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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: pampz

PM chq kar...😆
abhi too GAG ka update leke hii baithi hoon...😆... bahut kuch iss chapter mein atna hain yaar,,, sich samajh ke likhan parega...🤓🤣

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Nikkisha Roy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Wow pampz its so beautiful yar
I love it so so much yar
Raghu ki Antara pe pari nazar or pooch gaya shaadi ka proposal ley key awesome 😃
Jaldi jaldi continuee karna
N yes to my yedi riyu awesome banner soom you will get requests from us to make banner so be prepared 😆 😆

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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Oye pampi teri PM check kar... 😆

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.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: pampz

Haila Banner nahi dekh payi ???? Oh no ...😕 am so glad yaar tereko achha laga starting ...😳
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dikh gyaaa..mujhko banner dikh gayaaa...

its wonderful yr!!..😛
good work ria😃

mujhe to ye lag rha tha ki pta nhi ye kaunsi bimaari ho gayi hai..banner na dikhne ki 😕sabko dikh rha hai sirf mujhe hi nhi dikh rha🤣🤣..chalo aaj dikh hi gaya🤣

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priyanka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: pampz

</div>Awww ...thanx Pri ...lik na karte hue bhi dark stories read kar liya ...haha...yaar maine bohot zoroshoro se yeh to announce kar diya ki yeh dark story hai ...
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par merese ek prob horahi hai ...Raghu ko dark karte hue main rorahi hun 😭 but the story needs such stuffs to proceed ,...pata nahi aage jake kya bakwas hoga yeh story ...haha

it might happen u knw its the outcome of my sara hua dimaag ...toh kuch bhi ho sakta hai ...😲

i have full faith in u n
ur stry...u vl do complete justice to dis stry 😉...
n yes dark stry h toh u hv to make raghu dqrk na..
anyways all d best dear..jst rock it

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priyanka

@ankusanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

@suchi..thank God tujhe banner dekh gya
😆...

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Hina Kamran

@honeybees22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

OMG new story wow Congoo shongoo👏

i really love the name, it has a really strong sense and meaning.

Lovely Banner RI loved it.

I really dont like dark stories because they creep me out and cuz they are mostly sad.

But this one has something special in it thats ingruging me to read it and of course the only thing Romance should be there.

Getting to your update

At first i was kinda confused and shocked like antu living in an orphanage and stuff.

When you wrote the part in the shopping mall, at that instant i knew raghu will be there and i am most sure that the boy who touched antu is raghu, only he can do that in public.

Poor antu got scared of that.

i dont understand raghu a bit why does he follow antu?? then send her a gift?? and now he is here to marry her chakar kya hai bhai? apun confused🤪

He sent her the sari she was looking at aww i found that part really cute and now he knows her name wow as well.

Ok being honest when in the mall he was really close to her and silly me literally had my GM on like i found that part romantic uff

Some where in this story i find raghu being the dark one as he is doing things that are total confusing.

i really am confused with raghus character now but i know its ur story so it wont be dragged and everything will be clear soon.

i m totally in love with this story and this is the first ever dark story i am going to read because it has our beloved rantara and is written by you sweety.

Hawww you left it a clifhanger nahiii

i know i dont have to say this but

Please udpate soon and most important update JAAN ASAP.

P.S. is this story going to be romantic or or just pitch dark.

Edited by honeybees22 - 11 years ago