes.

So I was convinced, that he needs to pay a very heavy price, before he gets to have Radhika in his life for good... (I think for the sake of ending the serial as early as they had to, the PH let both Arjun and Sam go scot free too easily) ... and so my brain started to cook up this story for Ardhika and NeSam that gives a proper lesson to Arjun (for having taken his sister's junoon too far) and Sam (for twisting a friendship so pure and making it as ugly as it could become) with Neil being their lighthouse in Radhika's absence.

Yes... In this SS... major upheavals take place in MMZ after first half of Episode 109 and Radhika ... well nobody knows what happened with her 😲, But Season II does take a 5 year leap, introducing all of you to scattered lives, broken hearts and a sense of extreme unfulfilled emotions that rage like the perfect storm within.

So tighten your seatbelts and await the crashlanding 5 years hence. 😛 Coming soon to your favourite forum.

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Battu.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE

Her heart was racing at 140 kmph and her palms felt clammy with sweat. Anantika De was beginning to get irritated with this everyday phenomenon that was soon becoming her way of life, ever since the hottie walked into their office 8 months back. Every time she found this man within a 200 ft radius from her own person, she would go through some unexpected set of physical circumstances that were peculiarly embarrassing. Around him her body was not her own, and it behaved like it was forever hungry for the barrage of electric shock waves that emanated from this man's very being.

His mere presence affected her so much. But what happened to her, when he opened his mouth to speak, was not something she had allowed herself to share even with her best friend.

Anantika or Ana, as she was called by her mates from her class, back at Stanford Business School, had always been a woman who was sure of her own standing in the universe. As a perpetual A Grade student, she was proud of her scholarly achievements and she worked hard to prove her mettle at the advertising agency that she had inherited from her father Divyankar De, the kingpin of New Delhi's Advertising Industry.

She had climbed the ladder of success the hard way, starting from the bottom rung, making her way to the top swiftly! She was determined to not have her success handed to her on a platter... and this is exactly what was freaking the shit out of her.

The fact that she, Anantika De, who always called the shots in all her relationships, who always held her head high and made men sweat in their suits when she deemed to glance at them from under her sooty brown curly eyelashes, managed to turn herself into a bumbling idiot every time she even looked at him, was something that was not sitting well with her.

This! Clammy hands and racing heart, was definitely not her. Ana always was used to calling the shots in her relationships, both professional and personal.

Besides she didn't need this. Not today.

Not today, when she was at the helm of an important presentation - with the senior brand manager for one of India's biggest publishing conglomerate - she could not afford to tank it today, just because of her inability to handle her own hormones around this man, this Arjun Mehra.


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Hope you will all like the prologue. This was short and sweet. I deliberately kept it like that, because I wanted to shock all of you, by introducing a third angle right from the beginning.

Anantika De is here to stay... so say hello to her girls 😛 she's gonna give you a good angsty romance between Ardhika to look fwd to.

This is how she looks - http://www.liveindia.com/monikangana_dutta/monikangana_dutta_91.jpg

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Battu
Edited by bajarbattu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2


Chapter 3

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Battu!
Edited by bajarbattu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ahhh...battu...
i was missing u in the forum...so happy now..

eagerly waiting for the MMZ season 2 to read...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its nice to see, new stories coming up...

so totally looking forward to read...
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Oh yay!!! Finally... Add me to the pm list :)
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No need to tell...How much I love ur writing...Hell excited...Can't wait!
Count me IN for PM's!
Lots of Love Batz di!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bajarbattu

Reserved... 😉

Battu is planning on an SS with an alternative ending to the MMZ serial, that can make a smouldering story of passion, unrequited love and broken friendships possible in the form of a MMZ Season II. Lots of new characters will be thrown in and bonds will be tested. But no worries, true love always triumphs, and so it will.

Watch this space!!! 😛

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love,


Battu.




Hi battu hope it's a happy ending. And it will b ardhika and nesam. Plz update asap.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome!! And yes I remember that episode ... they really should have cut that scene out considering the show was ending in a week's time. Oh well, i have erased it from my memory, hehee.
Now i'll be waiting for the update... so much angst, BB!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awwe batz di muhaaa as promised huhhh... .Am so so so excited 😛 .Am all set to ready for the rolar caster ride.Go on.Bring it back the awesomeness of ardhika and cute neil.
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