Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57)

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AnnieRA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#431

Awesome story...👏...👍🏼...Continue soon...😊......

Part 1...

Loved the banner...❤️...

An innocent-naive orphaned girl's preparation-anticipation to meet her prospective groom......

At the mall...An intruder in her personal space got her startled and scared...n she was imprisoned in his hold...😲...

the unknown person's stealthy moves...😲...👍🏼...😎...

looks like mass wedding on the way...😊...

Just love ur detailed description Pampz...👏...awesome n intricate...👍🏼...

So Trustee Saahab bahut dildaar ban rahe hain...🤔...

Antara found herself a stalker......☢️...

Oh Antara feeling weird about the future...😔..

woah...a surprise entry...do ladke milne aaye hain...😲...🤔...

so the fear of the unknown engulfs her...

n the other suitor's name is revealed...

TBC...

Awesome narration... revealing story layer by layer...😃...

Wud soon read d the rest of it n comment...

tc...tfs...Keep writing...😊...❤️...🤗...

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Andrea D'Souza (Andy)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#432

Pampu...🤗...How u ? ... Hope u have recovered fully...😃...👍🏼...

n Waiting eagerly for the updates......

Hume Bhuli toh nahi ? ...jaldi forum pe apne stories likne n chaapne aaja...😊...😳...

Make it alive with ur presence......😎...

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story_seeker

@story_seeker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#433

Pampu...Hope ur feeling fine now...Hale n Hearty...❤️...👍🏼...

Waiting for your updates......Continue soon...😊...🤗...

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Avni_G

@Avni_G

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Posted: 8 years ago

#434

Hey Pampz...😃...Hope your feeling good now......😎...

tc...😊...n eagerly waiting for the updates......

XOXO...🤗...❤️...

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AnnieRA

@AnnieRA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#435

Hey Pampz...😊...Continue soon dear......

PART 2 - here goes...😃...

Loved the quote...👍🏼...greediness has no end to it...

so in this a prelude to Raghu is given...

his character, the myriad mystic aura surrounding him is well described...👏...

his attire referred to that of the poster pic...😎......😳...

His no nonsense attitude regarding his work and equation with MM is put forth brilliantly...👍🏼...👏...

Pandra minute waste = Pandra Lakh bharpaayi...😲...attitude man...😎...a-t-t-i-t-u-d-e.....

Haaye......Raghu's Amazon green Renault Duster......😳...

Oh...so Raghu is disturbed after seeing his target's pic...😲..😉...😊...😃...

so an unknown person mails him for the deal...🤔...🤓...

hmm... a facade of Event Management Co. to his actual dealings...🤔...brilliantly smart move...or shud it be said as a cunning one...☯️...

"Money makes the world go around" - Raghu is brought up on these lines...😳...away from heartfelt feelings...😔...emotions......

MM's quite contrast to Raghu...but wholly devoted nonetheless...👍🏼...Brothers from Bond...🤗...❤️...

Raghu's musings of the deal...🤔...

Only a pic of a girl sends him swirling with various contradictions...😊...

so Raghu accepts the deal after a lot of to n fro......aakhir paanch carodh ka sawaal hai......aur kuch aur bhi...😉......

Briliiant update...👏...totally loving it...❤️...

Waiting for the story to move forward...😊...😃......

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Anna1012

@Anna1012

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Posted: 8 years ago

#436

Pampz... Kaise ho...
Hope everything is fine 😊

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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 8 years ago

#437

Hi Pampu...all OK ? What happened ?

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pampz

@pampz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: -DZ-
Hi Pampu...all OK ? What happened ?

no dear ...all NOT Ok ...but trying my best to do all ok and come back with updates ...

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