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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

sarat bose's all story are so emotional... and some of them are so tragedic..😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
Waah kya breakfast banaya raghu ne...
Bilkul raghu bhai style...
But dm...?????
Rantara ki life fir se koi problem aa rahi hai kya...???
Yaar aisa mat karna...Please...
But this was very lovely update...riaaa...


Meri aankhon ke jaadu se tum nawakif ho miss call,
Me usse pagal kar deta hu jiss pe muje pyaar aa jaye...!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 65

Near the midnight, at a village of Satara dist...

A man moved inside the cottage situated at a very lonely place near the forest area of West Ghat Mountains. As he was going to enter another man came and stopped him.

"Andar kahe jaa raha hain... idhar entry lena mana hain..." the man said holding the gun which was tucked to his jeans.

"Jagga ne bheja hain apun ko... usne kahan bahut pakka khabar hain mai ko bata ne ka hain..." the visitor said.

"jagga ne bhaja hain?!! woo khud kyun nahin ayya?!" the 2nd man asked.

"Arey woo kissi loche mein fas gaya... suna hain police unhe dhoond rahe hain. Par unhone yee letter diya hain... kahan kii issey dekhte hi aap logon ko yakeen ho jayega kii apun ko jagga bhai ne bheja hain.." the visitor handed over the later and the guard read that.

"Hmm... likhayi too jagga bhai ki hii hain... parr.. ek min ruk... billa... ee billa..." the guard called someone and another man came outside with a rifle in his hand.

"Nazar rakh is pee... apun kuch der baad atta hain..." the guard said. Billa nodded and the guard moved inside the cottage.

For some one month, Daya naik was hiding in that unknown village of Satara with some of her man. Inspector madhvan and police dept were searching for her like dogs on those days. But they didn't know that it was not so easy to catch daya naik.

But she was not enjoying a bit fooling police and running around here and there. How miserable the situation changed for her. There was a time when the whole pune city was afraid about her power, her possession. But at last, she had turned into nothing but a criminal who was running away and hiding herself from police. People was afraid even to take her name, they wouldn't dare to lay a finger on her but everything was changed. She got to know every news that how inspector madhvan was crashing the whole Pune underworld and she knew who was helping him out. Her very own faithful servant who worked for her all those years without making a sound against her! Daya mai greeted her teeth in frustration looking towards the wall of that partially dark room light up with a dim low power bulb. The darkness had became her companion for all those days. "Astin ka saap nikla yee raghu... kabhi sapne mein bhi hi nahi sochi thi kii yee ekdin mere hi khilap khara hoga.." daya mai said with disgusting voice, "Aur yee sab huya hain uss larki ki wajah se..." daya mai's voice drenched with poison. She still remembered the first encounter with antara in her own b'day. she knew that the girl was strong gut but that gut had became her headache. "Chorungi nahin main tumhe Antara Kaul!! Aaj meri iss halat ke zimeddar sirf tum hoo.. bhagori ban ke rakh diya hain tumne mujhe... Meri sab se bharosemand piyade ko chin liya tumne mujhse. Joo larka bina ek shabd ke mere haan mein haan milata raha itne saal... woo hi larka aaj humare khilap khara hain police ke sath... sab tumhari wajah se... pata nahin kaun se par diye tumne uss ke kaan mein... mati hii mari gayi uska.." Dm fumed angrily. "Mai..." the guard entered inside the room. "Haan bol Mohan... abb kahan kaun si garbar huyi hain?!!" Dm asked in irritation. "Mai... bahar ek admi aa kee khara hain... kahe raha hain ki jagga bhai ne bheja hain.. apun nee andar aa ne nahin diya... kya karoon?!" Mohan asked. "Jagga khud kyun nahin ayya?!!" DM asked. "Woo uss admi ne kahan jagga bhai kissi loche mein fass gaya hain... iss liye unhone yee chithhi bheja hain aap ke liye.. taa kii aap ko yakeen hoo jayein kii yee unka hii admi hain.." Mohan said and handed her that letter. Dm read the letter and told Mohan to bring that man. Mohan went outside. "Raghunath koo main zaroor saza doongi... par sab se pahele main tujhse apna hisab barabar karungi antara... bas ek baar pata chal jayein kii duniya kee kis kone mein chupi huyi hain tu... Fir tujhe aisi maut doongi ki maut ki bhi rooh kanp uthey..." DM's voice drenched with poison and eyes flared like a demon. She knew that her riyasat had almost crashed and anytime she would be caught red handed by police. But she was not the person who was going to bow down soon. At least not before destroying the two persons who made her life hell, Raghu and Antara! Mohan entered with the man inside. Dm frowned as she saw that unknown man. "Tujhe too kabhi maine Jagga ke sath nahin dekha.." She said. "Woo mai... apun naya hain iss line mein..." The man said. "Hmmm... bata jagga ne kaun sa sandesha bheja hain tere hatho... uss ke apne mooh se too kabhi koi achi khabar nahin nikalta.. ab dusre ke mooh se sayad kuch pata chal jayein." Dm said with an disappointing sigh. "haan woo... mai raghu bhai abhi aap ke ayi ke gaon mein hain..." he said. "Tab se bas yahin khabar sunti aa rahi hoon.. Raghunath Pune mein hain... kabhi pune main... kabhi ayi ke gaon mein... kaam ki khabar too kuch deta hi nahin yee jagga.. iss khat mein likha hain kii tere pass koi pakki khabar hain... yee hain tea pakki khabar?!" DM said with utter disgust. "par aap nee hi too jagga bhai koo kahan tha ki raghubhai ke pal pal ki khabar aap ko dete rahein.." the man said. "Iss jagga ko kab akal ayegi?! Kaun si khabar jarrori hain aur kaun si zaroori nahin hain yee bhi ussey samjhana parega.." DM stroke his head. "Antara kaa kuch pata laga?!" She asked. The man nodded in no. Dm feasted her palm. "Humein uss larki koo raghu se pahele dhoondna parega. Hukkum ka ekka hain woo larki.. ek baar hath mein aa gayi too raghunath bhi... Humein sab se pahele woo antara chahiye.. raghunath nahin!!" DM smiled cunningly. She didn't notice that the visitor took out his mobile in between and massaged someone. Suddenly DM's phone rang. She took her phone and saw Jagga's name flashing on the screen. "Ab isne phone kyun kiya..." DM said in irritation and picked up the phone.

"Haan jagga...bol!!" DM said.
"Mai aap ko kuch bata naa tha raghu ke barein mein..." Jagga said from other side.

"Haan pata haain raghu ayi ke gaon mein hain..." DM said with irritation.

"Aap ke kaise pata chala mai?!!" Jagga was surprised.

"Kyun?!! Tune iss admi koo joo bheja hain mere adde pe... ussi nee too bataya..." DM said.

"mai apun ne too kissi koo nahin bheja..." Jagga's confused voice roamed from the other side.

"KYA?!!!" DM's jaw dropped in amusement. She already sensed the danger and looked towards the man. She cut the phone quickly and looked towards the cunning smile of that unknown visitor. "Kaun hain tuu?!!..." DM screamed. At that moment two of their guards rushed inside the room.

"Mai... Police ke log... Idharhich aa rahe hain... Zyada door bhi nahin hain yahan se..." One of them said in single breath giving DM another doze of shock. She looked towards the unknown visitor.

"Your game is over Daya Naik..." The guy said in clear cut English translation at last leaving his rugged language. Mohan and those other guards tried to catch that man but he quickly took out the gun and pointed towards them. "Yahan see koi bhi hilne ki koshis mat karna..." he said. Mohan tried to make a secret move but at that moment the gun in the hand of that stranger made an ear deafening sound and Mohan jumped as the bullet hit right in front of his feet. DM looked startled for a while. It took some moment for her to hold herself. She thoroughly observed the face of that stranger and smirked at last. "Inspector Madhvan!!... Mujhe pahele hii pahechan jana chahiye tha..." DM said with cunning smile. Inspector Madhvan let out his false beards, mustache and the mole at his chicks. his total feature became visible to Daya Mai. "Too aap ne humein pahechan liya Daya Naik... bare dino se aap ko tallas rahe the... kahete hain aise dhoond ne se bhagwan bhi mil jatein hain... par aapko dhund ne meein bahut takleef huyi..." Inspector madhvan said. "Inspector madhvan... Daya mai koo pakarna itna bhi asan nahin haain jitna aap sochte hoo..." DM said and suddenly someone threw a can inside the room and it hit the floor between madhvan and DM. At that instant dense smoke came out from that metallic can and filled up the room. Inspector madhvan's eyes became blurred and he quickly covered his face with wet hanky. He tried to detect DM in the smoke but he couldn't. He understood that they were ready for that situation. He heard the sound of police jeep and also heard some footstep going away. He tried to follow them but the smoke didnlt allow him. At last when the smoke was cleared and all of the forces entered inside the room there was not a single sign of DM and those guards. Police scattered on the place. They could catch some of her men who were trying to run away but they couldn't find DM anywhere near the place. Madhvan understood that he again missed a golden chance.

Next day morning, at ajji's village,

"Antara yee sab kar ne ki kya zarurat hain. Pet se hain tu aur subha sbha hii kaam suru kar diya..." Ajji said while doing her cooking stuffs. Both ajji and antara was in kitchen. Antara was letting out the the green peas from its green cover. "Arey ajji.. Pregnant hone ka matlab yee nahin kii main sara din apne kamre mein baithi rahoon. Waiey bhi abhi too bas mera early stage chal raha hain... Maine momma koo bhi dekha hain aur pappa bhi kahete the ki aise waqt mein chote mote kaam karna health ke liye bhi acha hain." Antara said. "Par tu too pura din bas kaam hi karti raheti hain!! Mujhe teri dek bhal karna chahiye aur upar se tuu mera dekhbhal kar rahi hain." Ajji said. "Ajji aise mat kahiye... aap log itna khayal rakh rahe hoo mera... Humesha kisis bhi cheezon ki takleeef nahin hone dete. Kya main badle mein itna nahin kar sakti." Antara said. "Hmm chal... thik hain agar tera man kare too main tujhe nahin rokungi... par uss yede koo pata chal gaya kii tuu yee sab kar raha hain too mere koo mat kahene aa naa." Ajji said winking. "Usski bata too chor hi doo ajji.." antara said making a face, "uska bas chale naa too mujhe bed se hilne hi naa de... main samjhati hoon ki mujhe koi takleef nahin hoti fir bhi maan ne ko taiyar hi nahin!" Antara said with a sigh. Ajji giggled, "Kahan hain yeda?! Abhi tak utha nahin kya?!" she asked. "Haan ajji. So raha hain abhi issi liye too shanti se aap ke sath yahan kaam kar paa rahi hoon. Warna abhi upar se..." antara couldn't finish her word as the loud scream reached their ear. "OYE MISSCALL!!!".

"Chalo bulawa aa gaya.." ajji said giggling hard. "Main abhi ayyi..." antara said while going out from kitchen. "Siri o pe samhalke chalna..." she heard ajji's voice as she moved up. Carefully stepping on the stairs she moved at the 1st floor and came inside their room. Raghu was yanking fully when she entered inside the room. As she entered inside the room with a happy grin, raghu stopped at midway and looked towards her with a frown. Antara understood that she had to face his bombarding of questions as he didn't get her at his side after opening his eyes. Just one week had been passed after they came at ajji's village and he was becoming so so possessive about her and their unborn baby that he was not ready to leave her for a single moment. So she became ready with a deep breath

"Kahan gayi thi?!!" It was raghu's very first question as usual.

"Woo... kitchen mein thi ajji koo breakfast bana ne mein help kar rahi thi... tum kab nind se uthey?! " she asked to divert the topic. His frown increased.

"tu fir se sirriya char rahi thi?!!..." his voice rose a bit.

"Woo ajji akeli thi aur kaka bhi ghar pe nahin tha. Umar hoo gayi hain unki akele ghar ka sara kaam kaise samhal payengi?! Aur upar se hum bhi hain." She tried to explain but he was not at all ready to listen and his hard voice stopped her.

"Oye bakbak bandh kar... kaka nahin hain too kya huya?!... Woo chachi hain, manjari hain.. itne sare logon ke rahete tujhe hii jana tha.. siriyan charte time chakkar atta hain tujhe... tune khud kahan tha mere koo.. tu baat kyun nahin maan ti hain?!! agar kuch ulta sidha hoo jayein too?!" His concern flickered in between his scolds.

"Arey, Chachi, manjari... woo sab maheman hain yahan.. hum unhe kaam karne ke liye kaise bol sakte hain.." Antara said. "Mehmaan kab se ban gaye yee log?! Kahe too rahe the kii tera dekhbhal karne ke liye iss ghar mein ruke hain... too yee free ki maheman-nawzi kab se lene suru kar di inn login ne?!"he said making a face.

"Raghu aisa nahin kahete. Kya sochengey woo log?! Chachi ghar ki safayi kar rahi hain aur manjari koo uske husband nee bulaya hain.. ajji kitchen mein akeli thi too socha main unki madad kar doon... aur kuch nahin.." she explained. Still he was seating at the bed making an angry face like a stubborn child. "Acha baba.. thik hain. agar itna hii bura lagta hain too sorry.. main aaj ke baad koi kaam nahin karungi... abb khus?" antara said.

"pakka?!!" he asked frowning.

"Haan pakka!! Chalo abb utro aur jaldi se fresh hoo jao..." Antara took his towel and moved near the bed. She stretched the tpwel towards him. A sarcastic smile flickered on raghu's lips and he dragged her closer pulling by her waist. "Raghu!.." Antara rolled her eyes as he naughtily rubbed his face on her belly. "Baby kaisa hain?!!" he asked looking at her face resting his chin on her belly. His hands were steal wrapped around her waist. Antara let out her gentle beautiful smile and ruffled his hairs saying that, "Baby thik hain... aur pappa koo jaldi jaldi uth ne koo kahe raaha hain...". "Hmm..." raghu buzzed rubbing his rough stubbles against her tummy. "raghu.. nahin... gudgudi!!" antara laughed heavily and wiggled in his strong hold. "Abey yaar... yee teri gudgudi naa apun ki dushman ban re laa hain... Aaj kaal apun tujhe cchune jata hain aaur tere koo gudgudi atti hain.." He said and snuggled more naughtily through the revealed skin of her waist sliding apart her saree. "Raghu..." her voice chocked again in ticklish sensation and she giggled hard. Raghu pressed his lips on her delicate navel leaving warm pleasant sensation which leaped her heart. she closed her eyes and sighed heavily. "Waisey... misscaall.. tujeh kyaa lagt hain.. Apna caller tune laarka hoga yaa larki.." he asked. "Larka hoo yaa larki... par uska naam caller tune nahin hoga... kya naam rakha hain bache ka.. Caller Tune!!!" she said angrily and moved out of his hold throwing the towel angrily on his face. Raghu removed the towel from his face and said, "Abey kya mast naam rakha hain apun ne.. kitna soch samajh ke nikala haain...Zara bata... aise naam sun ne koo milta hain aaj kaal..." Raghu said jumping out of bed and at that moment his phone rang. "Abey ab kaun hain?!!" Raghu picked up the phone and was startled to c inspector madhvan's name flashing on the screen. He picked up the phone. "Hello Raghu?!!.." inspector madhvan said in questioning tone. "Haan bol..." raghu said scratching his head. "Ek buri khabar hain... kaal raat koo satara kee ek gaaon mein Daya Naik kaa pata mila tha humein.. Pakar ne bhi gaye the hum log... Par last moment mein bhag gayi woo..." Inspector said. Raghu's face became hard as he heard the news. "Arey karte kya hoo aap log... Apun ne pahele hi kahan tha... Lomri se bhi chalak hain woo aurat.. naak ke niche se nikaal jayegi par kissi koo pata nahin chalega.." he said in irritating voice. Madhvan sighed from the other side of phone, "Main jaanti hoon.. galti meri hi hain.. humein aur chaukanna rahena chahiye tha, par uss sey bhi buri ek baat pata chala hain..." Inspector paused for a while. "Kaun si buri baat?!" Raghu asked in anticipation he already sensed something fishy. "Woo... choro main tumse mil ke baat kartaa hoon. Kuch der baad main tumhare ghar mein aa raha hoon!" Madhvaan said and cut the phone. Raghu cut the phone and looked towards antara's worried eyes.

At Pune highway,

Some people were gathered at a place of thee roadside forest. A car came at the spot and parked at a side of road. Jagga came out from the car and moved inside the forest. Soon he reached at the spot where those men were waiting. Jagga saw daya mai under a tree shade. "Mai..." jagga said. DM looked back towards jagga with a hard cunning frown. "Mai.. mai aap thik too hain naa... uss s**a inspector nee aap ko chot too nahi pauchayi?!!" Jagga asked showing fake concern. "Dekh Jagga..." DM said loudly greeting her teeth and shutting him up, "Tera natak dekh ne iss jungle mein nahin aayya hoon main... kaam ki batein kar..." DM said. Jagga gulped and said, "Mai... pata chala hain ki Raghubhai abhi aap lke ayi ke gaon meein hain." Jagga prompted. "woo baat too mujhe khud inspector ne bataya tha. naaya kuch khabar haain too bata." DM fumed. "Mai antara bhi usskee sath hain ussi gaon meein.." jagga said. DM's eyes froze and she looked back to Jagga. His dark orbs were gleaming with sudden evilness. "Too raghu koo antara kaa pata mil gaya.." DM asked in cold voice. His men understood that something was cooking in her head. "Haan mai... aur bhi bari khabar hain... Antara maa baan nee wali hain!! Pet se hain woo.." as jagga said those words the evil signature smirk spread on her face. she silently paced bck and forth for a while. After some moment she looked back to jagga and said, "Ayi ke ghar pe nazar raakh... aur kuch bhi khabar mile too turant humein bata naa..." DM said. "Mai aap fikar mat karo... apun ne already udhar apne log bhej diya hain joo udhar ki pal pal ki khabar de rahi hain." Jagga said. "Chalo.. zindagi mein paheli baar kuch dhang ka kaam tune kiya hain jagga. Ab bas mauke kaa tallas karna parega. Ab too raghunath koo hum poorri tarah se barbaad kar payengey. Jab usske samne uss ki pyari antaara aur uske hone wale bache ki laass pari rahegi... Tab pata chalega uss ko ki Daya Mai ko daga dene kaa kya anjaam hota hain." DM looked towards the gun which was in her grasp. She let out the barell and checked the bullets.

At ajji's house in village,

"Kya... woo lomri Antara ke piche..." Raghu's frustrated loud voice reflected on the wall as inspector maadhvan said abput DM's intention n to harm antara. Antara was also there seating at raghu's side. "haan raghu... Maine khud ussey kahete huye suna hain.. kii woo sab se pahele antara ko target kaarna chahti hain." Madhvaan said with low voice. "S**i..." Raghu scratched his hair in frustration. He looked towards antara who was seating at her side with pale face. Her eyes were wide in fear and she was just holding her tummy and caressing it. Antara was not at all afraid about her own life. She was ll worried about her unborn baby. If something happened to that innocent life who didn't even see the light yet, how would she would be able to survive. She felt raghu's firm grip on her other hand. She looked up to his concerned eyes. Raghu blinked silently to assure her that he was there and he wouldn't let anything happen to her and their baby. Antara sighed and assured him with her eyes that she was okk. Raghu moved back to madhvan.

"Par yee S**I lomri miss call ke piche kyun par gayi?! Isne kya bigara hain uska?! Uski dushmaani too mere se hain!" Raghu asked.

"Tum abhi nahin samjhe raghu?!! Unki tabahi ka suruwat to antara ne hi ki hain. Kahete hain naa suraj sirf ek choti si roshni hi kafi hoti hain pure andhere koo door karne ke liye kaffi hoti hain.. yahan bhi bilkul aise hi huya..." inspector madhvan sighed, "Apne illegal works aur business se joo paisa aur rutwa daya mai nee baanaya tha... itne dino tak apne bure kaam se joo riyasat aaj unhone khara kiya... antara kii ek kadam nee unki itne dino kii mahenat pani mein fir diya.. tabah kar diya unko.. yee mat bhulo kii agar antra uss raat koo woo gun humare wahan nahin lati too Daya Naik kaa har gunah kannon ke nazro se chupa hi raheta..lekin sab se bari baat too yeeh huya kii jis ke kandhe pe paon rakh ke Daya naik apna takat dikha rahe the... unki sab se bari hathiyar yani kit um raghu... ussi koo daya mai ke hathon se chin liya Antara ne... Unki sari taabahi ki suriwat too antara ne hi kiya hain... too aise mein too badla lena zayaz hain unn ke jaisi aurat ke liye.." Madhvan finished with a sigh. "Ek bar hath laga ke too dekhe... Kaat dalega..." raghu's anger was rising at it's peak with inspector madhvan's every words. "Raghu shant ho jaoo.. khun kharabe se kuch nahin hone wala.." Antara said from trying to calm him down. "Arey nahi baitha jata shanty se.. Uss lomri koo too.." his eyes were hell mad. "Raghu shant hoo jaoo.. Antara sahi kahe rahi hain.. gusse mein aa kar kuch nahin hone wala... humein jaal bichana hoga dayaa mai koo pakar ne ke liye... isske siwaa ab aur koi chara nahin hain unhe paker ne ke liye..." Madhavan said with a thoughtful face. "Too joo kaarna hain kar na.. Idhar pair pe pair rakh ke baitha kyun hain?!!" he said making a face. "Iss liye too tumhare pass ayya hoon raghu.. latest news ke hisab se... daya naik satara see pune ki taraf gayi hain..Tum jaan te hoo, pune mein aisi kaun si jagah hain jahan daya naik chuo sakti hain?!" Madhvan asked. "Do teen jagah too hain udhar.." raghu said wandering. "Hmm!! Raghu ek aur request hain... kya iss baar tum aur tumhare admi humare sath chal sakte hoo?! Kyunki Daya Naik ko tumse bhehtar aur koi nahin jan ta... I am sure ki agar tumhari thori si madad mil jati too daya naik iss baar nahin bhag payegi.." Madhvaan said. "Abey ee.. tera dimag pe locha hain kya?!!... Abhi abhi tune kahan kii uss churail kii kali nazar par gayi hain misscall pe.. aur tu kahe raha hain kii apun issey idhar akela chor ke pune chalke jayein ussey pakar ne.. tab too ussey free ka pauv mil jayega.. Apun idhar antara koo chor ke nahin jaa sakta.." he said in firm voice. "Raghu.. meri baat suno.." antara said from side. "Apun koo teri batein nahin sun nii misscall.. kyun kii apun koo pata hain tuu kya bolne wali hain.. Dekh... apun nahin jayega idhar tere koo chorke.. ek min ke liye bhi nahin.. aur yee full and final ho gaya hain!" he said firmly and stubbornly looking towards antara. "Meri baat too sun loo paheele..." she said urging. But he was all silent. Antara sighed and said, "Ek kaam karte hain.. Tum pune jaon... aur main bhi tumhare sath mein chalti hoon.." Antara said. "Abeey akal ghass khane gayi hain teri... woo Daya mai pune mein nazar ayii hain aur apun tujhe udhar le jaa kar us lomri ka kaam assan kar de?!! Tune gadha samjha hain mere ko.." raghu said as his frustration reached at it's peak. Antara sighed again. "Too kab tak aise bhagte rahengey raghu.. Daya Naik jab tak giraftar nahin hongi, musibat humara picha nahin chorega.. Main nahin chahti kii meri baby duniya mein aa ne ke baad woo aisi life lead karein jismein har waqt ussey khatre ka ahesaas hoo.. lekin agar humari thori si risk lene se agar daya mai arrest ho sake too sari musibatein tal jayegi... aur daya mai koo sirf tum pakar sakte hoo..." She said looking firmly towards raghu's silent face. "please raghu humare baby ke liye itna risk humein lena hi parega.." she said urging. Raghu lifted his eyes and looked towards madhvan. "Thik hain... apun jane keliye ready hain.. par antara idhar hich rahegi.. pune le jaa ke apun issey aur mussibat mein nahin dal sakte.." He said and looked towards antara, "Aur tuu sun... iss ghar se bahar mat nikalna.. aapun ke admilog ki security lagi huyi hain idhaar... samjhi.. jabtak ghar ke andar rahegi tuu kissi se bhi danger nahin hoga.. apun machmach koo bhi bol daal te hain ki idhar aa jayein.." raghu said and picked the phone. Antara nodded in silence. "Thik hain too kal hum sab pune ki liye rawana hingey." Madhvan said.

Ajji's new maid sarla, who was listening to their conversation from the door outside, left the place silently. She slowly came out from the cottage and reached at a quiet corner of outside lawn. Sarla came behind a tree aand looked everywhere with cautious eyes. She let out a coasty mobile and dialed a number. Surprisingly it looked quite odd for a maid like her to afford such cell phone. She dialed a number.

"Hello... sahab.. main sarla.." she said.

"Haan bol..." the harsh sound came from the other side of phone.

"Sahab woo tazi tazi khabar hain.. kaal woo raghubhai pune jaa rahe hain woo police ke sath.. daya mai kii talash karne." Sarla said.

"Kaal.. accha?!! Tujhe pata hain thik se?!" the voice asked.

"haan sahab.. par sath mein uss antara kii woo.. security ki sari bandobast karke jaa raha hain... pura ghar ghira huya hain unke admion se.. bahut mushkil se phone kar rahi hoon.." sarala said looking here and there.

"Thik hain.. baad mein aur kuch khabar mile too phone karna.." saying this he ut the phone. Sarala looked at front and saw ramu kaka coming to that way.

"Arey sarla idhar kya kar rahi hain tum?!" kaka asked.

"woo kakka sukhe patte lene ayi thi... ghar le jana hain... aag jala nee kee liye.." sarala said quickly.

"Hmm thik hain!" Kaka said and moved forward. Sarla quickly took a breath and swapped out of the place.

The person with whom sarla was talking was none other than but Jagga. He appointed sarla to take the news from the house.

"Mai khabar mil gayi.. Raghubhai kaal pune jaa rahe hain... Aap ko pakarne.." Jagga said DM

DM leaned on the tree with a cunning smile. "Chalo... Sara plan ke hisab se hi chal raha hain. Akhir raghunath koo jana hii par raha hain antara koo chor ke. Yahin mauka hain humare liye!!" DM said.

"Par Raghubhai nee woo.. antara ki security kaa pura bandobast kar ke jaa raha hain.. ek makhii bhi ghar ke andar nahin ghus sakta unke nazro se bachke...aap too jaan te hain... humare gang ke sare ke sare pauche huye log ab raghubhai ke taraf chale gaye hain.. tadat mein bahut jyada hain woo humse..." Jagga said in hesitation.

"Hmm.. too matlab mayna koo pinjre se bahar lana parega... taa ki shikari usska shikar kar sake.." DM said.

Next day,

"Misscall... Woo.. samhalke rehena haan..." raghu said holding antara's both hands. They were standing at the doorstep facing each other. Raghu was about to leave to puna with inspector madhvan. Antara understood looking at his facial expression that he was not at all ready to leave her there.

"Haan.. tum bhi samhalke rahena... Aur meri fikar mat karna thik hain..." she said in assurance and let out a dry small smile. She didn't want to show but she was also hell worried for him.

Raghu gave her a warm tight hug antara also hugged him back. both of them hid their worry in each other's embrace.

They lived the moment for a prolonged time. Both of them didn't want to let go each other. But they also knew that it was required. Unwillingly they broke the hug. Raghu cupped her face eagerly.

"Yaad hain naa kya kahan tha?!... ghar se bahar nahin nikalna.. apun bas yun palak jhapkte hi wapas aa jayega.." Raghu said looking deeply to her eyes. She nodded silently. "Der hoo rahi hain... ab tumhe jana chahiye..." she said lowering her gaze. He rubbed her tummy and gave his lovable caress to their unborn child. Then giving a prolonged kiss on her forehead raghu moved towards the door. While stepping out from the house, he again looked back and found antara steal looking towards him worriedly. As their eyes met, antara hid her worried expression and waved her hand giving a gentle smile. Raghu also smiled and left waving his hand.

Ps: giyss i know it was not as good as you hope for. acctually the chapter became quite long so parted it😆 also it has became emotional atyachar. i am posting next chapter as soon as possible... jhel loo iss bakwas koo abb waisey bhi ek aur chaoter ke baad story going to end..😆

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unres !!
Yaar I can't believe this was the second last chapter of this story..
Im getting emotional now...
After Sajda, I got emotionally attached to this..
And now this is also getting over..
Tera Sukoon Ya Junoon is my only hope now..
Coming to the update,
Wow !!! From our possessive Raghu to all that drama near Satara distict and Pune..
It was really gripping..
I can't even tell you to update soon because if you update soon, the story will come to an end,,,
Thank you for this update ...
-Prerna
Edited by abhiyaswaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res 😆
Unres 😉

OMG what an update riyu
Ab end zyada dur nahi hai
But koi bat nahi dusri stories hai nah 😆

Yeh inspector bhi nah ache se tayari kar key janna chaheye afterall DM ko jo pakafne ja rehe thy 😡
Unhe kya laga itni asani se hath ajayegi bohat teez or chalak hai woh Raghu bolta hai lomri bilkul waise hi 😆
Awww Raghu ko Antu se dur jana par raha hai 😭
Or Raghu key lakh mana karne key baad bhi hamari heroine Antara bahar zaroor jayegi 😆
After all Yedi no 1 jo hai 😆
Continuee soon
Is bar naldi update karna warna danda 😃 😆
Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hayeee ri amazing update
urghhh dm hate her soo much😡
rantara hayeee
loved the update
pls cont asap
Edited by honeybees22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chptr 64:
Antu pe side effects ho rahe hain...i mean symptoms dikh rahe hain...
...oye-hoye kya description hain...Antu nihaarofying Raghu...😳...😆ab hum sab is mein expert ho gaye hain...lekin phir bhi...kam hi lagta hai...aur kabhi zyaada nahi lagega...😉...😳...☺️...😃...
yeh Antara bhi na......karna kuch aur chahthi hai...aur ho kuch aur hi jaata hai...Raghu ko jagaana nahi chahti lekin ho gaya...😆...😃...
Antu toh pehle si hi embaressed...upar se Raghu usse aur bhi laal tamatar bana raha hai...😳...☺️...😃...
riyaaa...maarne ka iraada hai kya...d way u have explained it...👏...Antu feeling Hungry...Raghu getting playful...tickling...😳...👍🏼...(...mujhe bhi gudgudi ho rahi hai...😛...😆...😳...)...
...OMG...phir passion building...☺️...sach mein......❤️RaNtara❤️ - a dream come true......😳...
...awww...Raghus' concern in kitchen scene......😳...☺️...
...Raghu...jab pehli baar kitchen mein kaam karte hain...toh humesha experienced log ki sunni chahiye...😊...😆...
oh... atlast dey reached n happily settled in d village...😊...👍🏼...
Inspector madhavan ko bhi Aaji k gaon le aayi...wah wah ria ji...u never fail to amaze ur readers...👏...👍🏼...
ok...toh Dayan ki baari aanewaali hai...🤢...

..ohhh...n yeh tumhara P.S waala note......
...waiting for d next one...jappiya n pappiyan...🤗...❤️...😎...

Edited by RaNtara4vr - 11 years ago
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Riyu...

I loved it!
I loved it!
I loved it!

It was an amazing update.😃

well I must say the whole night scene was beautifully penned down...It felt like I'm actually watching it...It was too good.👏👏👏

I could see three beautiful shades of Raghu like we've different phases in a day[dawn-noon-dusk]...every phase has its importance...every role that Raghu is playing has its own value n importance...From being a crazy lover to caring husband to wonderful father to his unborn child, he's trying to fit in every role too perfectly.

Those light caresses towards each other made the night more mesmerizing.It really looked like a dream...

Awww...choc-bar...huh?..now even I'm hungry😆😆😆...It was such a cute moment...so nice of Raghu to take care of Antara's minute needs too.😳

Lovely moments and rituals were created by you on arrival to Ajji's village.

Again Inspector Madhvan arrived...huh!...hamesha galat time par entry 😆...So they are suspecting DM in Satara which is very near to Ajji's village..Omg...Omg...it looks like Danger is here.😲

I just hope it doesn't turn out to be an ugly fight with Antara being at a safer distance and away from the clutches of DM.

waiting for the next update...

I know like us even you are quiet emotional now as GAG is coming to end soon... 😭
But we want an Bang on update + ending+ Epilogue+GAG season 2 +...+...+...etc...etc...etc 😆.kuch jayada toh nahi mang liya???😆

do update soon...let GAG rock it 😃


love ya...mwah...😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
updated above😊
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update Ria 😳
DM escaped 😡
Sarala DM's spy 😡 Antu again in danger
Loved d update
Story going 2 end 😕
Continue soon

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