ARDHIKA SS - MMZ Season 2 (updated - Chapter 3 on pg 11) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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even i flet like slapping arjun there...
but b4 dat, he proved to everyone dat he cared for radhika...n liked their stair case scene...
n after dat, i liked arjun telling nandhu he cant do dat...he was totally fed up...he knows dat d words he uttered to sam was a blunder...n d way he throed d divorce papers was good...

so, i felt its ok...watver he does n says vth sam z totally in privacy...

watver he said n done vth radhika in office z infront of everyone...
dat z wat i am telling myself to console myself...
i didnt like dat act in d wash room a bit also..its not r8 ...thanks to neil...i liked him there so much...

// after radhika's entry n then from lonavala trip, arjun changed...dat was shown in his actions...so after marriage watever he tried n said to sam z just for nandhu...dats wat they showed...so i feel bad for him...already he repented...but they didnt show...cv's needed to show arjun's pov from d point he met radhika...dat would cleared many things...but its ok...i totally wanted to see arjun longing for radhika more for sure, n arjun's patao radhika n his sasurji n all...//


looking forward to read ur story...
Edited by lovv - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yes battu...
that epi is totally 😡
not only that before that one...after marriage when arjun was insulting radhika as behenji...so...so...I got so much angry on him and cursed that radhika should not easily forgive him...he should repent all the deeds that have done towards radhika...

but was compromised as the show was ending soon...and Cvs ended with ardhika lived happily ever after

but my sincere request is...I wish to see arjun in more pain and repent to his mistakes and should please radhika so hard...

and finally finally a happy ending of ardhika with changed arjun

eagerly waiting for ur updates...thanx
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Posted: 9 years ago
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All i can say is that i am more than excited for anything thats with Ardhika! Its simply so amazing how this show has kept me wanting for more of it even after months of it shutting down! Plss continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I hated that washroom scene too..It didn't suit well with Arjun's character ..the Arjun I used to know may start the seduction game again but will never ever say those words aloud to anyone else other than Radhika ..so waiting for your story,Arjun's redemption..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bajarbattu

Reserved... 😉

Battu is planning on an SS with an alternative ending to the MMZ serial, that can make a smouldering story of passion, unrequited love and broken friendships possible in the form of a MMZ Season II. Lots of new characters will be thrown in and bonds will be tested. But no worries, true love always triumphs, and so it will.

Watch this space!!! 😛

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The origin of the Season II Idea...

It all began in my head when I was travelling in the Himalayas. I was upset with Star Plus, for ending the serial way before its decided deadline of October, and I found myself thinking how the hell am I going to see the serial when I would be in the mountains... but hotstar did come to my rescue, and I was able to see the epis one day late. I so wished to write reviews then, but was unable to type so much on my phone, so instead i would go over the epis again and again in my head, reliving every moment between Ardhika to the nth degree, as I had so much spare time on my holiday.

And then one night I was in Gopeshwar - just after my return from a very remote mountain area - and my room had a tv in it with cable... I thought, yayyy!!!! I'm going to watch MMZ realtime today. And I did. And I felt... so very irritated and frustrated with the CV's for completely butchering Arjun's character. I was ready to throw utensils and vent my anger, but unfortunately I wasn't at home, and there was no kitchen in the hotel room. 😡 😡 😭 😭 😡 😡

I remember chatting with esprit_00, and saying to her that this guy does not deserve Radhu anymore. Episode in question - Episode No. 109 - the day he proclaimed in the toilet - "I love you Sam, I love you very much!"

Aisa laga, ek kaan ke neeche thappad doon bande ko, tv mein ghus ke. 😕

Par possible nahi tha, So then I started thinking of a serious separation track for Arjun and Radhika. I was convinced that any man, who clearly loves her as Arjun loves Radhika, has to be completely deranged (and this is why I said, that the CV's butchered his character) inside his mind, to still covet another woman, on his sister's behest. It just does not fit into the normal scheme of things, even as far as hindi serialdom goes.

So I was convinced, that he needs to pay a very heavy price, before he gets to have Radhika in his life for good... (I think for the sake of ending the serial as early as they had to, the PH let both Arjun and Sam go scot free too easily) ... and so my brain started to cook up this story for Ardhika and NeSam that gives a proper lesson to Arjun (for having taken his sister's junoon too far) and Sam (for twisting a friendship so pure and making it as ugly as it could become) with Neil being their lighthouse in Radhika's absence.

Yes... In this SS... major upheavals take place in MMZ after first half of Episode 109 and Radhika ... well nobody knows what happened with her 😲, But Season II does take a 5 year leap, introducing all of you to scattered lives, broken hearts and a sense of extreme unfulfilled emotions that rage like the perfect storm within.

So tighten your seatbelts and await the crashlanding 5 years hence. 😛 Coming soon to your favourite forum.

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love,
Battu.



sounds damn interesting!
update soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it! Hmm Ankita De... Whoa didn't see that coming! Can't wait :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: esprit_00

Loved it! Hmm Ankita De... Whoa didn't see that coming! Can't wait :)



Glad you loved it! 😆
Anantika! (meaning - the one coming from the infinite) not Ankita. 😊
Edited by bajarbattu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi battu I really dint expect ana ... I mean so Sam, rads and ana all 3 want arjun?????... Well it's intriguing... Plz update asap. I can't wait.😃. And no takers for Neil???😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Girls...

I may not be able to reply to all of your posts, simply because I'm yet to become a goldie. I have a post limit on me as I am only 389 posts old. 😛
Damn this India Forums!! 🤢 😭

So please do not feel bad if I don't reply to every post... please know that every post that you make and every feedback you give me is precious, so feel free to chime in.

Thanks a ton for all the love and all the excitement. I really appreciate it. Especially since my aim in writing this SS is that everybody gets to enjoy Ardhika and Nesam as I imagined them in my head.

awww my Neil baby!!! You gals are going to like him even more in Season II. He's gonna be a real trooper! ⭐️ 😛😉😳 ⭐️

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Love
Battu.
Edited by bajarbattu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ramyagirish

Hi battu I really dint expect ana ... I mean so Sam, rads and ana all 3 want arjun?????... Well it's intriguing... Plz update asap. I can't wait.😃. And no takers for Neil???😆


Hi RamyaG 😊

Lol... yes I'm sure most are not going to expect a third spoke in the wheel, when there are already so many emotional ones in this angsty Ardhika story, as you will soon find out about all the complications that have separated Radhika from Arjun.

I will say only this - to make it even more intriguing for you - Rads does not want Arjun, she does not need to, she already has him. Sam is in a desert of her own making, and the only thing that will quench her thirst is Radhika and not Arjun, not Neil. And Anantika, she is fighting hard not to want our Arjun, but its a downhill battle for her, and she is on the verge of giving in, to her intense feelings for Arjun and making a mess of his life specially as he is about to enter a very delicate phase in his life, as you will find when this SS unfolds.

The important thing in this story is not what the women in Arjun's life want, the important thing is what Arjun wants, and how far he will go to get what he wants. Will he get to go far? Or will he be stopped by the very forces that he sought to meddle with when he joined Bird Song?

We all will ask this question soon - Will Arjun get what he wants or will what he did for his Nandini Di lay heavy on his chest forever?

Those two lines he said to Sam in the toliet, he said them without thinking of their consequences - far reaching consequences. And in my story he will pay a very heavy price, before the sun can dawn over his life and make it all alright.

So strap your seatbelt, cause its going to be a crash landing for all the protagonists, with Anantika De as the pilot of this plane called MMZ Season II.

... and now enough of giving away the plot. 😆 you gotta wait for the chapters to unfold.

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much love, light and laughter,
Battu.
Edited by bajarbattu - 9 years ago

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