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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#451

Res 😆

Unres 😃

Sorry riyu itna late unres kar rehe thy busy thy yar

Coming back to the update I love it 😉

Meine tujhse keha tha Raghu key mana karne key bawajood yedi bahar jayegi but aj yedi ne thori aqal use ki or Raghu ko bhi bata diya 😆😆

God yar mein soch bhi nahi DM aisa socheygy Antara ka abortion woh bhi jab mein conscious hoon I can't imagine in my worst dreams 😭

Thank God yar Raghu sahi time pe pooch gaya warna pata nahi kya hojata

So all is well in the end DM ko jail or Rantara ab azaad hai 😛😛

Cn't wait to read for prologue and jaldi update karna prologue 😃

This one's for my two yedi's riyu and pampz for helping riyu in this update

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#452

Happy ending...

Long update but awesome and superb updet...

And this was not atyachar but it was a treat to read yaar...

100 voly ka zatka dia yaar...

Or wo clinic wala part was fabulous...

Finally tune dm ka band raghu k haatho bajwa hi dia...

Superb ff tha...love it...and love you too...

Tere haath de...kiss karna hai...love youuu riaaa...

Dhoondengi nazar to mill jayenge bohot tum jaise...,

Per muje tumhare jaiso se nahi sirf Tum se Mohobbat hai...!!!!!

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#453

RES FOR THE PROLOG...😳THE VERY LAST CHAPTER OF GAG...😃

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#454

Riaaa... what to say yaar ... you gave me credit for the idea of Dm aborting Antu in clinic ...it was just a one line idea ...and dear the attack scene that u hv drawn hv literally blew my sense off...OMG the cruelty and the terror was reaching at its peak ... i was scared to death thinking of Antu's condition ...OMG OMG OMG

and the suspence and thrill that u hv drawn i was just sticking my eyes on my laptop allmost my nose poked the screen in tension ...hahah ... now am smiling with a relief u know as our hero did a grand entry at the right crucial time and saved Antu ...sigh ...ufff what a relief 😃

i loved how u portrayed Antu's fear about their baby only not about her ...she just forgot herself ..she was only scared n worried hell for her baby ... it ws such a realistic and true scene ...loved it so much

the hardcore cruelty and terror of DM was perfect in the story at this phase ...i hope now the sunshine will not fade in Rantaras life ...that was such a bliss

Ria ...fantabulous update cant give proper adjective to ur writeup ...going thru loss of words syndrome ...😆

luv uluv u luv u 😆

udate the next part sooon yaar ...

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#455

Chapter 55 - Rantara's love making was out of the world. Antara submitted herself to Raghu. Antara was kidnapped? Iss Daya Mai ki tho😡😡😡 Raghu jaldi aaja

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Chapter 56 - Raghu ko nashe ki haalath mein bhi sab yaad tha😆😆😆 Raghu samajh gaya ki Antara ki kidnapping mein daya mai ki haath hain

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#457

Chapter 61 - After so many chapters this is the best chapter. Raghu found out Antara👏👏👏

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#458

Chapter 62 - Raghu found out that Antara is pregnant. Both were happy. Raghu talking to his unborn baby. That was so cute.😆😆😆

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#459

Chapter 63 - Besharam Raghu we love you. Raghu ne Doctor se vo sab poocha😳😳😳 Antara was hell embarassed. Romance was too good.

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#460

Very beautiful update. Antara went to doctor's clinic & that was a trap. Raghu & Inspector came back in right time. Thank God Antara, Raghu & Baby are ok.

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