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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

will try my best...
updating part by part... checkout the last page of OS thread๐Ÿ˜Š

ok.. going to check it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Riyuu riyu riyu

Kya bolo yar I am gonna miss GAG alot yar ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Arey niki lote nahin yaar... ajja jhappi le le..๐Ÿค—
Starting from chapter 1 till the end you did a fantastic job yar
Teri jitne tarif karo utne kam hai Rantara meet se ley kar dosti, shadi, judaai, bache everything you describeds was outstanding ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Arey yaar tiu bhi na.๐Ÿ˜†.kya likha hain khud mujhe aaj tak samajh nahin atti..
Hayee after reading prologue I was totally gone seedha Rantara dreamland mein pooch gaye thy their holi encounter sab yad agaya๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Haan i know.. mujhe bhi sab yaad karna para...๐Ÿ˜†
Even itne saalo baad bhi yedi Raghu se sharmaty hai ๐Ÿ˜†
woo too hain... aur antu darling kabhi bhi sharmana nahin choregi..๐Ÿคฃ
But I loved it alot alot alot
Kaha dono har dum larai karty thy or kaha aa poche their journey was outstanding yar
Haan... larte jhagarte pyar ho hi gaya Yeda aur Yedi koo..๐Ÿคฃ
I wish yeh story kabhi khatam nah hoti yar
Yaar i know this is ghisapita dialoige but every story comes to end naa๐Ÿ˜ƒ... and then it makes the way for another new journey๐Ÿ˜‰
Awesome awesome work riyu
Love you for giving such a wonderful story ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
Aww i am flattered๐Ÿ˜ณ
Acha yeh bata tera sukoon ka update kab deygi ??
Please yeh mat bolna key wait tujhe maloom hai nah humse intezaar nahi hota๐Ÿ˜†
I will update that soon babes...๐Ÿ˜‰

Was waiting for ur coments... love you nikki ji...๐Ÿค—
Aur dekh maine tere sare demands poore kiye hain GAG mein... ๐Ÿ˜†
again love u...โค๏ธ
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW Ria...kya blockbuster diya hai aapne...superb...๐Ÿ‘...everything's mind-blowing...๐Ÿ‘...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...

Chptr 65:
Dhamakedaar planning from either sides...๐Ÿ‘...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...
Evilness trying to destroy Goodness n instill destruction everywhere...๐Ÿ˜ณ......n pure souls wanting to restore peace, love n happiness...๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...๐Ÿ˜Š...too good yaar...๐Ÿ‘...โค๏ธ...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...

Chptr 66:
DMs chapter closed forever n ever......๐Ÿฅณ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...ahhh...d clinic scenes were really scary...n disgusting DM devoid of any humaness...๐Ÿ˜ก...Evilness at its peak...๐Ÿคข...
...Wow mindblowing n hair-rising experience...๐Ÿ‘...though was feeling scared... n a little worried...๐Ÿค”...but was totally reassured... wen i kno dat writer ji will bring d HERO in...๐Ÿ˜‰...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...n total "safaaya" of d threats n worries...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...
well executed scenes...๐Ÿ‘...especially clinics...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...n also d one who helped u wid d idea...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...

Epilogue:
Part 1:
Holi...๐Ÿ˜Š...n 4th RaNtara Marriage Anniversary...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...๐Ÿฅณ..."..badhaii ho badhaii..."๐Ÿ˜Š...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...along wid cutie-pie Khushi...๐Ÿ˜ณ...aww loved d whole bonding of everyone...๐Ÿ‘...Ishaan-khushi so cute...โค๏ธ..lovely nok-jhoks...n wen Khushi cried wen Ishu teased her 4 saying "moti"...i too felt like crying...๐Ÿ˜ญ...๐Ÿ˜†...(i kno..silly me...๐Ÿคช...but kya karu...emotions mein beh jaati hoon...aur aap likhti bhi toh ho aisa...k direct feel hota hain...๐Ÿ˜ณ...)...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...n Ishu quickly composed her saying "sorry"...๐Ÿ˜ณ...n den her cutely said "its OK"...๐Ÿ˜ณ...โญ๏ธ...
Haaye......one Big Happy family - d Kauls - Naiks - n Friends...

Part 2:
Justifying d TITLE..."Gun n Guitar"...๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿ˜Š...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...๐Ÿ‘...
d whole journey flashback...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...n den deir "Shararatness"...๐Ÿ˜Š...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...loved it all to d core...โค๏ธ...n in d ending scene u described RaNtara getting lost n entangled in each other...๐Ÿ˜ณ...just like d GnG kept in KM...๐Ÿ‘...symbolic representation...๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...finding completeness in d other...n never letting go of d other...ur soulmate...๐Ÿ˜ณ...Two souls becoming One...Do Dil...Ek Jaan...๐Ÿ˜Š...

beautifully summing it up...๐Ÿ‘...n bringing to a naturally n well-woven destination...๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...


Well... i cant choose wen i feel connected to all d options...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...all i can say is dat...i love all d stories equally โค๏ธ...โค๏ธ...โค๏ธ...n each one has its own aura n uniqueness n beauty...๐Ÿ˜ณ...
will always cherish dem...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...(..n i think...ders no need to tell...๐Ÿ˜‰...๐Ÿ˜Š...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...dat waitng 4 more of RaNtara...n d awesome stories...๐Ÿ˜ณ...d thing - which is eternal...๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿ˜Š...)...
Edited by RaNtara4vr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
forgot to mention abt d banner...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...awesome n brilliant as alwayz...๐Ÿ‘...n colorful...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...(like my comment above...๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ˜‰...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...)... to represent d colourfully filled life dey all r leading......

gosh...my cheeks r aching nw..๐Ÿ˜ณ...due to continuously blushing...๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿ˜†...me so elated...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...๐Ÿ˜†...
...Thank u Ria...thank u - thank u - thank u...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...๐Ÿ˜ณ...
Edited by RaNtara4vr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful ending ๐Ÿ˜›
Loved both parts ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Wonderful banner ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Will miss GAG ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Luv u Ria ๐Ÿค—

Sry fr short n late reply ๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 10 years ago

Omg this is another fav of mine n again read it twice...

There are so many things I like in this stry i,e antu boldness n swt nature , their first encounter๐Ÿ˜Š , all encounters in kashmir , whn thy met aftr yr in mumbai , hw hw care n protect for her ๐Ÿ˜‰, their fighting , their wedding ๐Ÿ˜›, romance ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ โ˜บ๏ธ, separation , reunion aww new member ๐Ÿ˜‰, end of tat evil DM ๐Ÿ˜กand atlast awww khushi is sooo cute ๐Ÿ˜› their complete family moment ws awesome ... happily evr aftr... lovely journey it ws...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

Thank u ria ji for awesome stry ...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

thank u ๐Ÿ˜›

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