ARDHIKA SS - MMZ Season 2 (updated - Chapter 3 on pg 11) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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BAttu,...
Loved ur prologue,...Eagerly waiting for Ana's entry now,...

But I felt bad 4 radz whatever she did good 4 others,...she ly suffered a lot and i want arjun to feel that intense pain to understand what it will do to others,...

His one habit of delivering the harsh words or unwanted words without meaning it continues till nandhu's truth came into limelight.

I want to punish him for his words knowing that he never meant that in anyways,...as it had huge effect and those 3 things are

1.before Lonovla accident,he uttered that he will not look after her if she came under the car r sth and his harsh words came true,..


2.In studio,he again said that radz willl be alone and she ll lose her family and friends ,...everything and that also happened ,...


3.In washroom scene,..i even dinn want to rem that scene cox he was fully into his revenge mode and how could he try to romance r even pretend to b as such to sam knowing that radz accepted him as her hubby,...(i was damn sure that arjun knew radz had feelings for him)Even though he said those things from his mouth which never really meant as in the earlier case,he must pay for his deeds and we felt that he was guilty for his acts but he must need a big punishment for doing all these err b4 hollding radz hands forever.

Looking forward to ur SS dear,...

& How r U???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice prologue...

looking forward to know this Ana character more...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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battu...
a new character in ardhika life...hmmm...shocked !!!!
a new twist...good

please update soon :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this Ana girl sounds feisty ! I am a hard core Ardhika fan,so I'll be waiting for their reconciliation...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bajarbattu




Glad you loved it!😆

Anantika! (meaning - the one coming from the infinite) not Ankita.😊



Lol my phone and autocorrect ... Oops!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bajarbattu



Hi RamyaG😊

Lol... yes I'm sure most are not going to expect a third spoke in the wheel, when there are already so many emotional ones in this angsty Ardhika story, as you will soon find out about all the complications that have separated Radhika from Arjun.

I will say only this - to make it even more intriguing for you - Rads does not want Arjun, she does not need to, she already has him. Sam is in a desert of her own making, and the only thing that will quench her thirst is Radhika and not Arjun, not Neil. And Anantika, she is fighting hard not to want our Arjun, but its a downhill battle for her, and she is on the verge of giving in, to her intense feelings for Arjun and making a mess of his life specially as he is about to enter a very delicate phase in his life, as you will find when this SS unfolds.

The important thing in this story is not what the women in Arjun's life want, the important thing is what Arjun wants, and how far he will go to get what he wants. Will he get to go far? Or will he be stopped by the very forces that he sought to meddle with when he joined Bird Song?

We all will ask this question soon - Will Arjun get what he wants or will what he did for his Nandini Di lay heavy on his chest forever?

Those two lines he said to Sam in the toliet, he said them without thinking of their consequences - far reaching consequences. And in my story he will pay a very heavy price, before the sun can dawn over his life and make it all alright.

So strap your seatbelt, cause its going to be a crash landing for all the protagonists, with Anantika De as the pilot of this plane called MMZ Season II.

... and now enough of giving away the plot.😆you gotta wait for the chapters to unfold.

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much love, light and laughter,
Battu.



I'm intrigued ... Eagerly waiting... And is there a way for you to sell this script to Swastik? Lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue looks very interesting..
Have to say your thinking is Awesome..
Can't wait..
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Khullam khulla boltey me...I know I can.tri pn.ya aapn doghi..aamhasarkhe aamhich.me aadhi lihilele reedit kel...asech.mala mahit aahe tri pn. aapli same condition aahe .now my fav. yo yo yo!!!!



Coming to the prologue my fav.twist in tale haha..This one is really crackling one!No bird song...but competitive company...Seems this Ana passionately in love with Arjun..Poor Arjun..He is madly in love with his Wife And wife is hell stubborn girl...Tikhi chori Radzz!
Arjun se sab sab hisab kitab barabr krna hai..Lol.cant wait for some of Intense scene and sexy wala romance! Am I need to tell you how much I'm carving for this story..yup Arjun's longings..for Radz..yippee!!
Waiting for this story!!!!


Love u Batz di.Update asap.

P.S Even if u update this story after a month or 2..as per ur time but plz dont discontinue it.PLEASE!





@jey3ram same here...ur lines!
Edited by --geny-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --geny--

Khullam khulla boltey me...I know I can.tri pn.ya aapn doghi..aamhasarkhe aamhich.me aadhi lihilele reedit kel...asech.mala mahit aahe tri pn. aapli same condition aahe .now my fav. yo yo yo!!!!



Coming to the prologue my fav.twist in tale haha..This one is really crackling one!No bird song...but competitive company...Seems this Ana passionately in love with Arjun..Poor Arjun..He is madly in love with his Wife And wife is hell stubborn girl...Tikhi chori Radzz!
Arjun se sab sab hisab kitab barabr krna hai..Lol.cant wait for some of Intense scene and sexy wala romance! Am I need to tell you how much I'm carving for this story..yup Arjun's longings..for Radz..yippee!!
Waiting for this story!!!!


Love u Batz di.Update asap.

P.S Even if u update this story after a month or 2..as per ur time but plz dont discontinue it.PLEASE!


@jey3ram same here...ur lines!


ROFL!!!!!

No I won't discontinue... 😆 But i must say you know me pretty well. 😛 But you can expect to be surprised this time. 😃


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Battu.

P.S.: What do you mean - I know I can.tri.pn.ya??? mala kaahihi kalala nahi ithe.
Can you write in full words... I am sms text challenged! 😊
Edited by bajarbattu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: esprit_00



I'm intrigued ... Eagerly waiting... And is there a way for you to sell this script to Swastik? Lol

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Hi battu thank u sooo much for such a lengthy explation. Am loving it. Wow. It's awesome. I check daily to c wether u have. Updated. Can't help it am impatient.😕.. Ur prologue was a cliff hanger. Am waiting strapping my seat belt... Update asap. Well I did want arjun to pay aft d bathroom scene... 😃...Well am waiting to c how ur beautiful ss unfolds .Enjoy d ride guys.Best wishes to u battu.
Edited by Ramyagirish - 9 years ago

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