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miss vampy ji... meri tareef karna bandh karo abb samjhi... 😆... bahut ho gaya... this is ur story and it's going to be remembered for ur beautiful skills of stiry telling... not for my saru sa banner...😡😆
lol okk... ab joo bhi hoo..., dark hoo yaa light hoo mujhe har story pasand hain... and if there is rantara.. no doubt i will read it...😉well it's the first chapter... though i know the concept a bit...😆.. tilll ager to read more... somehow predicted that where the story will move,.. but lets see😆first of al;l wanna tell something...your narration style is utterly beautiful.❤️. that the reader instantly connects with the story...and 2ndly... i loved that this story had soem different genre... it's not like ur other story... so will be interesting to read...😳antara's protrayal was so perfect and beautiful... a innocent orphanage girl who is going to step out from the shade of her mother dorothy's love...loved it a lot😳hmmm this mr sighaniya looked.. fishy..😛😆and now someone's followed antu and all of us knows who is he... 😆Two options for antara... Robin and Raghu... agar antu robin ko choose kar de too...🤣... please guyss no chappal on me for this...😆... mazak ka raraha tha 🤣will be waitig eagerly for this... aur haan pampy ji... please jaan update karoo...😭😆and love u... take care my yeri frnd...🤗...
first of all ...OYEEE edit kyun mari ???? tera jo offer tha wo maine dekh liya tha and am gonna grab it no doubt abh tu delete karke jitna bhi bhagne ki koshish kare tera picha apun nahi chodnewalaa ...HAHAHAHHAHA
Riyu my darling Yedi ...Jaan ke liye bhi ek banner bana de naaa Peeellleeejj😉
aur haan yeh tere creation ko gali dena bandh kar ...NAhi toh 
this is not fare yaar ...mat kar aisa ...dukh hota hai ...kinna achha sa intense banner banaya hai ...this is not easy yaar ...praise kiya hai toh maan le yaar ...man se kiya hai ...u know na 😃
this is not fare yaar ...mat kar aisa ...dukh hota hai ...kinna achha sa intense banner banaya hai ...this is not easy yaar ...praise kiya hai toh maan le yaar ...man se kiya hai ...u know na 😃and yes darling Antu ke samne do option hai ek Robin and dusra Raghu...Antara kise chunegi ...ho saakta hai wo Robin ko hi chune ...han aisa ho sakta hai ...abhi tak toh socha nahi ...par tune socheneme majboor kar diya hai 😆😆😆
am glad tereko starting achha laga inspite of knowing the concept ...haha main yeh nahi soch parahi hun yeh story kitna dark karun ...u know ek tolerance level hoti hai ...woh cross kar jaye toh woh sad ban jati hai readers ke liye and i don wanna do that with my pyari yedis ...
tu bata kya karna chahiye ...need ur views
aur haan main pic bhejti hun Jaan ke liye ...tu aram se fursat se Jaan ka banner bana de PILEEEJJJ😃 mouka mila tereko padeshan karneka ...toh main chodungi nahi ...samjhi ya samjhayun ??????😆
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