Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57) - Page 3

Originally posted by: ifians

miss vampy ji... meri tareef karna bandh karo abb samjhi... 😆... bahut ho gaya... this is ur story and it's going to be remembered for ur beautiful skills of stiry telling... not for my saru sa banner...😡😆

lol okk... ab joo bhi hoo..., dark hoo yaa light hoo mujhe har story pasand hain... and if there is rantara.. no doubt i will read it...😉

well it's the first chapter... though i know the concept a bit...😆.. tilll ager to read more... somehow predicted that where the story will move,.. but lets see😆

first of al;l wanna tell something...

your narration style is utterly beautiful.❤️. that the reader instantly connects with the story...

and 2ndly... i loved that this story had soem different genre... it's not like ur other story... so will be interesting to read...😳

antara's protrayal was so perfect and beautiful... a innocent orphanage girl who is going to step out from the shade of her mother dorothy's love...loved it a lot😳

hmmm this mr sighaniya looked.. fishy..😛😆

and now someone's followed antu and all of us knows who is he... 😆

Two options for antara... Robin and Raghu... agar antu robin ko choose kar de too...🤣... please guyss no chappal on me for this...😆... mazak ka raraha tha 🤣

will be waitig eagerly for this... aur haan pampy ji... please jaan update karoo...😭😆

and love u... take care my yeri frnd...🤗...

Riyu my darling Yedi ...Jaan ke liye bhi ek banner bana de naaa Peeellleeejj😉

aur haan yeh tere creation ko gali dena bandh kar ...NAhi toh this is not fare yaar ...mat kar aisa ...dukh hota hai ...kinna achha sa intense banner banaya hai ...this is not easy yaar ...praise kiya hai toh maan le yaar ...man se kiya hai ...u know na 😃

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

mujhe baaner nhi nazar aa rha 😭
mindblowing start dear...😃
i truly loved the skill of ur writting..superb , flawless...
glad to read dark FF...
very exciting..!!
plzz update next part soon :))

Originally posted by: ankusanu

what shld i say????
mixed emotions on dis stry.....
As im nt big fan of dark stories 😔...
Bt im big fan of urs pamp 😛...
N rantara ofcourse!!! 😆...
So no second thoughts n had to read it..
n guess ... i seriously loved d freshness in
dis stry 😊... quite different..
grt workk.waiting fr raghus entry..
hope dat viral vl nt be of much prblm 😡...
i knw u vl rock wid dis stry..
👍🏼...
Alld best n update sooon ..hugsss

Originally posted by: pampz

first of all ...OYEEE edit kyun mari ???? tera jo offer tha wo maine dekh liya tha and am gonna grab it no doubt abh tu delete karke jitna bhi bhagne ki koshish kare tera picha apun nahi chodnewalaa ...HAHAHAHHAHA

Riyu my darling Yedi ...Jaan ke liye bhi ek banner bana de naaa Peeellleeejj😉😳

aur haan yeh tere creation ko gali dena bandh kar ...NAhi toh 😡😡😡 this is not fare yaar ...mat kar aisa ...dukh hota hai ...kinna achha sa intense banner banaya hai ...this is not easy yaar ...praise kiya hai toh maan le yaar ...man se kiya hai ...u know na 😃

and yes darling Antu ke samne do option hai ek Robin and dusra Raghu...Antara kise chunegi ...ho saakta hai wo Robin ko hi chune ...han aisa ho sakta hai ...abhi tak toh socha nahi ...par tune socheneme majboor kar diya hai 😆😆😆

am glad tereko starting achha laga inspite of knowing the concept ...haha main yeh nahi soch parahi hun yeh story kitna dark karun ...u know ek tolerance level hoti hai ...woh cross kar jaye toh woh sad ban jati hai readers ke liye and i don wanna do that with my pyari yedis ...

tu bata kya karna chahiye ...need ur views

aur haan main pic bhejti hun Jaan ke liye ...tu aram se fursat se Jaan ka banner bana de PILEEEJJJ😃 mouka mila tereko padeshan karneka ...toh main chodungi nahi ...samjhi ya samjhayun ??????😆

Originally posted by: ifians

ek bat bata tereko saru word bohot pasand hai kya tera banner ke liye ???? if yes then HAAN mereko ek saru sa banner bana de Jaan ke liye ...peeleeejjj LOLLZZZ😆 i wll be sending u some pics 😆 ek baat bata wo main bhul gayi kaise wo laptop wala pics yehan upload karte hain😲

and OFCOURSE YES jaldi se pm kar de tera saru idea ... maine abhi tak kuch socha nahi Robin ya fir Raghu .kise Antu chunegi ...cos agar Robin ko chunti hai toh story will be different and if choses Raghu then obviously story wll be more different ... but i wd love to read ur idea yaar ...TU pm karde ... fir ANtara banke main sochti hun ki kise chunu Robin ya fir RRRaghuuu...LOLLLZZZ

waise GAG ke liye yeh Vampi tounge nikal ke wait kar rahi hai...update dede baba...😆